Basic Information Full Name: Zzickar Age: 49 Gender: Male Race: Allar; Al-Allar Sexuality: Hetrosexual Preferred Weapon: Blacksteel Dagger; which was gained when he cured the small child of a high-class family of a strong fever. Skill Information Points: 49 +20 Alchemy Sciences (+20 spent) +14 Medical Sciences (+14 spent) +5 Fast Blades Combat Skill (+5 spent) +10 Nature Care Sciences (+10 Spent) Body Shape (5) Blades Combat = 5 Toned Body Shape Extreme Low Body Fat Languages Common|Fluent Zasta|Fluent|Native Tongue Basic Information (Expansion) Zzickar moved to Regalia to find a new way of life. He wished to travel and find new customers as well as friends in Regalia. He always has his face stuck in a book or is mixing up something for a client. Zzickar’s upbringing was in his home always reading or mixing up ingredients in his small laboratory. All the knowledge he’s gained is from alchemy teachers and books. Zzickar’s ambition is found in his alchemy. He desires to write a book on alchemy, and become a teacher of it. His other dreams are to start a big-time company to sell his creations to the world. Visual Information Eye Color: Yellow Hair Color: N/A Hair Style: N/A Skin Color: Pale Green Clothing: A white coat over a brown shirt and black pants. Height: 5’6 Weight: 125 Pounds The Core List Moral Alignment: Zzickar’s moral alignment is Chaotic Neutral. He is too prideful with his knowledge, which sometimes gets him in trouble with the law. Zzickar would not intentionally break the law and understands why rules are in place. He would accept bribes to tell lies as he is not always truthful and usually does everything to benefit himself. Personality The Craftsman – ISTP Personality >Zzickar hides his thoughts and motives to most, except his closest friends. He enjoys having the surprise on people and enjoys being with only a few people or by himself. He's always ready to adapt to new living situations and will sometimes make impulsive decisions, though usually assesses the situation. Religion Unionism - 5/10 >Zzickar generally accepts the unionism as a part of life and has some knowledge of the religion and its history. But, he doesn't actively turn to religion. Childhood Zzickar was born in Uesston, Hadar not knowing his real parents due to them not being his sub-race. He was given to an old male Al-Allar who raised him lovingly. When Zzickar was ten, he’d often be working to help pay any bills as his father was poor. He would have rather been exploring but was obligated to work. He made no friends and was very shy, always keeping to himself. At the age of twelve, he would sneak away from work to read alchemy books, something he was very interested in. He’d also keep a small allowance of the money he made for himself, without his father knowing. He’d usually go days without sleep so he could have time to read, and used the little money he had for small alchemy experiments. Teenage Years At the age of fifteen, he would buy more expensive ingredients for his experiments. He’d also sneak off to listen to classes on Alchemy and medicine. On his way home one night, an Allar thug robbed him of a week's worth he’d been paid. When he arrived home empty-handed, his father had seemed greatly distraught. He later learned they couldn't keep paying rent, and not too soon they were living on the streets. At the age of nineteen, Zzickar took his belongings and bought a ticket to Regalia. He left at night without telling his father and took all the money he’d made with him. Once he arrived in Regalia he stayed in an inn, reading and using what he made from selling his creations to keep paying the rent. Adult Years At the age of Thirty-Six, he moved from the inn to the School of Alchemy, located in Hal Pormonth. At the school Zzickar kept to himself and his studies, making no friends or social interactions. He excelled in his classes and learned a lot from his studies. At the age of Forty-Six, Zzickar graduated from the school of Alchemy. He took the knowledge he gained back to Regalia where he taught small classes to study groups who wanted to learn about Alchemy, also working as a tutor. He then decided to once again open a small business selling his creations to people, and that’s what he’s doing to this present.
Medicine is not a cultural proficiency and needs to be listed under normal proficiencies along with alchemy, neither can it go up to 210, please list it under the normal proficiencies alongside alchemy and quick fingers. Please add another sentence to the first, second and third paragraphs, additionally I would like to ask to iterate a bit more on the second paragraph in regards to how Zzickar views himself, does he have any insecurities? anxieties? does he feel prideful over any accomplishments or views in regards to himself? Under the third paragraph, I'd like to request you go into more detail concerning his relationship and behavior towards friends and family, siblings, parents etc, as this paragraph is primarily the opposite of the first. It's unlikely that Zzickar would of been beaten by an Al-Allar father as most Al-Allar are cowardly and submissive by nature, riddled with their own anxieties and insecurities. Be sure to tag me and highlight edits in blue when you're done!
