Vampire Eye

[Rip Shoul]

So here is my first attempt at drawing with a computer program (the subject is a vampire's eye). Please give me suggestions and critics.

 

[Sven_Tu]

Ooowaaah hahh das nice. I like how you also included the folds of the skin around the eye.I would just suggest making some of the features more sharper as it seems a bit blurry right now. I can also see what looks like strokes of a blur or smudge tool that "break" some of the lines.

That bloody tear <3
(Maybe make it bigger too)

-Sven Tu, who has a thing for eyes.

 

[Rip Shoul]

Ooowaaah hahh das nice. I like how you also included the folds of the skin around the eye.I would just suggest making some of the features more sharper as it seems a bit blurry right now. I can also see what looks like strokes of a blur or smudge tool that "break" some of the lines.

That bloody tear <3
(Maybe make it bigger too)

-Sven Tu, who has a thing for eyes.

Click to shrink...

Thank you, that is helpful. And yes, I know what you are talking about when it comes to the break in the lines. As for sharpening it up, I need more practice as I am drawing with a computer touchpad, not a drawing pad (my hand has trouble making straight lines using a touchpad).

 

[LadyTeddington]

My advice is to not use tools like the airbrush to colour in. And if you can, use layers. They are really useful. Nice job though!~

 

[Rip Shoul]

Hell, this was a long time ago.

Perhaps I will redo it.