Character Information Full Name: Sihn-Nilolok Norr’Adzorwyn Race: Sihndar Age: 35 Sex: male Gender: Male Sexuality: Bi Eye Color: Green, hallowtech Core Concept Nilolok is an agnostic sihndar, acknowledging the existence of other gods but not particularly fond of worshipping them Nilolok is a young sihndar trained to be a support in battles, a combat medic. He studied both medical and alchemy to achieve such. However also remained true to the sihndar way of life of being warriors. Proficiency Information Proficiencies STRENGTH- 3 Duelist Pursuer Tactician CONSTITUTION- 2 Block Pack Brute force Pack WISDOM- 4 Affliction Wisdom Pack Mending Pack (medical patent, common patent) Stimboost Pack (biotic patent, lifegiver patent) Barricade Pack ( addiotic patent, chassis patent) DEXTERITY- 3 Escape Pack Parkour Pack Disguise Pack MAGIC-0 CHARISMA- 2 West Language Pack State leadership pack Ability Information Spells/Traits Weapon Summon Shield Summon Home Advantage ~~Specials~~ Ageless See no Evil Hear no Evil Feel no Evil Elder Voice Menxor Proving Soul Bargined (Freiderikos) Languages Common (Free) Sinnayed (Parental) West languages Appearance Information He wear traditional sihndar garb. He has vine like tattoos on his arms and legs, spider web tattoos around his shoulders and ears with. He has a long black tail and slightly furred ears from being feka asha One eye is green while the other has clock with the iris being purple Life Story Nilolok had a rather complicated childhood, being born with his sister, from parents who were cast out of the holds and given away for adoption soon after birth. He was raised without knowledge of his genetic parents in the tribe of Ellactrix. At age 15, he experienced his first loss. A family member that was held close to Nilo’s heart passed away from an illness. His parents first saw the grieving as Nilo going through a tough time but slowly grew an annoyance as the days went on. After running away from his home, he began to wander around the world. He learned many things he wouldn't have at home and many things that could further his want as a sort of healer. Spoiler: Full Backstory Full Backstory Early Childhood Nilolok had a rather complicated childhood, being born with his sister, Inalee, from parents who were nakths and given away for adoption soon after birth. He was raised without knowledge of his genetic parents in the tribe of Ellactrix. Despite what people may think, his new family happily welcomed the pair of siblings into their home. Nilo was a good kid growing up, having many friends and showing strong promise to become a successful sihndar. This isn’t to say he didn’t have his fair share of mischief; no no, he was full of it. He was always into a bit of trouble but all part of being a kid. He grew up with simple sihndar philosophies, having followed in line with them to a T. Nilo unfortunately had some few odds stacked against him that would follow into his adult life, hearing voices and quick odd hallucinations of people he knew. However nothing malicious was to come of these. Nonetheless, the family that was the Naerths were a happy bunch. Teen Years This happiness in bliss soon started to crumble from under him. At age 15, he experienced his first loss. A family member that was held close to Nilo’s heart passed away from an illness. This event shattered Nilolok’s world, the first experience of the loss of someone important wracked him and his home with grief. Due to the loss of this loved one, the family became distant. They began to focus on their own lives instead of each other, leaving Nilo to grieve by himself. A deep depression came over the sihndar, as he stopped all his training and fitness goals with having no energy to keep up with them. He instead stayed in his room all day, either reading alchemy and medical books or sleeping the blues away. He no longer wanted to be a fighter but a healer, a doctor or someone who could passively help the Sihndar cause. His parents, seeing this, found it was just Nilo going through a tough time but slowly grew an annoyance as the days went on. Eventually, the annoyance grew to a breakpoint with both parents telling Nilo off about how lazy he’s been. This left the fragile Nilo even more broken and in tears, the voices from childhood growing darker in his mind. Following the events of Nilo being chastised, he was forced into getting back into his training and fitness goals. He was starting to feel better (albeit, this doesn’t mean he’s properly processed this grief, only distracting his mind from it) and met a rather beautiful girl in his tribe, taking a rather romantic interest in her. They started to become fast friends and eventually became more than just friends. To Nilo she was the perfect one, she was his world and he was hers. It was like everything broken in the sihndar was brand new. This however wouldn't last as a few months into this relationship they decided to start experimenting with each other's bodies. This is the time when Nilo realized he wasn’t really into the female form, but for the sake of his lover he often complied with her demands. This led to Nilo falling into a depression once again and started to feel gross about his own body as well. Combined with the now toxic family life of fighting with his parents, them constantly berating Nilo for not doing enough with his training when he went above and beyond his goals and his rather unstable relationship with his girl, led him to feel outcast and isolated. He was starting to feel he could do anything right or could never live up to expectations. All this was eventually enough for Nilo to run away, unable to take the feeling of being outcast in his home, the feeling of being a burden and disgusted while he was with his girlfriend. Adulthood After running away from his home, he began to wander around the world. He learned many things he wouldn't have at home and many things that could further his want as a sort of healer. After a few good years of wandering, he made his way to Regalia and has been meeting some very interesting people; including a lover. Relationships Sister- N/A Lover- Birrani
@KasterBestFallen Hello! Please take a look at the Proficiency template once more, and make sure that you note down your total proficiency points, as well as where each allocated proficiency point comes from. When you've made the required edits, tag me and I'll review it again. If you're confused about anything or have any questions, don't hesitate to ask!
Changed a few proficiencies (again) and the physical stat, as well as changing the ability from Lording of Ranth to Ovoth
I've changed a few things in according to the sihndar update- abilities, went from magic to alchemy, race things and aged him up
Howdy! The app looks clean for the most part, but there's a few things that need edits before I can give this the greenlight: You're currently using the old app format. I would recommend swapping over to the new format for ease of staff review, and trimming down the backstory to the bullet point format. You can keep the old one in spoilers if you'd like! You currently have 10 unused proficiency points. Additionally, please format your Proficiency section to clarify which points are being spent from the free 10 Hobby Points, which are Core Points, and where your Racial Boost is being assigned (if used). Go ahead and tag me once you've made the necessary changes. Thank you!
For sure! However, you have 10 Unspent Core points left unaccounted for. Would you like to allocate these into anything, or leave them unspent for now?
Are you using your 1o Hobby Points? You get them for free, and they don't count towards your 50 Core Points.
Yeah, it’s 10 is for medical science in talent Then Dancing Art-5 Singing Art-6 Baking Art-4 for my hobbies Edit: I think I figured out what you meant now, fog brain. So I’m coming to say that I used my 10 for my current hobbies then added a linguistic point buy for my remaining
You still have 7 Points left unspent. Were you hoping to invest those into anything, or leave them uninvested for later IC learning? As for your 10 free Hobby Points, I would recommend rereading this section: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Proficiency#Proficiencies . You cannot allocate your 10 free Hobby Points into the Talent section, including Medical Science, only the Hobby Group Proficiencies (starting with Visual Art Category and ending with Nature Art Category). The 50 Core Points you get can be allocated anywhere, and the 10 Hobby Points are on top of that for a total of 60 spendable points. Please go ahead and check those links out, make the necessary alterations, then tag me for another review. Thank you!
Yah I’ll keep them unused for now- I’ll make the edit there and the medical science is just talent stuffs
I’ve invested more points into combat- the 7 unused being put fist (1) , light ranged combat (5) and warlash (1)
