Approved Sheet Zhyan

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  1. Simslp

    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Ded Jok Probably not worth a tag... Nevertheless, I'm doing it. Moved the age of the guises to the guise doc and added the 'Knightly Code' page to it, also placed it onto a doc. Should I find a typing error or something around that.
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @DedJok Changed the Dread Empire episode from before Calemberg to after it. To reflect on the chrysant war. Making his way back to Calemberg after a few years, before making his way to Regalia. So just changed the order of "His rethinking".

    Might need to add another char to it soon, as I'm currently talking with someone about it, but we will see when I will add it or if it is needed.
     
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    DedJok skilled in ways beyond your feeble understanding Staff Member Lore2

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  4. Simslp

    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @DedJok Removed Roguery as I never used it. Added 4 points in Shielding and 8 in Puretek. Physical stat remains unchanged as it already reached the Slizzar cap.
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @DedJok Fixed the languages according to the new update.
     
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    DedJok skilled in ways beyond your feeble understanding Staff Member Lore2

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    @Simslp You are not able to purchase the Altalar language via linguistics, you would need to buy the 3 sub-languages to get that one for free.
     
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    DedJok skilled in ways beyond your feeble understanding Staff Member Lore2

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    @Simslp Wait nevermind I goobered that. Disregard
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    Shouldn't that only apply to ancient altalar? Seeing that the normal/modern altalar is one of the sub languages.
     
  9. Simslp

    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @DedJok
    • Updated to new format but left the progression traits free for now as I'm waiting for the upcoming knight update before touching that.
    • Aged him up a bit, seeing Slizzar can live a lot longer now.
    • Removed the arcanology packs according to the update
    • Added Breizh as language and a little mentioning of him visiting Kintyr.
     
  10. Acosmism

    Acosmism Sugar Parental Unit Staff Member Lore2

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    Re-approved.
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Acosmism He was turned into a dragon warden by Gwenyth. Removed puretek combat, as he can't use it anymore and for that added Primal version of Caster Ranged Combat and Fist Combat
     
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  12. Yurs

    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    Claimed for staff review! Expect a reply shortly
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    Howdy! Everything looks good. I'm going to go ahead and approve this in advance, but I'll ask that you make a minor edit post-approval for clarity's sake:
    • This part: "Zyloslzsvies is a mundane Slizzar" should be adjusted to account for the new Warden status. Otherwise app is perfect!
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  14. Simslp

    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Yurs tagging since I finally added prog talents. As the knight update I was waiting for seemingly will take some time before it is released and me doubting that it will give him the option to take 2 knight as Bloodcast. So I just accept the sorta dilemma and take the forced 1 Knight and 1 Warrior and spent the third point on my only option which is another warrior as Bloodcast seemingly can't progress when it comes to titles and by that Knight ranks and the talent. (As far as I know)
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    That's fine! I'm not particularly knowledgeable on the Knight update, so if things do wind up changing around feel free to tag again for another Prog Talents swap. Until then this is perfect!

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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Yurs Completely overhauled aesthetics with the help of the wonderful Zubile, nothing content wise changed. Nevertheless, I would ask to get the approved tag back, please.
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    Love the new aesthetics! Very cool looking

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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Yurs Switched medical science and one fist combat into 2 languages (Zasta and Fordic) as I never used the profs. I think it doesn't need a whole re-review as it is under 10 points but letting you know.
    The switch in languages will be icly seen as him recently learning/finishing learning Fordic and picking Zasta back up (as he spoke it before)
     
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    Yurs real life catgirl Staff Member Lore1

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    Remains APPROVED
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Yurs Snake update snake update
    I redid a number of things, which will be listed below
    • Changed his name to a Sanskrit one in accordance to the new language. However, he still has Zyloslzvies as a nickname
    • He now is a Devata Slizzar
    • He is now officially old
    • He is now sexless but prefers male pronouns
    • Changed up some of his Faith in core concept. He moved to the new faith Nihsereya but still recognizes other dragons as a way to bring back his own
    • Changed the name of the snake language and the quirky comment next to it
    • Included Devata racials under abilities
    • Changed the appearance a small tad
    • Changed a few things in life story
      • Such as having an Ailor parent in addition to his slizzar one
      • He still has a mentor but she is now a family friend that just showed him the world and occult (however he only became a sorcerer during his depression in the Dread Empire, which he has recovered and cleansed icly from a year now)
      • He still is teaching two (young and lost) slizzars later in his life, but that is mostly to keep consistency with ic things.
      • I'm too lazy to update the long version but I will eventually. So as of now I marked it as outdated
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @FireFan96 Updated my app and as promised @ you so you can check for knight things.
    • Prof points reworked, one point left as I can't decide
    • Languages reworked in accordance to prof update
    • Added active guises in spoiler
    • Added spoiler for Archon Form, however pending as I still need to make a ticket for specifics however I currently already have one running and don't want to derail from it.
    • Removed progression traits for obvious reasons
     
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    FireFan96 Ghost of the Past Staff Member Lore2
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    No issues on my end. We don't know how Bloodcast will look in terms of training (random mentor on the road will be going away), but the Lynmar identity should be fine. In any case, theme is fine for now.
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Yurs FINALLY decided how to spend my last point and change some stuff around

    - Added Magic point buy
    - Added, according to a ticket, his history of being an archon pre cataclysm by the hands of his dragon. (Now he never was a void mage or was infected by anything not primal EVER.)
    - I will add dragon shift in the coming days too...
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Yurs Unsure if this needs approval but I will mention it anyways.
    Changed Purtek to Draconic Adjudicator since Knights now are required to always follow the law. So it would be weird for someone to run around with an illegal puretek (considering the chance of the Belliard Representative approving a known abberant and non unionist is very low)
     
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    Simslp About as productive as a Typhonus in Ithania.

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    @Yurs Update Update UPDATE TIME

    - Added the new Dragonsoul Pack in exchange for dropping Light Shielding, as I barely used the latter.
    - Decided to finally add Ritualism seeing how much he is around dragon stuff and worships his dragon.
     
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    Caelamus Sir Honeybear the chronic druid main Staff Member Lore1

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