⤞ Name: Xollrazsa ⥀ Full Name: Xollrazsa ⥀ Nicknames: The Hidden, The Masked ⤞ Age: 69 years of age ⤞ Gender: Male ⤞ Race: Slizzar ⤞ Sexuality: Who knows man ⤞ Preferred Weapon: Hidden Fan ⥀ Secondary Weapon: Sword ⤞ Inventory Items: ⥀ Personal Items: 100r / Lament Created as a gift from his old mentor in Sassrakkand. Lament is a sword, one that Xollrazsa usually carries on his hip while in Crookback or the sewers. The blade is a flamberge weapon made of crimson dyed laqoria, giving the majority of the blade a ruby-like sparkle. The outer edges of the blade are are mixture of two metals, Assena and red dyed Pattara, giving the edges of the blades a sort of silvery red color that seems to have black rust on the edges. For extra support the blades also have a core of Pattara running through the center of it. Due to the different metals used in its creation, the blades smell of freshly cut grass and salted almonds, despite its rather nefarious uses.100r / Sorrow The second blade gifted to Xollrazsa from his mentor is called Sorrow, and is inlaid with various runes written in ancient Dragon Script. The blade is made of Laqoria, a silver weapon with a beautiful blue sheen. The edges of the blade, similar to the last is made of Pattara, dyed to have a teal shine to it. Through the center of the blade runs a thin strip of Pyrignis, which was colored to be a more gray color rather than the yellow while forged. Down the center of the blade runs multiple indentations written in ancient Dragon Script. These runes are affected with Ritualist Gemcraft, causing them to faintly glow a ghostly blue color, and while in the sun they shimmer and reflect from all angles, shining bright sky blue. The quillon appears as a dragon's wings spread out in flight, while the chappe is a dragon's head with the mouth open to swallow the base of the blade. The grip is wrapped in sivler silk while the pommel appears as a dragon's claw, holding a ball made of polished Crenishard, affected by Gemcraft.100r / Vengeance The third and final blade given to the Slizzar is named Vengeance, and was the blade he used when slaying nobles during the Chrysant War. Unlike the others, this blade is made purely of Pattara, which was dyed to shimmer with a golden hue in the light. Down the center of the blade runs script in Seraph Dialect with the words "The double edged-sword." The words were inlaid by Xollrazsa himself as the war was beginning in order to remind himself of the possible detriments of unchecked vengeance. The words are also enchanted with Ritualist Gemcraft, causing them to shimmer and reflect a beautiful golden color in the sunlight, and shine with a soft golden glow in the dark. The crossguard resembles two snakes curling around the chappe, providing a bit of protection to the hand. The handle is wrapped in silver silk, with two small pieces of slik hanging down to be used as a distraction, and for decoration. At the bottom of the strips hang two snakes made of brass, both being enhanced with Gemcraft to glow. The pommel is decorated with a short spike which can be used for stabbing and piercing.87r / Hand carved gold necklace A neclace from an old friend.0r / Small geode The Keystone of Sassrakkand which Xollrazsa has had since childhood.5r / Small mirror A simple pocket mirror for emergency keystone meetings.0r / Hendrix (Cobravv)⥀ Non-Personal: 10r / Notebook with random items written inside 7r / Flask of whiskey 16r / Compass ⤞ Proficiency || Total: 50 Points + 10 Talent + 10 Hobby ⥀ Core: (10) Sword Combat (10 Age) (5) Fan Combat (5 Age) (9) Linguistic Science (9 Age)⥀ Talent: (10) Stealth Rogue (10 Talent) (5) Frontline Command (5 Age) (4) Bodycare Training (4 Age)⥀ Hobby: (5) Dancing Art (5 Hobby) (10) Theater Art (5 Age, 5 Racial) (5) Husbandry Art (5 Hobby)⥀ Special: (6) Ritualism Points (6 Age) (6) Sorcery Points (6 Age) ⤞ Body Shape: ⥀ Physical Stat: 15 (10 Sword + 5 Fan + 5/2 Dancing + 4/2 Bodycare + 10/2 Theater) ⥀ Body Shape: Athletic ⥀ Body Fat: Extreme Low ⤞ Languages: ⥀ Known: Common (Free) Zasta (Racial Language) Modern Altalar (Slizzar Free) Kathar Elven (Slizzar Free) Sihndar Dialect (Linguistics) Wa'an (Linguistics) Dragon Script (Linguistics) Meraic Alphabet (Linguistics) Seraph Dialect (Linguistics) ⤞ Special Traits/Spells/Mutations: ⥀ Racial Abilities: Slizzar Forms Birth Form Glamor Form Emotion Surge Truth Surge Perfect Form Heart of Sassrakkand (Sole) Beseech the Deep (Sole)⥀ Ritualism: Ritualist Blood-Mend Ritualist Shroud Ritualist Body-Singing Ritualist Ghostcloak⥀ Sorcery: Shadows Embrace Binral Blink Darksight Shadow Guise ⤞ Eye Color: Violet ⤞ Hair Color: Purple ⤞ Hair Style: Long tentacles bound near his low back ⤞ Scale Color: Crimson Red, with a gray stomach ⤞ Clothing: Changes with every different shift ⤞ Height: 6'3 ⥀ Tail: 18'9 ⤞ Option Two: The Core List ⥀ Alignment Neutral : Xollrazsa seeks to better himself, doing what he sees as good at whatever moment in time. He doesn't feel hindered by laws or a concrete idea of "good" or "evil", simply what he views as right.⥀ Personality Type Architect : Xollrazsa plans and analyzes people as most slizzar do. ⥀ Religion Nessrassian : 4 Xollrazsa worships the Nessrassian pantheon first and foremost, believing all of the Ssepston to be the truest and highest form of divinity in the world, worshipping them through his daily life as a Slizzar. He particularly took a liking to Vailess, the Snake of Power, using his natural born sensaiton surge to slowly bend people to his whim.Dragon Worship : 7 A close second in beliefs for Xollrazsa is the belief of Dragons. Though not completely in line with Nessrassian faith, Xollrazsa particularly relates to the Silver Majesty Dragon, seeking to use his own natural abilities, as well as lies and deceit to make his way in the world. Although unusual, Xollrazsa has also taken up beliefs in the Violet Night dragons after speculation of Violet Night involvement with the Slizzar came about. Spoiler: Likes and Dislikes Likes Hot tea Whiskey Manipulation Heat / Fire Lying Soft furs Dislikes Snitches Cold Being lied to ⤞ (Birth - 10) Xollrazsa was born in the Slizzar city of Sasrakand, having a relatively normal life through his young childhood. He lived with his mother and sister, his father passed from illness before he was born. He enjoyed sunny days swimming in the sea nearby with his friends. His parents lectured him on their faith, the Nessrassian faith, which he became quite devout in. ⤞ (11 - 19) Slowly as he grew he picked a mentor, being taught many things among them being sorcery, and swordplay. After receiving all the training his mentor could give, he set sail for Regalia, though the ship was lost at sea, and ended up in Eriu-Innis. He learned many things about the culture there, infiltrating it as he would any other place, before finally he found another ship headed to regalia and stowed away. ⤞ (20 - 39) Xollrazsa, discontent with his social standing as is, began to seek out more ways to gain power and influence. Realizing that this lifestyle would not benefit him in the long run, he set out to gather himself a ship and set sail to Dexai, beginning his tutilage in some of the Eastern dancing techniques. Also around this time he became interested in the void god of Pride, Anu, which he began to worship, taking a second religion as most Slizzar do. The two religions tied in nicely with eachother, as he worshipped gods who both manipulated and schemed their way to the top. After some amount of time, infiltrating, thieving, and conning his way about, he became bored with his life here as well, and moved to the Holy City, Regalia. Upon arrival he slipped his way into a wealthy Qadir household, creating himself a Mahalar shift to blend in nicely. ⤞ (40-69) The Chrysant War had begun and it did not take long for the rumors to reach the Slizzar's ears and his life drastically changed to a new goal, kill. He slipped into the homes of nobles and various other high class houses and stabbed and choked and poisoned them to the void. Revenge was had, pushed along by his kin within the city. As the war finally came to an end he contented himself with living a mundane life for a while, even going as far to become a bartender, purely to enhance his guise. Also during this time, or shortly after, it's all rather muddled to him, he joined a coven called the Hierarchy, growing real emotional attachments to a few of the members, despite the natural Slizzar inclination to remove themselves from emotion. Following the destruction of the Hierarchy, Xollrazsa became lost and rather depressed as he longed for and missed his old companions. He also found his way into The Requisition, where he joined the gang of thieves and such. After this however he was forcefully cured, and in his anger and resentment with vampirism and his own curse, he made his way to the Darkmark school, where he shifted his Eriunin shift to appear younger and thus enroll, learning how to make use of stealth and quiet, quick attacks to devastate foes. During his years here, he kept his religions hidden under a mask of unionism, knowing quite a lot about the unionist religion from his time in Regalia, and though not believing it himself, he was able to imitate it well enough. As time went on however his religious inclinations shifted more to the worship of dragons, and away from the serpents. ⤞ (Present Day) Presently Xollrazsa has adopted his Mahalar shift, Aaliyah, joining the Regalian mercenaries and learning the ways of frontline combat as well, amassing his own small army numbering 1000 soldiers at his beck and call. Currently he has joined up with an Isldar and a Sihndar who are both mercenaries, similarly to him. The trio protect the city of regalia through the hunting of aberrants and those with bounties. Spoiler: Relationships Liao Zhiji Xing (Lover): My lotus flower. Sexual Attraction – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Romantic Attraction – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦ - 10/10 Family Bond – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Loyalty – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Hatred – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Respect – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Caring – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧ - 9/10 Trust - ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦ - 10/10 Rennyn Caranis (Old Close Friend): The pranks we used to play. Sexual Attraction – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Romantic Attraction – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Family Bond – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Loyalty – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Hatred – ✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 2/10 Respect – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧ - 7/10 Caring – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧ - 9/10 Trust - ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧ - 7/10 Anya (Old Close Friend): We never got along, until we did. Sexual Attraction – ✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 2/10 Romantic Attraction – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Family Bond – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Loyalty – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Hatred – ✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 2/10 Respect – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧ - 7/10 Caring – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Trust - ✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧ - 5/10 Gehrman (Old Close Friend): You were always the smart one. Sexual Attraction – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Romantic Attraction – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Family Bond – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Loyalty – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧ - 9/10 Hatred – ✦✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 1/10 Respect – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Caring – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧ - 9/10 Trust - ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Jayden(New Friend): A surprisingly funny Sihndar. Sexual Attraction – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Romantic Attraction – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Family Bond – ✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 3/10 Loyalty – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧ - 6/10 Hatred – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Respect – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧ - 8/10 Caring – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧ - 6/10 Trust - ✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧ - 6/10 Silver(New Friend): Your jokes are shit. Sexual Attraction – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Romantic Attraction – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Family Bond – ✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 0/10 Loyalty – ✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 3/10 Hatred – ✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧ - 5/10 Respect – ✦✦✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧ - 6/10 Caring – ✦✦✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 4/10 Trust - ✦✦✧✧✧✧✧✧✧✧ - 2/10
Active Spoiler: Aaliyah ⤞ Name: Aaliyah ⥀ Full Name: Aaliyah Architorus ⤞ Age: 26 ⤞ Gender: Female ⤞ Race: Mahalar ⥀ Mother: Altalar ⥀ Father: Qadir ⤞ Eye Color: Brown ⤞ Hair Color: Dark Chocolate Brown ⤞ Hair Style: Long, left down with a ring of braids around her head ⤞ Skin Color: Dark Caramel ⤞ Clothing: Blue flowing garbs or a red outfit suited for hot weather ⤞ Height: 5ft 4in ⥀ Centimeters: 162.56 Spoiler: Silyanali ⤞ Name: Silyanali ⥀ Full Name: Silyanali Nic Anfalyn Uí Róisehan ⤞ Age: 21 ⤞ Gender: Female ⤞ Race: Half-Elfin ⥀ Mother: Altalar ⥀ Father: Ériunin Ailor ⤞ Eye Color: Green ⤞ Hair Color: Bright Auburn ⤞ Hair Style: Long, often left down or braided, yet occasionally in a bun ⤞ Skin Color: Pale white ⤞ Clothing: Simple green silk garments, occasionally paired with furs in colder weather ⤞ Height: 5'1" ⥀ Centimeters: 152.4 Inactive Spoiler: Mmyollara ⤞ Name: Mmyollara ⥀ Full Name: Mmyollara Selra'mmyanir ⤞ Age: 30 ⤞ Gender: Female ⤞ Race: El-Maraya ⤞ Eye Color: Pink ⤞ Hair Color: Pink ⤞ Hair Style: Tied up in a neat bun ⤞ Skin Color: Light blue ⤞ Clothing: Tight and rather revealing clothing ⤞ Height: 5ft 7in ⥀ Centimeters: 170.18 Spoiler: Viedriekh Dahnvaazs ⤞ Name: Viedriekh Dahnvaazs ⤞ Age: 34 ⤞ Gender: Male ⤞ Race: Kathar (Shenath) ⤞ Eye Color: Sky blue ⤞ Hair Color: Stark White ⤞ Hair Style: Cut short ⤞ Skin Color: Dark gray, tinted red ⤞ Clothing: Blue shirt with gray pants, boots ⤞ Height: 6'3" ⥀ Centimeters: 190.5 ⤞ Other: Red snake tattoo with a red unionist eye as the head wrapped around one arm
Here is my review: Personality and Abilities You've listed that the character is very devout in both Nessrassian and Void Worship, yet neglect to mention much of either in the life story. Even more than that, how would your character manage to be equally or more devout in one religion than the other? Don't they clash? If that's not the case, what does Xollrazsa do to mediate the difference in beliefs? Please either remove one of the religions or provide an explanation through the life story, and I'll be happy to mark this as approved.
@apath Large aesthetic update to make the app much prettier, though also reworked proficiencies entirely, switched out Crimson Truths for Crimson Curse, added inventory section, and changed the backstory slightly. Requesting Re-Review!
Soo, after some consideration I've decided to drop Conning Rogue entirely, due to it not being used irp very often, and freeing up space for more usable proficiencies. This send me on a sizable reworking of Xollrazsa's profs and clarified his religion. Also switched out Daendroquen dialect for Kathar Elven, as I almost never use Daendroquen. Edits in blue. Requesting a re-review @apath This should be the last one for a good while! Thank you!
Vampires do not adhere to religion all that much. Lower all other faiths to reflect this and change it back whenever the character is cured. Void Worship also conflicts with the other two.
@Caelamus Looks like I've done it again. Xoll has been cured, and thus his religions, ritualisms, and proficiencies have been changed. Proficiencies changed to add sorcery. Religion changed as his faith in the void dropped drastically and his beliefs in dragon worship and the nessrassian faith increased back to normal. Needing a quick re-review! Edits in Green!
@Caelamus Needing a quick Re-Review! After the linguistics change I've brought back her original design of being a linguist, boosting my linguistics in stead of athletics. Sorcery spell changed as the previous was never used. Ailor society pack bought as well. Edits made in blue.
@Caelamus Just a small prof change, adding back a bit of athletics, lowering linguistics just a bit and other very minor edits. Needing just a quick re-review when you have the chance to make sure that's all in order!
@Caelamus Updated a bit on the app to incorporate the new prof update! I also added the inactive Alais mutations just in case he gets turned again. All edits done in purple!
@Caelamus A few small changes. I changed a few prof points around, removed some from Alchemy, added frontline and statecraft command and a few arts profs. Added a bit of backstory as well and fleshed out my inventory section! A short re-review when you get the chance would be wonderful! Edits done in this color.
@Caelamus Did a rather big proficiency redo and a bit of adjustment to backstory. I love this character but their concept and such had gotten stale, so instead of scrapping them I opted for a rewrite of their proficiencies entirely and to change their backstory just a bit due to new updates and such that she hasn't been updated to. All changes are marked in blue!
@AnimalisticArts Just to not keep you waiting any longer, I've looked over your edits. The point spread is fine and the switch to Dragon Faith is noted. Approved!
