|Theme| Spoiler: More Sketches And Art! "I'm a mere violet, tossed into a merciless breeze." Full Name: Sszaf'liz Lla'sviza Age: 56 251 AC June 22nd Gender: Agender Race: Sole-Slizzar "How deep does the fang piece?" Proficiency points: +50 Age | +10 Talent Boost | +10 Hobby Boost 10 Unused Points +3 Ritualism | 3 Proficency Points +5 Glaive Combat | 5 Proficiency Points +2 Spear Combat |2 Proficency Points +12 Arcanology Archblood Knowledge Essence Knowledge Artifact Knowledge Arken Knowledge +10 Medical Science | 10 Proficiency Points +5 String Instrument | 5 Talent Points Stealth Rogue | +5 Talent Points +12 Linguistic Science | 7 Proficiency Points | 5 Racial Boost +5 Writing Art | 5 Hobby Points +5 Dancing Art | 5 Hobby Points +1 Mixology Art | +1 Body Size Body Stat: 9 + 2 Dance Art | +5 Glaive Combat | +2 Spear Combat Body Shape: Average Body Fat: Low Body Fat Languages Zasta | Parent Farah'deen | Adopted Culture | Free Daendroquin | Adopted Culture | Free Ceardian | No Cost Linguistic Study Modern Altalar | Linguistic Science Kathar Elven | Linguistic Science Human Pack| Linguistic Science Mythic Pack Languages | Linguistic Science Special Traits Ritualist Abilities Ritualist Meld Ritualist Vocalisim "Their skin like silk... their eyes... Hypnotic." Eye Color: Purple Hair Color: Mauve purple with dull blue ends. Hair Style: Spiral of tentacles, falling shoulder length Scale Color: Mauve, possessing white & blue patterns. Clothing: Varies between templates Height: 5'8 "All good... Comes with a cost." Option Two: The Core List Choose your Character Alignment Chaotic Neutral Choose your Character Personality Type Logician INTP-A Choose your Character's Religion Nessrassian 7/10 Sszafliz would be considered more or less a 'basic' worshipper of the faith, upholding no true desire to be a vessel of the faith & spread its word nor see it hindered. "A secret never to be shared." Early Life: Sszaf'liz was created by a Mentor & a Student relationship in the heart of Hader, spending their early life "On the road" with their two parents. The Slizzar would be taken to Farah'deen where their teaching of sociology & medical studies would begin. Middle Life: The core of the Slizzar's life was filled mostly with pursuing their studies under the mentor ship over their parents & the discovery of other interests such as Arcanology & how to brew their own medical supplies. The serpent mixed with the Qadir crowed, opting to avoid the Songaskian population whenever possible, keeping to their own territory. Sszaf'liz would find the life they dwelled within to be rather lack lustre & soon found a festering desire to quench their need for more knowledge. Attracted by the rumour's of the repetitively mysterious nature of the magical status within far off lands, Sszaf'liz would spend a year preparing themselves for a journey to the four kingdom's of Dexai where they would take on a persona & smuggle themselves in within the eastern lands. Sszaf'liz would go on to spend almost a decade in the country, having only scratched the surface of what secrets the lands had to offer but it wasn't enough to keep the Slizzar captivated. Later Life: Sszaf'liz departed from Dexai, setting sail for Daenshore where they'd raise the curtain's to yet another over reaching episode in their life. In the earlier years of landing within the country, Sszaf'liz conducted themselves in a far more reserved manner & instead focused on expanding on their ability on their Linguistic skill's, specifically with the intent on absorbing information from texts created by the more magically inclined races of Aloria. As years shifted by, Sszaf'liz found themselves self involved as a steward at the liege of a wealthy family that would later be decimated within the clutches of Daenshore's cut throat political system though at the very least the Slizzar was able to gain plenty of new skills whilst under their wing. Diplomacy & Statecraft begun to fester within the serpents tool kit which came almost naturally, bolstered by the Slizzar's natural ability's & the likes. As the family fell, Sszaf found themselves rather happy to move on, having set up their own business by now on the side, promoting medical attention to those who lurked in the under city & slum of the country. Guided by ulterior motive, Sszaf'liz used this business as a front as they begun to grow far more aggressive with the tactic in bolstering their research. Those who granted even the slightest of hints of aberrancy would find themselves sooner or later within the serpents clutches for experimentation & research. Fruitless in their endeavour's it didn't take long for the Slizzar to be driven out once discovered & forced to seek a new land to infest. Now: Beckoned by all the strange anomaly's such as the raise of the deathlings & conjuring of Arken surrounding Regalia caught the Slizzar's ear, they'd travel to the holy city in yet another attempt to feed the endless gluttony for more knowledge that dwelled within.
@HydraLana Updated Proficiencies Updated Paragraphs marked in blue Minor word tweaks to life story I'd also like to request a wipe of this threads comments bar the top one if possible!
The sole change is to make her "Slum Body" a "Slim Body" to accommodate a correction made in error during that build's writing. Tag me once this has been done @NoRezForYou
@HydraLana Yet another update... This time a minor 11 point shift in points redacting 5 from Underworld, 5 from food science & 1 from medical to add +5 Musical Arts & +6 Linguistic knowledge. Edits in life story made in blue though some portions were reworded & cut out.
Approved, but I will ask that a) you change "Ceardian" to "Common" and b) Update their personality section to the latest format next time you update the application is any capacity.
@HydraLana I'd appreciate a re-review Age was adjusted to fit OOC time passing Mage Spark added Proficiency points adjusted to fit the above Unlocking of the Mage Spark included in life story.
Changes made in Brown? - Life Story remodelled - Updated Prof Points - Pending Aesthetic Change @Nesstro
Oops they were supposed to go into Medical knowledge. Doesn't need a re-review I don't think due to it being below 10 @Nesstro