Especially since, due to his Cielothar genes, the boy had grown more female and childish features when contrasted to that of the other men and Nelfin in the area. Still, Whitlock endured being shoved into girls' clothing and treated as if he were such. The poor elf will never know if it was a malformed version of love or a crude joke placed onto him by teasing sisters...
His girly looks refused to fade, and if his body would not change, he would make it his mission to avoid his sisters, though sometimes to no avail.
@LumosJared Added 'Languages' for reference.Languages | His mother tongue was to naturally be Elvish which was followed by Common and later Daen. He picked up Daen as it fell under the same tree as Elvish and thus was easier to learn from his years spent in Daenshore
PARALYSED RIGHT HAND
During the event of The Great Castle Crash, Whitlock's hand has been left paralyzed and unable to be used. However, he retains his ability to cast using fire magic. The difficulty that Whitlock faces will likely come from his inability to use his dominant hand. He will now pursue becoming left-handed or ambidextrous in order to make up for his now damaged hand.
I am honestly very sorry.
@Silent_Ruler Asked Staff not long after the post and they said he can still cast.On the "Right Hand" weakness, it mentions that he can still cast fire magic properly. However, the post says his hand was damaged beyond greatly, to the point where it'd never be the same (hence it being paralysed as you said), and the Magic Guide requires two-handed gestures for proper casting. You may want to edit that accordingly (unless I was unaware that it was changed or something). His magic would likely spin out of control sometimes because of this, or it may take him longer to cast properly. @Anseran
Before*@Silent_Ruler Asked Staff not long after the post and they said he can still cast.
@Silent_Ruler Asked Staff not long after the post and they said he can still cast.
https://forums.massivecraft.com/threads/amputations-and-magic-and-graygate.36816/
@Nekoxo
I still intend to submit him for the world progression. If I can't since he's being reviewed, may I ask that we get this done ASAP? Thanks! ^^
I took another look over the full application and found some more tweaks:
Make some tweaks and then tag me @TheOverseer__
- According to the racial interbreeding matrix, Altalar genes are dominant when it comes to breeding, so your character would fall primarily under the physical parameters of an Altalar, which means that your height must be at least 6'. I can see making him appear more feminine and minor edits like that, but Whitlock would primarily be Altalar and therefore fit inside their height caste. You can reconcile this either by editing his lineage to go full Cielothar or increasing his height.
- Appearance/Easily Manipulated does not really weaken him. It has too many outs built into the construct. It seems like you've left yourself far to much room to really be manipulated afterall. In addition, it even says in the weakness that it is sometimes an advantage. A weakness should really only weaken. I would usually let this slide as a 4th weakness, but Protective and Overconfident are already a little iffy since the only real consequence to overconfident is a fairly normal level of embarrassment from failure and Protective helps him with those he saves as much as it hurts him with those he is protecting against. As such, I'll ask you to replace the most iffy of these three (Easily Manipulated) with a different weakness that only weakens him.
Again, thank you for being so quick and working with me, it means a lot!That's a great emotional weakness, actually. This is just the kind of emotional vulnerability that will allow some in depth dialog between yourself and other characters. Combined with all the other edits, this is good to call Approved.
He is such, don't even try to argue.Still, Whitlock endured being shoved into girls' clothing and treated as if he were such.
Upon discussion and receiving clarification, this character was executed some time ago by the guard. Characters executed by the Guard for committing grievous crimes and high treason cannot be brought back. @Anseran