╔══════════════════╝⟰╚══════════════════╗ ▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ╚═══════════════════════════════════════╝ ┏───────────┛⇔┗───────────┓ “It’s a lil ironic that I keep tryin’ to run from my mistakes when I can’t even run. Fockin’ void.” ┗─────────‒‒‒‒‒‒‒‒‒‒‒‒─────────┛ ━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━『⌾║ BASIC INFORMATION』 《Birth Name》Elosah Sibil Ett-Lykērru - [Altered: Sibÿllad Lykke] - [Monikers: Sib, Mom, Biggins, Ma]《Race》Half-Eronidas - [Precents: ½ Nappa Siparra Eronidas, ¼ Ahâzu Eronidas, ¼ Avantl Maquixtl]《Age》Fifty-One 《Gender》Intersex - [Pronouns: Strictly Female]《Sexuality》Pansexual - [Romantic: Demiromantic] - [Marital Status: Widowed, Deceased Wife]《Occult》Mundane━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━ ▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━『⌾║ CORE IDENTITY』 《Religion》In the past, Sib was raised as a devout worshiper of Asaredu, but ever since the diminished relation with her culture, her faith has faltered. Though, Sib still abides heavily by her kins honor codes and, to some degree, the mannerisms she kept from childhood. 《Concept》A hefty, intimidatingly scarred form that dissipates under Sib’s boisterous personality. Often establishing herself as a mother figure whose been aged after decades of intensive combative and physical prowess that paints her as an old teddy bear. In addition, Sib's size becomes a common hindrance that further damages that scary and intimidating look with the comedic situations she gets stuck in.━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━ ▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━『⌾║ PROFICIENCY POINTS』 《Strength ║ 7》 ▫〚Technique Parry Pack〛 ▫〚Cheap Shot Pack〛 ▫〚Weapon Throw Pack〛 ▫〚Building Smash Pack〛 ▫〚Force Toss Pack〛[Free Eronidas Pack] ▫〚Brawl Stampede Pack〛 ▫〚Steady Body Pack〛 ▫〚Unarmed Expert Pack〛《Constitution ║ 7》 ▫〚Rebound Pack〛 ▫〚Debuff Endurance Pack〛[Free Eronidas Pack] ▫〚Rage Counter Pack〛 ▫〚Interception Pack〛 ▫〚Tank Charge Pack〛 ▫〚Tank Slam Pack〛 ▫〚Tank Rush Pack〛 ▫〚Tank Hero Pack〛《Arcane ║ 0》 《Wisdom ║ 0》 《Dexterity ║ 0》 《Faith ║ 0》━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━ ▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━『⌾║ RACIAL ABILITIES』 《Specials》 ▫〚Physical Power〛 ▫〚Gymnasium Power I, II, III〛 ▫〚Hypermetabolism I, II〛 ▫〚Body Reaction I, II, III〛 ▫〚Aeusmancy〛 ▫〚Da’amu’s Touch〛 ▫〚Asinum’s Touch〛 ▫〚Sarahu’s Touch〛 ▫〚Qulali’s Touch〛 ▫〚Giru’s Touch〛 ▫〚Maron’s Touch〛 ▫〚Diparu’s Touch〛 ▫〚Sorme’s Touch〛 《Languages》 ▫ [Vasar: 10/10 ║ Taught in Polon] ▫ [Droque: 9/10 ║ Learned from Surroundings] ▫ [Common: 7/10 ║ Taught by Mentor]━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━ ▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━『⌾║ PHYSICAL APPEARANCE』 《Abnormalities》Being entirely mundane, Sib has no differing features that make her stick out beyond many defining scars; Two burn marks located on her right forearm and left shoulder, two lengthy claw marks over their midsection, two heavy lashings on her back, and many various cuts riddled over rough skin. 《Description》The first notable aspect of Sib would be her size, standing at seven foot nine inches with a build that mixes immense amounts of fat and muscles, which make the Eronidas have a ‘dad-bod’ as best described. Accompanied with her curly, ebony brown hair with graying streaks due to age, and body hair spread over bronze skin. Dark gray sclera surrounding russet brown eyes, that set on boisterous yet strong masculine features. Lastly, double set tusks poke out from Sib’s lips, sometimes decorated with metallic bands.━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━ ▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀▀ ▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ ━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━『⌾║ LIFE STORY』 《Birth》 - Born on May 13th, 260 A.C, within the Polon Palpus located on the plains of Daendroc to Irqo Balmenor Urishti-Aya, a Half-Eronidas mother and Duos-Sharam Enusat, a Nappa Siparra Eronidas father. Sib was brought into the fourth level like other half-eronidas, and was trained in metallurgy. 《Childhood - Adolescence》 - Sib continues her craft in service to her Polon, though with her father absent and her mother a busy servant to the estates, it often meant she was on her own accord. The lack of experience and guidance meant she learned mostly from the trials and errors of forging and school attendance. This never deterred the half-eronidas, her knowledge of the upper Polon levels interested her enough to strive forward, specifically the architectural levels. In hopes of rising, Sib pursued her smithing craft and schooling with diligence. - The hopes diminishing over time as Sib was unable to rise due to her present non-Eronidas blood, garnering distrust, and leaving an impact on the young half-bred. Though growing up, when Sib were given her mandatory years of militaristic schooling, a new light was given to the then adolescent half Eronidas. Understanding that she was unable to progress to any higher levels, Sib sought to leave the Polon life behind at the age of twenty in favor of living outside of servitude and instead seeking wild, self-made goals. 《Middle Age》 - During her travels across Daen, Sib had to pick up the language fluently, causing her rough encounters throughout the coast. It wasn’t until she came across Bruno Casimir, a traveling ithanian man who sparked the Eron’s interest. The two grew close over many years, before eventually having a kid. Which Sib left Bruno with, as well as his newly found injury, at the age of twenty-two. - Leading towards south eastern Daen, Sib eventually came upon various other outcasted Eronidas along her journey. Most notably a small group called the Terqa, lead by Rahetti-Il, who Sib grew smitten with, training with them to become a destructive combatant. Soon, the Half-Eronidas would find herself as their personal bodyguard after many years. - Siring two kids during her time with the Terqa, before becoming disgruntled once she had time to reflect on their actions. Finding herself, once more, disappearing to the coast to fully leave Daen and her mistakes behind. 《Older Years》 - Touching down in Regalia at the age of thirty-four, using their old profession of metallurgy to score a first job at a dwarven ran forge. Having come to a city primarily built on common as the language, Sib was forced to learn the new tongue from their employment at the time. A half-dwarf by the name Joreik Ironfoot, who taught the Eronidas, but as a result, left Sib with an awkward accent to her common. Adjusting her name at the time, and on the side, Sib was offered a position in the Peirgarten house guards. Taking the opportunity, they joined the house guards and worked under the noble family for several years before leaving. - Throughout six years of being in the city, Sib participated in Regalia’s wars and joined the Hammers, were she also began work for the Emperor’s Forge to upkeep her fleeting knowledge of metallurgy before its closure. The Hammers then disbanded, which led to her joining the Wardens, while taking time to take in two scrappy kids from the streets. 《Ongoings》 - Staying in the Wardens until the order was disbanded, Sib joined the Shields before transitioning into the Arcanum. They operated for a while only to have the charters dissolve and re-unite back into the Violet Order. During this time, Sib’s family situation changed drastically, her adopted kids left Regalia. - This was around the time she connected with a sailing woman named Molly, and eventually grew a close relationship with them and proposed. The two then married, with various ‘adopted’ children. A few years passed, and Sib is left with the news that Molly had been murdered. Having dealt with the killer with her own hands, the half-eronidas finds herself attempting to steady her emotions and keep moving forwards. Legally adopting two of the kids under her name. - The Violet Order was overhauled into the Metropolitan, where conflicts arose and Sib took her leave from the force, before returning once more. Though, many doubts have surfaced in her mind about the law and its effectiveness. Especially since the being forcibly fired along with many others from law enforcement. Now, Sib is a loud-mouthed grandma that aims to have the same fun she used to in her prime.━━━━━━━━━━═══════════ ‹ ⋐ ◎ ⋑ › ═══════════━━━━━━━━━━
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Just going to let you know so you can consider it, daen ailor are generally small, if I'm not mistaken, they actually fall in the category of second smallest of all the cultures, as well as avanthar generally being less than humans in strength comparison, not to say the build is impossible, but letting you know what staff might call out as snowflakism.
Review I'm going to ask you to limit your character to being from two races, when you break it down like that it makes it near impossible to determine what characteristics they will inherit. Once you do that, make sure that your accompanying physical traits match up with the two races you chose. Besides the above there isn't anything that is particularly out of place. The idea of a female blacksmith is fresh and something I haven't seen come up before. Make the above change and tag myself once completed @Wolfiecat940
Alright, I have made the changes needed and have them in that pinkish-purple color. If there are any other changes, could you please point out because it is late at night. Thank you, I have had a fun time playing this character, and I intend to for many months to come.
I'm going to say drop from Strongman to Muscular due to the muscle disproportion between men and women, this won't effect your role play with the character, just make their body build more accurate to what it should be. But that looks to be the final edit @Wolfiecat940
@Wumpatron Sorry to bother, but my tag went away when I was fixing up a few spelling and grammatical errors on my sheet. While I was changing it, I added a few more details onto everything to strengthen some paragraphs and such. Nothing has really changed beyond me advancing the Life Story to 306 A.C.
@Wumpatron I just finished re-writing my character sheet, alot has changed and I highlighted them in this color.
@Wumpatron I made her into a Half-Orc, aged her up a bit, and small bits added here and there. Just need it reviewed again.
Personality Information: In the first paragraph you have of instead of off in the first line and sentence. Please fix this. Extras: Put these into a spoiler. Make these edits and tag me once finished! @Wolfiecat940
Small switches of points around in Proficiency points. Complete changes to her Personality to reflect her being a Half-orc. @Vegemiite If that requires reapproval or such?
Your tracking states it is 6 in the brackets rather than 5. Adjust this. Make that edit and tag me once done! @Sujitation
@Vegemiite Sorry to bother, but I just wanted to edit it to put some art in and lost the Approved tag.
Your probably tired of my asking, but can I have the Tag restored again? The dividers and images got messed up. @Vegemiite
I have made the transition to the newer Proficency point system, I've changed a few things here and there but no major changes in character design. @Vegemiite
@Vegemiite Bumping since it's been a while and I edited the proficiency points to not have the racial bonus be included in the stats.
@Sujitation You've used 48 proficiency points, but the character only has 46. Please adjust the points in any which way necessary. Make this change in blue and tag me when you're done.
Oh wow, Sibs a big boi orc! I made some huge edits to her life story, and some minor tidbits to her personality and removed all the spoilers. @Athelois
@Sujitation Any additional languages that are not Common or Vash require 6 points per extra language as she is an Orc and not a halfbreed. The new rules are Common and the Mother & Father's native tongue. Please fix this. Fix this and tag me when you're done, please!
Aye, aye, all done, though, I was wanting to keep Dwarvish for the reason that she was raised by them for half of her childhood, but I already got rid of it
@Sujitation Hi! I will be taking over your re-review. After looking it over, I have found nothing wrong with your current application. Re-approved.
@SupremeCripple I didn’t change anything besides the proficiency, and yes, they should be more spread but I’ve never played my character knowing much else besides those profs.
