Preserved Sheet Zhaleh Dilshad: The Glowstick Cryptid

[GamingLeopurred]

@HydraLana Edited my points to fit in sorcery for the ritualism update

 

[GamingLeopurred]

@HydraLana Hello! Since it's almost been a week I wanted to tag again ray:

 

[HydraLana]

I'll be extremely frank. Every time I look at your character, I seriously question their survivability looking as they do, in a world like ours. However. I will approve this as I can't find any specific issues with your update.

 

[Mollymock]

Hey there! There have been some issues identified with this application, so let's go through them and get it all sorted.

☠ Eye Color | Neon purple and blue with slitted pupils

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Please change this due to the effects of Blood Eyes III from being a Wyrden.

☠ Magic
☣ Element Control I (Wyldblooded)
☣+4 Element Control III {4 from Prof Points}
☣+4 Element Control IV {4 from Prof Points}
☣+4 Element Control V {4 from Prof Points}
☣+4 Magic Bolt I {4 from Prof Points}

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You should specify that all of this is disabled.

Finally, please remove your ability section from a spoiler. It makes it incredibly hard to actually tell what the character has in terms of afflictions at a glance.

Do this, tag me and we should be good to go.

 

[GamingLeopurred]

@Mollymock Edits have been made o7
I wanted to know if I'd also be able to get some of the comments cleared off

 

[Mollymock]

@Mollymock Edits have been made o7
I wanted to know if I'd also be able to get some of the comments cleared off

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Approved

 

[Mollymock]

Approved

 

[GamingLeopurred]

@Mollymock I've gotten rid of Olvomism and put the points in True Path 1, Zambezi's height was also upped to 5'8

 

[GamingLeopurred]

@Mollymock I've updated the sheet to the new application format and I've changed up my points for the new profs!

 

[Mollymock]

Approved

 

[GamingLeopurred]

@Mollymock I replaced leh Roguery (Sleight of Hand) with Arcanology (Volacorum Knowledge)