Dang it, they just revised that as well. I changed the perception to metallurgy and took away the doubling. @Katiesc
At least to me, a number of your images are now broken. However, re-approved, though I would suggest coloring your changes next time so I understand what changed.@HydraLana Did another fixing up since aesthetics are a pain and Throwing combat got removed
As a warning, you're currently on the cusp of reaching a point I might need to reject your application for having too many Abilities. Please keep an eye on that, and ensure that if you add any more, they exist for a logical purpose and add to the character. For now though, Approved.@HydraLana Fixed up the points to account for the prof update, removed the base talent points
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All looks fine! I would consider condensing your current life story down in the 4 bullet point format seen on the Character Application Template, and putting this current one in an "Expanded Life Story" spoiler, but it's close enough to what it asks for that I'm not gonna bonk it.@BiBiBirdie Finally, I've updated it once more with nasty lil temporary aesthetics and the new profs
All good! Tag placed.@ezalB No points changed, simply tried to organize the aesthetics, but ended up giving up. Did replace the art and really vibing with it, just need the tag back