Vrez Tol'Stomakh Basic Information Full Name: Vrez Tol'Stomakh Age: 62 Gender: Male Race: Maz-Allar Sexuality: Heterosexual Preferred Weapon: An ornate spear, which he carries on his back Skill Information (Total Points: 50+10 Hobby) Hunting Arts: +10 Hobby points Wall Climb 3: +3 points Fist Combat: +15 points (+5 free racial boost) = 20 points Spear Combat: +12 points Perception: +10 points Bola Combat: +10 points Body Shape 25 Body Stat (MAX) - Ripped and low body fat Languages Mother tongue- Zasta Second language- Common Tongue Visual Information Eye Color: Yellow Height: 6'4 Hair Color: N/A Hair Style: N/A Skin Color: Blue Clothing: A blue and black cloak Personality and Abilities Choose your Character Alignment Chaotic Neutral Choose your Character Personality Type Logician Choose your Character's Religion The Great Alchzech Life Story Spoiler: Pre Current Day Vrez was born in Zeerak, the Allar city ruled by Ailor nobility. Being one of the few allar societies with such a high presence of ailor, Vrez's family had to adjust to many of the ailor customs. For this reason, his family followed a very distinct form of draconic unionism. They never really had a distaste for other beings, except those of the void. Vrez was typically regarded as a far more tolerant member of the draconic unionists, which came as a shock to his fairly devout parents. Being of the Mu-Allar caste, Vrez was conscripted as an allar shock trooper at a very early age. His family learned to deal with his absence, and kept to their glassworking. Unfortunately, due to his young age Vrez was at a disadvantage in comparison to the other Mu-Allar. This feeling of inferiority manifested in him, as he never really leveled the playing field with his older counterparts. Despite his respectable caste, Vrez always strived to make himself a viable warrior within his unit. Vrez became a master of smaller blades, utilizing a pair of serrated daggers as his primary mode of arms. While not in training, he frequently set out into the natural environment to hunt and test his own abilities. He became good at his trade, despite being forced into it. While he didn’t particularly like his job or caste, he learned to master it. His dream work in truth was working with alchemy. Being a very typical science learned within society in Zeerak, the stewards saw it unnecessary for an allar as martially skilled as Vrez to be placed into a separate discipline. It was instead a side job, something that Vrez took on when he was on leave from his soldiering. During the Chrysant war, Vrez was ordered into service against the Regalian invaders. Fighting viciously and without mercy, the young allar proved himself on the battlefield as a hardened warrior. Even in the losses, Vrez was there on the frontlines with his brethren to halt the ailor hordes. Particularly, Vrez was a jungle menace on ailor soldiers looking to advance. He would lay in wait deep in the jungle brush, only to pounce on his enemies like a lion would a gazelle. Vrez was known to butcher any man he laid his hands on, as for him this war meant a defense of his homeland. This proved for naught however, as soon the Regalian forces overwhelmed the Allar armies with their superior numbers. This is where he truly reached maturity, learning many lessons about the Ailor he had only learned of from his parents. He learned to control his feral instincts, except on rare occasion when ordered not to. This lesson of maturity brought other lessons with it. Vrez witnessed many of his kin slaughtered at the hands of the Regalians. He and his unit were driven into the jungles and surrounding landscape, forced to retreat from the overwhelming odds. When the war ended, Vrez was forced to settle into a society ruled by Ailor nobles. He resented it with every fiber of his being, but then acclimated to it eventually.
Peer Review Skill Information You can only spend 60 points, you gain 1 point every year up to 60 and the +5 bonus only applies if you younger than sixty. So in short, you gave 7 to many points. You would have 60 points to spend from your age, and the 10 to spend for hobby points. Also make sure to label your hobby points so say something like +10 Hobby Points of +10 from Hobby Points. You should also put where you get your Body Stat Total from so for example (20 Athletic Training x.5 = 10) + (25 Fast Blades Combat x1 =25) and so on. Visual Information Not the biggest deal but you forgot to put your height, since you’re a Mu-Allar it would be between 5’5 and 6’5. Welcome to the world allar brother
Please take away the 7 points seeing as you should only have 60 total. Also please put down hobby points next to the arts prof you have chosen to be such. Add up your body stat points as well and put it down. Make these changes in blue and then tag me! @Capriciousllama
@Nesstro I have made changes in accordance with new prof rules. Hopefully I got this right, so lmk if I need to change anything
Bumping this app. Proficiencies have all been updated, but beyond that it's a change from Mu allar to maz allar! @Messtro
