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Played Character Vaéros Avethiä || The Scorched Divine

This character is actively played.

PuffyPigeon

The puffiest damn pigeon of them all..
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Character Information

◉ Full Name | Vaéros (Va-eh-rose) Na'ael Avethiä Bel-He'ilicinyä Lathai
ºº Alias: Corahaunt, Knight of Conflagration
ºº Regalian Address: Honorable
ºº Lathan Address: Sol of He'ilicinyä
◉ Heritage/Culture | Lanlath - Star of Calmness
◉ Age | 334 | Born: Jan 15th, 22 B.C. | ♑
◉ Gender & Pronouns | Cisgender Male | He/Him
◉ Religion | Highly Devoted Estelley
◉ Occult | Magewise, Strangle Marken, Sapphora Godborn
ºº Planar Alignment: Void
ºº Schools of Magic: Fire & Blood
◉ Occupation | Senleya Knight; Brightmoon Chapter & House Patriarch

Core Concept:
ºº Concept | A Damned Paladin | A former Ordvaan whose charismatic talents were used to betray his divine oaths and congregation, repaid in the form of a Godcurse sent from Cemaan. This Son of Sapphora, Goddess of Love, once more proves his promise by somehow surviving his punishment and making something of it, but is warped by his guilt and zeal in the process. As an outlet for this quiet blood-lust and another means to serve his gods, Vaéros swears by the Senleya Order to work by pen and by sword on Aloria.

Appearance Information:
ºº General Appearance | A tall Altalar with a lengthy yet elegant frame; an athletic dancer's physique. There are silver streaks in his very long hair as a man who looks somewhere in his mid-forties to fifties. Onlookers are unlikely to realize Vaéros is of mixed Heritage without questioning. He holds himself in a dignified and severe manner, looking something like a sinister warlock without being one at all.

ºº | Summary
◦ Eye Color: Glowing gold irises with pink petals, black sclarae.
◦ Complexion: Fair and heavily tattooed.
◦ Hair Color: Honey blonde and greying.
◦ Height & Weight: 6 Feet, 7 Inches | 220lbs
◦ Additional Features: Very long golden scaled snakes called Edriss (right) and Hedriss (left) from his head. Fangs, dull claws, and a black-out tattoo spanning his entire neck, chest, upper back and arms down to his wrists. As a Brightmoon Chapter Knight, his wings are fiery angelic.


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Proficiency Information | 14/14 Points Used

⬦◉ | 7 Attack (Faith) | 5 Defense (Magic) | 7 Persuasion | ◉⬦

  • POINT ALLOCATION
    DETAILS
    ◉ Intelligence | 00
    ◦| Adapt | Void Alignment: Mindcontrol (Godborn)

    ◉ Wisdom | 02
    ◦| Chem: Technique Parry, Bang

    ◉ Faith
    | 07

    ◦| Cleric | Void Alignment, Estelley: Judgement
    ◦| Paladin | Void Alignment, Estelley: Stance (Free), Antimagi, Burn, Revive, Smite, Savior, Rescue

    ◉ Magic | 05

    ◦| Magic | Void Alignment: Snare (Lanlath), Smog (Lanlath), Cleanse, Warp, Isolate, Safeguard (Adapt), Wardrobe (Adapt)
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  • SKILL INFORMATION
    DETAILS
    ◉ Languages | Universal Translator (Godborn)
    ◦ | Innate: Markenspeech (Bestial), Lenelämor (Love Language)
    ◦ | Native: Altalar (High Elven), Allorn (Ancient Elven)

    ◦ | Fluent: Common (English), d'Ithanie (French)

    ◉ Hobbies & Talents | A Scorned Magi-Paladin

    ◦ | Alchemy: Capable of producing Magic Aureates.
    ◦ | Magic | Themes: Homicidal Void-fire, Blood Moon, Blood Fixation
    ◦ | Athletic
    : Nature as a Marken, nurture in training as a paladin.

    ◉ Knight Mechanic | Senleya, Brightmoon Chapter

    ◉ Heritage Mechanics | Fully Lanlath


    ◉ Affinity Mechanics
    | Sapphora Godborn & Strangle Marken

    ◦ | Godborn: Vaéros is not currently spurned and has two snakes.
    ◦ | Marken: Aulhellion claims the Library of Forgotten Pleasures as territory.
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  • POINT ALLOCATION
    DETAILS
    ◉ Strength | 07
    ◦◦ | Athletic: Break Down, Force Toss
    ◦◦ | Melee: Weapon Throw (Free), Technique Parry, Diving Tackle, Shrug Off, Cheap Shot, Bruising Strike

    ◉ Constitution | 05
    ◦◦ | Training: Rebound
    ◦◦ | Shielding: Block (Free), Cover, Deflect, Snare, Slam

    ◉ Dexterity | 02
    ◦◦ | Roguery: Escape Artist, Dirty Fighter
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Plot Hooks & Backstory
⬦◉ || Sol of He'ilicinyä
⬦| Vaéros is a Sol over his household's own province in the Lathan Empire, the same place he grew up. This title is not relevant in Regalia, but may hold importance in the hearts of Lanlath or worshipers of Leyon who may refer to him as Sol. Regalian nobles who are interested in a positive relationship with Lathan may show respect to this too.

⬦◉ || Star of Calmness
⬦| Vaéros has excellent self-control and is resilient toward the mind-corrupting forces of Spirits. Thus, he feels confident while interacting with ones that aren't immediately violent. He may help Spirits help themselves.

⬦◉ || A Great Lindwyrm
⬦| Vaéros becomes Aulhellion, a golden Strangle Marken in the caves of Gloomrot. While unpredictable and base in its thinking, Aulhellion retains his personality. These aspects make the perfect conditions to learn more about who Vaéros is as a person and explore your own character's values. However, encounters must be private or arranged and Advanced Roleplay Mechanics accepted.

Years 22 - 0 BC | Ages 0 - 22 | Youth & The Apocalypse of Another Realm
Vaéros' mortal mother would prove herself worthy of baring a child of Sapphora, taking him to raise with her husband as part of a noble lineage. Two half-brothers would come after. As a yet unproven demigod, expectations were very high, but he otherwise lived a lifestyle defined by privilege with the typical means of Lanlath upbringing.
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the collapse of the Allorn Empire came, it would be Vaéros' glimpse of how sinister their civilization had become. As a civilian, he safely observes the horrific end to an era and the mixed feelings about it.
Years 0 BC - 230 AC | Ages 22 - 252 | Mastery & Middle-Age
◦ Vaéros puts great emphasis on his career as an administrator of education, inspired by the Teledden custom of a life-trade. House Avethiä's achievements include the establishment and sponsorship of many centers of research and learning, one of which being a college he would be superintendent of.
225 | When their mother suddenly perishes, her eldest and seemingly most competent inherits her title. Now Sol of He'ilicinyä, Vaéros is forced to put aside his primary focus in order to run the family to the best of his ability.
Years 230 - 312 AC | Ages 252 - 334 | Hersey, Collective Punishment & Penance
Vaéros is a grandfather and great-grandfather. He descends into Aloria for the first time to a mixture of astonishment, disgust and alienation. In Amontaar, he comes in touch with what is left of the Allorn Empire and becomes deeply acquainted while making close friends.
273 - 295 | In spite of being the head of a political entity somewhere far away, Vaéros tries his hand at being a spiritual leader in Ithania - an Ordvaan. Though earnest for the majority of his Alorian congregation's 22 year existence, something changes and Vaéros' becomes ruthless in his ambitions. This would culminate in being looked upon and judged by Cemaan herself for his manipulation of her word. His Godcurse as the monster called Aulhellion would be entirely devastating, tearing people close to him apart and dispersing his congregation. His immediate family would hide him away until he put himself together again, keeping the news of these events to their graves and blackmailing involved families into silence.
295 - 334 | Three years of misery and eventual mastery later, he would swear the rest of his life to the pentheon as part of his penance.
As a newly minted Knight, he returns to Ithania for another thirty-four years of service, eventually following his Lord to Regalia to carry out her judgement and watch her become a god.
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Sup there! I'll be picking this application up for staff review, expect a review shortly!
 
Sorry for the delay on this application, things got busy! But very well written, wonderful job on the proficiency points.

Approved. @PuffyPigeon
 
@Katiesc Changed power ring in favor of a better symbolic representation of this character. From Ulley to Ellea with a large owl familiar.
 
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@Katiesc My lad got infected and his proficiency and personality has thus changed. I'm also uncertain as to whether or not the timing is right for Middle Altalar to be his native language.
 
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Sorry for the wait, just got back from camping! Re-Approved.
 
Looks good! Approved, but also you have an extra point that you have not used so you can use that if you'd like to.
 
Worship and ring changed. Change and explanation of such in life story and personality is written in lilac. @Katiesc
 
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Hey there! It looks like you're five points over your limit! The Altalar are allowed 65 points from their age + 5 from their boost! Please adjust (It should come to 70 instead of 75).
 
Hello, here's a shnazzy review!

  • Proficiency Points:
    • You're five points over the limit. Altalar only gain up to 60 points (+5 boost included into the sum of 60) plus the +10 boost for being mundane (aside from Sorcerer). Please adjust this, @PuffyPigeon.
 
@Katiesc Was just approved for Ancient Character. Sorry to have you stare at this app yet again. Life story entirely rewritten. I'm also uncertain if the timing is right for his native language to be Middle Altalar.
 
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HELLO. First I'd like to say congratulations on your permission! But let's get to work.

My Review

Skill Information
  • Magical Knowledge: Demonology is no longer a magical knowledge option that you can pick from, please review the new list.
  • Languages: You've got a stack of free languages growing (Middle and Modern Altalar are a fair addition due to the perm). D'Ithanie feels out of place without linguistic points, so either remove this or add proficiency points.
Please make these changes and then get back to me!
@PuffyPigeon
 
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@Katiesc Update made to vampire mutations as an Alais! He isn't one atm, but I do have the traits in order right below the actual application. You know.. just in case. It's under the Sanguinism spoiler.
 
@ I don't have a reviewer anymore. Katie noooo...

Updated Sorcery. Also updated the Sorcery in the afflictions section beneath the original application.
 
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