Seth Lightendustspirit

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  1. Spazzy_12

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    . Full name: Seth lighten Johnson
    . Age: 19 years old
    . Gender: Male
    . Race: lexxon Ailor
    . Sexuality: not given

    Proficiency:
    Spendable proficiency points: 19
    Bola combat: 12 proficiency points
    Dagger combat: 15 proficiency points
    light ranged combat: 5 proficiency points
    Painting art: 2 proficiency points
    instrument art: 10 proficiency points


    Body shape:
    Physical Stat: 10 Dagger + 10 strength training = 20 physical stat
    Body Shape: Slim Body Shape
    Body fat: Low body fat

    Languages:
    . Common

    Special Traits/Spells/Mutations:
    . Void Ocular
    . Void Mark

    Visual Information:
    . Eyes: Right Iris: Deep brown
    . Eyes: Left Iris: Dark blue
    . Hair color: Brown
    . Hair style: Short/combed
    . Skin color: White/Tanned
    . Cloths: Traveling cloak with hood
    . Height: 5ft 9inch

    your Character Alignment:
    . Chaotic good

    Character Personality Type:

    . Adventurer

    your Character's Religion:

    . The Draoidh Feya

    Weaknesses:

    . Has trouble making eye contact with vampires because of the fact his parents were killed by them.


    Life Story:

    . Seth DustSpirit Grew up a single child on a lonely farm in the country. He helped his parents work on the farm for they had very little money and needed everything they could get. One night Seth's parents had to go to the nearby town "Black Hallows". Seth was used to this, and knew they would be back in a couple hours.

    When they had returned, Seth's mother "Scyllia" and his father "Taeral" seemed fearful about something. Seth asked them what happened but they shrugged him off and said it was nothing. That night, Seth heard a large Bang from outside and the door had been knocked down! Seth, who slept in the attic, Went silent.

    Then, He heard a scream and the sound of a crossbow being shot. after about an hour of silence, Seth took a deep breath and slowly came down stairs. There was a crossbow bolt stuck in the wall and a door completely ripped off its hinges, And there they were. His parents were Dead on the floor, His father stabbed, still holding the crossbow, and his mother seemed to have been bitten and died. Seth, Through tears remembered what his parents told him about vampires, the bite matched what they taught Seth. And at that moment, Seth swore to avenge his parents and get revenge on the vampires who ruined his life... It had turned out that Seth's parents insulted a vampire while they were in town, They got there revenge alright.
     
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    Taking this app for review!
     
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    • 'English' as a term does not exist in Aloria, the language is called Common.
    • Specify what all Proficiencies are going into Physical Stat calculation.
    • Change the last name to something else more likely of a last name.
    Make changes in a different color of choice and tag me when finished.
     
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    Thank you for the reply but what did you mean when you said "Specify what all Proficiencies are going into Physical Stat calculation."?
     
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    So basically it means showing what Proficiencies (the ones that grant Physical Stat) were used in the calculation of your Physical Stat. As just an example for what that looks like:
    • 20 Greatsword + 5 Strength Training = 25 Physical Stat
    I also need to ask that you be more specific about what type of weapons you are investing into, as of now you only list the general categories such as "Special Combat, Melee Combat, Ranged Combat, Visual Art, Musical Art." Specific Proficiencies are listed right next to the Proficiency Categories on the Proficiency wiki page.

    Make changes and tag me when finished.
     
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    @KrakenLord01 I finished but i'm not exactly sure if I did the proficiencies that go into physical stat thing right...
     
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    You have it right, just remember to have 15 Dagger into Physical Stat since that's how much you invested into Proficiencies. Otherwise, approved!
     
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