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Played Character Zhyan

This character is actively played.
@Ded Jok Probably not worth a tag... Nevertheless, I'm doing it. Moved the age of the guises to the guise doc and added the 'Knightly Code' page to it, also placed it onto a doc. Should I find a typing error or something around that.
 
@DedJok Changed the Dread Empire episode from before Calemberg to after it. To reflect on the chrysant war. Making his way back to Calemberg after a few years, before making his way to Regalia. So just changed the order of "His rethinking".

Might need to add another char to it soon, as I'm currently talking with someone about it, but we will see when I will add it or if it is needed.
 
@DedJok Removed Roguery as I never used it. Added 4 points in Shielding and 8 in Puretek. Physical stat remains unchanged as it already reached the Slizzar cap.
 
Shouldn't that only apply to ancient altalar? Seeing that the normal/modern altalar is one of the sub languages.
 
@DedJok
  • Updated to new format but left the progression traits free for now as I'm waiting for the upcoming knight update before touching that.
  • Aged him up a bit, seeing Slizzar can live a lot longer now.
  • Removed the arcanology packs according to the update
  • Added Breizh as language and a little mentioning of him visiting Kintyr.
 
@Acosmism He was turned into a dragon warden by Gwenyth. Removed puretek combat, as he can't use it anymore and for that added Primal version of Caster Ranged Combat and Fist Combat
 
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Howdy! Everything looks good. I'm going to go ahead and approve this in advance, but I'll ask that you make a minor edit post-approval for clarity's sake:
  • This part: "Zyloslzsvies is a mundane Slizzar" should be adjusted to account for the new Warden status. Otherwise app is perfect!
APPROVED
 
@Yurs tagging since I finally added prog talents. As the knight update I was waiting for seemingly will take some time before it is released and me doubting that it will give him the option to take 2 knight as Bloodcast. So I just accept the sorta dilemma and take the forced 1 Knight and 1 Warrior and spent the third point on my only option which is another warrior as Bloodcast seemingly can't progress when it comes to titles and by that Knight ranks and the talent. (As far as I know)
 
That's fine! I'm not particularly knowledgeable on the Knight update, so if things do wind up changing around feel free to tag again for another Prog Talents swap. Until then this is perfect!

APPROVED
 
@Yurs Completely overhauled aesthetics with the help of the wonderful Zubile, nothing content wise changed. Nevertheless, I would ask to get the approved tag back, please.
 
@Yurs Switched medical science and one fist combat into 2 languages (Zasta and Fordic) as I never used the profs. I think it doesn't need a whole re-review as it is under 10 points but letting you know.
The switch in languages will be icly seen as him recently learning/finishing learning Fordic and picking Zasta back up (as he spoke it before)
 
@Yurs Snake update snake update
I redid a number of things, which will be listed below
  • Changed his name to a Sanskrit one in accordance to the new language. However, he still has Zyloslzvies as a nickname
  • He now is a Devata Slizzar
  • He is now officially old
  • He is now sexless but prefers male pronouns
  • Changed up some of his Faith in core concept. He moved to the new faith Nihsereya but still recognizes other dragons as a way to bring back his own
  • Changed the name of the snake language and the quirky comment next to it
  • Included Devata racials under abilities
  • Changed the appearance a small tad
  • Changed a few things in life story
    • Such as having an Ailor parent in addition to his slizzar one
    • He still has a mentor but she is now a family friend that just showed him the world and occult (however he only became a sorcerer during his depression in the Dread Empire, which he has recovered and cleansed icly from a year now)
    • He still is teaching two (young and lost) slizzars later in his life, but that is mostly to keep consistency with ic things.
    • I'm too lazy to update the long version but I will eventually. So as of now I marked it as outdated
 
@FireFan96 Updated my app and as promised @ you so you can check for knight things.
  • Prof points reworked, one point left as I can't decide
  • Languages reworked in accordance to prof update
  • Added active guises in spoiler
  • Added spoiler for Archon Form, however pending as I still need to make a ticket for specifics however I currently already have one running and don't want to derail from it.
  • Removed progression traits for obvious reasons
 
No issues on my end. We don't know how Bloodcast will look in terms of training (random mentor on the road will be going away), but the Lynmar identity should be fine. In any case, theme is fine for now.
 
@Yurs FINALLY decided how to spend my last point and change some stuff around

- Added Magic point buy
- Added, according to a ticket, his history of being an archon pre cataclysm by the hands of his dragon. (Now he never was a void mage or was infected by anything not primal EVER.)
- I will add dragon shift in the coming days too...
 
@Yurs Unsure if this needs approval but I will mention it anyways.
Changed Purtek to Draconic Adjudicator since Knights now are required to always follow the law. So it would be weird for someone to run around with an illegal puretek (considering the chance of the Belliard Representative approving a known abberant and non unionist is very low)
 
@Yurs Update Update UPDATE TIME

- Added the new Dragonsoul Pack in exchange for dropping Light Shielding, as I barely used the latter.
- Decided to finally add Ritualism seeing how much he is around dragon stuff and worships his dragon.
 
@Caelamus Changed a thing. Just updated the Scholarly point buys.
  • Changed old Volacrum to Deeplore
  • Removed Bentyia for now, since I'm not sure what to invest into, yet. However, the point in Wisdom remains.
  • Rest remains the same
 
@Caelamus Two changes this time
  • Decided to move my one point in strength into magic and bought the Draconic Cleansing Pack pack for it. Since I'm gonna double down on fancy magic now after they can use their magic as a melee weapon.
  • Finally decided on where to put that Wisdom point, which was the Grauwald Wisdom Pack. Probably picking it up in his time in Calemberg but in another shift... since purists. However, it is funny to be a magic guy while being bros with the purists guys, so I picked it.
 
@Caelamus Magic update time
  • Converted old magic packs into Displacing and Casting Spell point packs
  • Chosen magic specials are listed in the abilities section to not clutter the prof section
 
@Caelamus Not sure if it is worth a ping, but a very minor change I wanted to at least notify you for, just in case.
Changed Heat Immune for Lightning Immune when it comes to Spell specials, mostly since it fits better for him to be immune to that while able to control electricity instead of just randomly being immune to heat.
 
Simslp said:
@Caelamus Not sure if it is worth a ping, but a very minor change I wanted to at least notify you for, just in case.
Changed Heat Immune for Lightning Immune when it comes to Spell specials, mostly since it fits better for him to be immune to that while able to control electricity instead of just randomly being immune to heat.
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Ok that's fine.
 
@Caelamus Very minor change again but I feel like I should keep you up to date on stuff like that as my reviewer.
  • Swapped Time Element for Sparkwalking on their Spell Point specials, mainly since I noticed it doesn't make sense for a dragon worshipper to mess with time. So Sparkwalking fits better, as they are able to teleport great distance in progs via the custom kit anyways. So I wanted to be a little gremlin and apply similar aesthetics for Sparkwalking.
 
Simslp said:
@Caelamus Very minor change again but I feel like I should keep you up to date on stuff like that as my reviewer.
  • Swapped Time Element for Sparkwalking on their Spell Point specials, mainly since I noticed it doesn't make sense for a dragon worshipper to mess with time. So Sparkwalking fits better, as they are able to teleport great distance in progs via the custom kit anyways. So I wanted to be a little gremlin and apply similar aesthetics for Sparkwalking.
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Ok, that's fine.
 

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