Zsazsa Kosmatka

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  1. RaggedyGrace

    RaggedyGrace Speaking in hieroglyphics Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    Basic Information
    • Full Name: Zsazsa Jonusz Kosmatka
      • Nickname: Lilly, Hańba, Zsa
    • Age: 19
      • Born March 28, 290 AC
      • Zodiac Sign: Aries
    • Gender: Female
    • Race: Zvorun Ailor
      • Lineage: Woaden
    • Sexuality: Heterosexual
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    Skill Information
    Total Points:
    50 (+10 Talent Points)

    • Core Group Proficiencies
      • Science Skill Category
        • Alchemy Science: +12
      Hobby Group Proficiencies
      • Craft Art Category
        • Gardening Art: +4
      • Musical Art Category
        • Instrument Art: +5
        • Vocal Art: +5
      • Nature Art Category
        • Horticulture Art: +5 (Talent Points)
        • Husbandry Art: +5 (Talent Points)
    • Sorcery: +9
    • Lingustics: +3
      • Skodje
    • Volacorum: +3
      • Pagan Marvash Mutations
    • Genetics: +9
      • Paleblood
      • Sanguiphobia
    Body Shape
    • Physical Stat: 4
      • (Gardening Art: 8* 0.5=4|4)
    • Body Shape: Average Body Shape
    • Body Fat: Low Body Fat
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    Languages
    • Clavna (Learned in Childhood; Native Tongue)
    • Common (Learned from Uncle's family; Free)
    • Skodje (Learning from Velheim Community; Linguistics)
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    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations
    • Woaden Lineage Abilities
      • Hunt Sense I
      • Wall Climb IV
      • Nature Gift I
    • Pagan Marvash Mutations
      • Pagan Soil
      • Pagan Ancient
      • Pagan Spring
      • Pagan Voice
      • Pagan Maw
    • Cahalic Soul Line: Ëlen (Active)
      • Blood Eyes 5
      • Cahalic Form 2
      • Rogue Gift 4
      • Light Mend 1
      • Empath Sense 1
      • Empath Sense 2
      • Nature Gift 1
      • True Path 1
      • Light Mend 3
      • Parasitic Control 1
      • Mind Surge 1
      • Flux Shift 6
    • Sorcery: Exist-Lined
      • Aesthetic Abilities
        • Element Control 3
      • Home Enchant Abilities
        • Home Enchant 1
      • Support Abilities
        • Light Mend 2
    • Alchemy
      • Common Alchemy
      • Healing Alchemy
      • Conning Alchemy
      • Volatile Alchemy

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    Visual Information
    • Eye Color: Reddish-pink
    • Hair Color: Plantinum Blonde
    • Hair Style: Short & choppy pigtails
    • Skin Color: Boney white
    • Clothing: Zsazsa has a flower crown made of sunflowers on her head. She is wearing a white puffy blouse that is covered by a brown vest, and a long red skirt that covers her boots. She has various symbols of Wiaraja Gods on a beaded cord around her neck.
    • Height: 5'6"
    The myths and fable's that haunt a Zvorun child's mind has been given life. An old tale of a being coming door to door asking to be let in for food and shelter, but only be turned away after so many excuses. If you do let them in or loose the game of excuses, no one knows what happens after.
    Her form become more elongated and spindly, her spine bending forward at the height of (blep). Her face looses all of it's humanity, morphing into a carved out horse skull made out of mossy oak with sunflowers being planted within it's eyes. A garland of ribbon and other plants wrap around it's wooden ear with two deer antler poking through the top of it's skull. Most of it's figure is obscured, drapped in mossy and degraded robes with vines and leaves threaded through the musty cloth. Sometimes and if close enough, a figure can be seen underneath, skeletal even though hidden from the outside. [​IMG]
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    Personality & Abilities
    Option Two: The Core List
    • Character Alignment
      • Neutral Good- Her beliefs guide her to wanting to make the best of everything either for herself or others. However, she is more concerned about the outcome and feels very impartial to how that point is achieved. Her intentions are in the right place, but she will not hesitate to disregard the law if it means for the best.
    • Personality Type
      • The Advocate (INFJ-A)- Her personality mirrors closely to the advocate. Zsazsa comes off as peaceful and reserved whenever she first meets someone but can become boisterous and witty with those, she considers close friends. She is highly intuitive and very attuned to other people’s emotions allowing her to make meaningful relationships with them. Though she believes that things can still be better which can lead to having false ideals, Zsazsa knows the world can be cruel and you just must accept that fact sometimes. On the flip side, she can be very stubborn in her choices and be overly sensitive to some topics leading her lash out in some hurtful remark. She is very much a scaredy cat and hates confrontation in whatever form it is.
    • Religion
      • Wiaraja (5/10), Unaligned Exist Worship (7/10)
        • Due to her shattercurse afflication, her views on her religion has became a warped version between Wiaraja and the Faith of Estel. Zsazsa beginning to see her own Gods as just another version of the Avatars. Some being the same person while others became fusion between two or more. I.e. Žiemė and Hukaudra being related back to Ulley, Zsazsa seeing them both as the same God. However, the afflication keeps her flakey of the practices, and normal devotion. Zsazsa only finding some time to devout to, but never fully.
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    Life Story
    Infancy

    • On the eve of March 28, 284 AC Zsazsa Jonusz Kosmatka was born into an ever-growing family of hunters in the rural lands of Zavoria.
    • She was the fourth child to be born to Jonsusz and Morzenae Kosmatka. At the time, she had two older brothers and a sister.
    • Zsazsa was taken care of by her mother, sister, and grandmother as caring for children was deemed a womanly role. She was rather a fussy babe and could only be soothed when she was held by her grandmother who sang lullabies of some ancient tongue that only her grandmother knew.
    Childhood
    • As she grew up, she was a hyperactive child and tended to get into trouble. It was also at this that her grandparents and two of her cousins moved into the already small cramp house.
    • When she turned seven, she began helping around the house. She helped her mother mend and make clothes for the household.
    • She was mostly kept in the house due to her chores, but on the occasion, she was let out to play with the other children under the supervision of one of her brothers, or gathered in the town square to listen to the elders play and sing folk tales. Besides that, she would attend the weekly Wiaraja ceremony headed by one of the elders with her family as well as holidays.
    • Zsasza did not get to see much of her father or brothers since they were hunting most of the time. Whenever they were home, her father rarely spent any time with the family. Their interactions were a few passing words beyond when he reprimanded her.
    • She spent most of her time with her sister and her cousins as they were the ones who taught her how to play the klakuk and told Zsazsa the tales of their ancestors. When they could not go outside, they would sit by the hearth and embroider or play their instruments for the rest of the family. Sometimes her grandmother would tell stories as well.
    Adolescence
    • It was around this time that her brother and sister were born into the family. Since she was old enough now, she joined the rest of the women in the household in taking care of the twins. However, it became apparent that she was not good at the task and really despised it.
    • Soon, the cramped space and the constant crying got to her. During the nights when her father and brothers were out hunting, she would sneak out into the woods to have some peace. During these night adventures, she would go explore and pick random flowers to make them into wreaths.
    • During one of these nightly adventures, she came upon an abandoned temple with its sacred grove still intact. On some of the trees she noticed that there were engravings etched into the bark. After she looked and sounded them out, they were like the lullabies that her grandmother used to sing her.
    • The next day, she approached her grandmother about this, and the old woman told her that she was one of few who the Gods have chosen like herself. It was then that Zsazsa’s grandmother took it upon herself to teach the young girl the old practice of paganism in the Wiaraja faith.
    • Zsazsa began to understand more about her faith along with other Old Fayth religions from her grandmother. She felt more connected to her Gods in this way and would use nightly adventures to pray to them and perform rituals for them.
    Young Adult-Current
    • Over the years, it became easy for her to hide her nightly performances from her father. However, when she turned twenty, her mutations started to appear. At first, she could easily pluck the flowers from her skin. But when her hands began to darken and twist into bark, the charade was over.
    • Her father finally took notice of her changing appearance and demanded to know why. She could not give him a straight answer but told him about her night adventures when he was gone. She was severely beaten by him and claimed that she had soiled her own faith in her false worshipping. He took Zsazsa to the village elders to deal out her punishment.
    • The village elders had no say in the girl’s punishment since it dealt with the Wiaraja faith, so it was up to the priests and priestesses for the final decision. They deemed her practices unholy and with her being heavily mutated, an abomination in the village. Her punishment was to be outcast from the lands until she set her ways straight.
    • When they got home, her father called her a disgrace and a failure to her forefathers. He sent Zsazsa to go live with her uncle who was visiting his family at the time. After a week, she and her uncle were packed up on a ship set out to Regalia without much of a goodbye from her family.
    • Once in Regalia, her uncle’s family welcomed her with open arms. It turns out that they still practiced the Wiaraja faith, but more laxed in tradition. She began helping her uncle’s wife in the garden where she was taught about various plants and would help her uncle make potions since he was an alchemist. In the process, she began to understand the basics of alchemy and what each plant could do if applied.
    • She happily lives with her uncle’s family in Old Town where she has taken an apprenticeship under him to be an alchemist. She has been at her freest without the restraint of Zvorun customs, though she tends to stick to some of her old ways.
    Currently
    • It has been several months now since Zsazsa’s stay in Regalia, she has seen many events unfold from the tail-ending of the Clicker Crisis to making new acquaintances coming from all sorts of backgrounds.
    • Majorily, she has perfected her craft of alchemy under the helpful hand of her uncle, becoming suitable enough to graduate from her apprenticeship and begin taking on tasks to help manage her uncle’s shop. As well, her aunt’s teachings of gardening rubbed off on the young zvorun, aiding in her interests of various plants and their practicality.
    • Though Zsazsa has found that her and her uncle’s family to be the only Zvoruns in the city as of now, she has found a new community that brings up some nostalgia for her, the Velheimers. It was through making friends and becoming somewhat a member of the community itself that she started to feel more at home than she ever did. Even somehow making her way into a northern court as joining the culture council. Along the way, she started picking up on Skodje from hearing others frequently use it, though not having quite a grasp on it yet.
    • She had also somehow acquired a pet, may it be through questionable terms with a help of her friend. She had gained a common goose as a pet, the Zvorun naming Pan Kwak courtesy of his frequent honking. In the beginning, she did not know much about taking care of a feisty goose and only learned through trial and error, and some outside advice. Zsazsa enjoys having the goose around though will let it roam around unsupervised if she wishes to get away from the ankle-biter.
    • She had also begun taking archery lessons from a certain Szabadok after a few run-ins with vampires and tiring of being defenseless. She has an understanding of the basics of said weapon, but still perfecting her aim of hitting an actual target.
    • So far, Zsazsa’s time in regalia has been very eventful and impactful to her. If it be the friendships that she forged with unlikely acquaintances or moments transpiring that she would have never thought of she would participate in, only more time will tell how she will change over this course in her life.
     
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  2. Faith_Bug

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    Heyo! Peer review, not staff.

    This is semi-pointless because Alchemy Sciences only goes to either 5 or 10, so you can either spend 2 points elsewhere or add 3 points to make it 10.

    Just a small error here, It'd be +8 not +7.
     
  3. RaggedyGrace

    RaggedyGrace Speaking in hieroglyphics Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    Fixed. Took +3 prof points from Thread Arts and moved them to Alchemy Sciences.
     
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    Claimed for review
     
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    RaggedyGrace Speaking in hieroglyphics Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    Update!
    • Bumped her age up to 25
    • Added Woaden lineage line along with racial abilites
    • Added prof point to ritualism prof and added ability under ritualism skill
    • Removed Pagan Voice & Pagan Maw from mutations
    Edits made in this color, @Arhbi
     
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    Knowledge points are now 3 instead of 4 but consider this approved.
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    RaggedyGrace Speaking in hieroglyphics Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    @Arhbi Hello! Here to update her profs to match the new system, and with some few tweaks.
    • Updated her proficiencies to fit the new updated system
      • Boosted alchemy, gave her linguistics for Skodje and Husbandry for a annoying goose, she got archery
      • Changed her ritualism
    • Physical stat fixed to 7 for her proficiencies
    • Added a part in her lifestory to fit with the new proficiences
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    Everything looks in order. Approved.
     
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    RaggedyGrace Speaking in hieroglyphics Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    @Arhbi Hiii! Local Zvorun recently got affected with Werebeatism.
    • Added Raprann-Scorcio Fusion, along with the four mutations
    • Took out Light Bow combat to funnel into sorcery for Poise of Heron
    • Added Nature Sorcery
    • Adjusted for physical stat to accommodate
    • Reworked her religion to reflect her views on her religion now, and how it ties to Exist to keep ritualism
    All updates made in blue.
     
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    approved.
     
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    RaggedyGrace Speaking in hieroglyphics Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    @Arhbi Hi, giving this tiny Zvorun a very much needed update.
    • Aged her down to 19 and fixed her birthday
    • Updated her proficiencies
    • Updated her lineage and sorcery
    • Re-vised her appearance due to genetics
    All edits made in this color!
     
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    RaggedyGrace Speaking in hieroglyphics Staff Member Roleplay Staff

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    Oh boy..
    Finally decided to update this mutated gremlin, also requesting a new reviewer! Changes are:
    • Updated Alchemy
    • Updated her to Cahalism
    • Added another sorcery spell
    All changes marked in this color. I think I may have missed a few things,eeeee
     
  14. sonofthestars

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    Hello! I will be taking this app for review. Expect a full response shortly.
     
  15. sonofthestars

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    Please add an expansion that details your character's Cahal Form Shift somewhere in the app. Make these edits in a separate color and tag me when finished.
     
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    Added in this color underneath appearance! The spoiler messed up and I'm not sure how to fix it currently. @sonofthestars
     
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