Full Name:Yama Sillah Age: 58 Gender: Female Race:Url/Songaskian Hadrav’yan Skill Information: Points Available: 50/50 Spoiler: Old Profs 10 Spear Combat (5 Points 5 Racial Boost) 12 Ritualism (Points) 4 Dancing Arts (Points) 4 Vocal Singing (Points) 20 Heavy Bow Combat (Points) 10 Bodycare (Talent) 5 Cooking Art (Hobby) 5 Baking Art (Hooby) 10 Fist Combat (Points/Racial) 20 Heavy Bow Combat (Points) 12 Ritualism (Points) 7 Bodycare (Talent) 3 Strength Training (Talent) 4 Cooking Art (Hobby) 4 Baking Art (Hobby) 10 Hunting (Points/Hobby) 5 Pathfinding (Points) Body Shape: Muscle God 10 Fists, 20 Archery, 4 Bodycare, 5 Hunting, 3 Pathfinding 3 Strength Training =45 Physical Stat Low Body Fat Languages: Common [Free] Sofaal (parents) K’alatibiri (parents) Mutations Spells Ritualism Ritualist Uprooting (Eruption of Sunlight that launches and then drags them back to the ground.) Ritualist Bloodmend Ritualist Counter Ritualist Blessed Form ( The Halo is a Sundisk and the receiver of the Blessed Form glows lightly for the duration.) Dragon Mutationism Ritualist Clothweave Ritualist Spotlight Ritualist Familiar Visual Information Eye Color: Orange Hair Color: Black Hair Style: Short Skin Color: Chestnut Clothing: Flowing robes Height: 6’9 Personality True Neutral Defender Religion: Shambala 7/10 Grew up learning her religion and was always close to her faith. Her role model was an older priestess of the Shambala faith growing up and that helped influence her faith. She holds onto her faith after turning but not quite as strongly as she used too. Lifestory: -- Born to a holy woman and her husband in the middle of a sandstorm during the wee hours of the morning, just as the sun was rising over the sand dunes in the middle of desert in Farahdeen, Yama was the first, and only, child of the couple. -- Born in the middle of a trip to another city, Yama knew only of the roads for the first year of her life until her small family unit settled in. -- Yama shadowed her mother as often as she possibly could whilst her father was off helping around the city in various mercenary jobs, enjoying the freedoms of the work to a rigid schedule that would keep him from his family for too long. -- As she grew, her mother instilled into her a faithfulness that knew no bounds and, given her passion for their religion, Yama was placed on the path to priestesshood. -- In between her studies as a priestess, her father taught her how to defend herself with the use of polearms and the bow. -- When at home with both of her parents, they shared a love of cooking together, ranging from simple foods such as bread to the more difficult dishes. -- Finding she much preferred the arcane approach to the things, Yama focused all of her attention and efforts into learning ritualism from her mother, spending a large chunk of her late twenties and early thirties locked away studying, -- After coming of age, Yama was set to present herself to the council in her city in an effort to submit herself to higher learning and toward a path to religious influence within her community. During this presentation, however, Yama’s tail caught the corner of a thurible - pouring fire across an ancient text she had been reading from. -- So ashamed of her failure, Yama fled her city, leaving behind her small family unit to find a way to redeem herself in the eyes of her people. During this time, the Songaskian developed a nervous habit of rubbing at her horns when anxious or nervous. -- During her travels throughout Farahdeen and the surrounding lands, Yama was exposed to all manners of cultures and people, slowly forcing her to shed her prior prejudice for the Ailor and Nelfin that she found herself in the midst of. -- Yama, having widened her view, decided to board a ship to the Regalian capital to learn more of her fellow inhabitants in the world. -- Seeing this as a sign to broaden her horizons even further, the Songaskian turned her gaze to the city, looking forward to being exposed to all cultures and lifestyles that existed within Regalia. -- Upon arriving, she quickly secured a place to live and began a small bakery cooking sweets that she loves. She would continue baking for many years after opening her bakery finding a passion for it. --Under went Symbiosis.
Please specify that this is Body Shape. Please specify what sorcery schools these spells are from. Please include a sentence or two justifying why your character is quite so zealous in terms of their religion to flesh this out some more. Please make these edits in Purple, and tag me when they're complete! @Malir_Bromtor
@Mollymock i made some small changes mainly buffing her cooking stat and making her an owner of a small bakery
@Mollymock I'm looking to make some changes over all to my char if possible can you take a look to what I got?
The plan is to write out the sorcery and slowly fill it in with something else over time as i develop my char but i still want to keep my ritualism
I'll do the changes to the bloodline mutations and stuff after you aprrove the other changes first, and after i see if i can retcon the sorcery
Your physical stat calculation is slightly off, as Body Care Training no longer contributes to Physical Stat. Please state if this bloodline is active or not. Make these edits in Purple and tag me when complete!
@Mollymock Looking for reapproval I heavily redid much of the character as I think this will fit in a bit better
Please include a Physical Stat calculation, detailing how you came to this value. Make this edit and tag me when complete.
@Malir_Bromtor Hello there! I'll be claiming this application for an Aspirant Review! Expect a response shortly.
Here's my review! @Malir_Bromtor Basic Information Everything looks good here!Skill Information Whilst it isn't necessarily a required change, I would heavily suggest lowering your investment in either Fist Combat or Heavy Bow Combat, and shuffle the invested points into other proficiencies. Whilst Url Symbiosis grants you the ability to re-specify your point investments this build seems particularly stacked in one direction. For an Url's natural skills I'd greatly recommend a bit more in Hunting Art or Pathfinding Art - leaving the points uninvested also allows for the opportunity for other Url to teach you! Can you also separate the points here into 3 different sections, one for Core, Talent and Hobby. Besides that, these look fine!Special Traits Everything looks good here!Visual Information Everything looks good here!Personality Everything looks good here! Please just mend the formatting here a little.Life Story Everything looks good here! Once you make the requested edits I'll be glad to mark you as approved!
@Antimreoir Took 10 points from fists and distributed 5 to pathfinding and 5 to hunting let me know if that is better
