Played Character Solā'nel "Stray" Velsa

[Jcboi5]

@Jouster
Hopefully this doesn't count as too much/ frequent?
Added Inquest Knowledge and swapped some other points around.
Also added a little extra detail onto the core concept.

 

[Caelamus]

Approved, though continue to tag Jouster for any future reviews.

 

[Jcboi5]

@Jouster
Well now, that update to Racials was a pleasant surprise!
Replaced Element Brand 3 with Exorcism 2, since know.
Dude can just create a magic aesthetic weapon instead of branding his current one now.
That's pretty much it.

 

[Jcboi5]

@Jouster
Prof Update time

 

[Caelamus]

Approved.

 

[Jcboi5]

@Jouster
Unsure if I'm still supposed to tag you for this but in the case I do:

Small proficiency re-work.
Used the extra point spent in Wisdom for another Engineering pack.
(made some more changes earlier but reverted them recently after re-thinking a bit)

 

[Jouster]

@Jouster
Unsure if I'm still supposed to tag you for this but in the case I do:

Small proficiency re-work.
Used the extra point spent in Wisdom for another Engineering pack.
(made some more changes earlier but reverted them recently after re-thinking a bit)

Click to shrink...

Everything is in order. Re-approved.

 

[Jcboi5]

@Caelamus
Changed Nature Magic to Arcane Magic.
I want to shoot lightning bolts and fireballs out of my hands.

 

[Caelamus]

Approved.

 

[Jcboi5]

@Caelamus
magic update go brrr
also swapped out the defensive point buy pack

 

[Caelamus]

Approved, but bare in mind this character cannot use or get greater mage spells.

 

[Jcboi5]

@Caelamus
update

 

[Caelamus]

I think this character follows a similar trend to your other where you are better off just biting the bullet and going for Greater Mage. Two points in strength is not going to make the character very competent in melee combat, just use Combatforce.

 

[Jcboi5]

Similar but not exactly the same here, I'd say.

Back in Stray's vigilantes days he'd probably have the equivalent of 3-5 strength, back before he invested more time into scholarly/wisdom stuff. But since he's retired from that, he's bound to be significantly weaker physically (no longer in his prime to speak), but I feel he should still have that experience in his mind. And while yeah, relying on Combatforce/Greater Mage would make more sense for this character (and I'll definitely use combat force for higher stakes combat), his previous life's effort and practice should still be around, even if a lot weaker.

Plus, I still want him to be capable of teaching sword stuff to people.

 

[Jcboi5]

@Caelamus
Updated for Teledden Altalar update.
Modified backstory a bit, reshuffled points around.
Changes in BLUE.

 

[Caelamus]

Approved.

 

[Jcboi5]

@Caelamus
Proficiency points re-shuffle and Religion update! Estelsoor go brrrrr
Changes in BLUE.

 

[Caelamus]

Approved.

 

[Jcboi5]

update time

 

[RaggedyGrace]

Claimed for review!

 

[RaggedyGrace]

Here's my review:

Proficiencies
-Please specify which artificier branch was chosen for your communicator pack

Abilities
-Please list your magical abilities underneath your ability information.

Outside of that, everything looks good and checks out. Please make the above edits, and tag me when your finished or if you have any questions!

 

[Jcboi5]

@RaggedyGrace Changes made!

 

[RaggedyGrace]

Approved!