Art by Miles-Johnson Full Name | Serafim Dragić Race | Wildland Ailor, Vladno Age | 22 Sex | Male Sexuality | Heterosexual Eye Color | Light Blue. Current Titles | None Serafim believes in Evintarian Unionism, though not devoutly. He was raised under its teachings but remains unsure in his faith. Serafim is a studious man, though not weak physically. He spent much of his early life in pursuit of his studies but also is adept in some forms of combat, especially archery. Total Points | 49/50 Skill Points, 1 Unused Writing Art + 15 (+10 Hobby, +5 Honed Skill 2) Husbandry Art + 10 Pathfinding Art + 15 (+5 Racial Boost) Light Ranged Combat + 20 Linguistics +12 (+3 Honed Skill 1) 18 Physical Stat (Light Ranged Combat 20, Pathfinding Art 15) Hobby Points 10/10 | Writing Art +15 (+5 Honed Skill 2) Chosen Racial Abilities | Soul Bound 1 Honed Skill 1 Honed Skill 2 Linguistics | Calem Ithanian Dvala Clavna Common | Passive Vladno Language | Parental Calem | Linguistics Ithanian | Linguistics Clavna | Linguistics Dvala | Linguistics (Honed Skill 1) Prichna | Free Serafim has no abnormal traits. Serafim stands at 6’3’’ with short, blonde hair. He usually wears a black beret alongside more formal clothing. He has a groomed mustache, blue eyes, and extremely pale skin. He is muscular, but not extraordinarily so. He has a ripped body shape and low body fat. Voice Claim | x Familiars | Boris, Penguin Rodion, Heerstepper Childhood | Serafim was born in Mosokovo to Voronkov and Katerina Dragić, twins with his sister Aleksandra. Adolescence | He spent much of his adolescence reading and pursuing his education. He was formally trained by his father in archery with a light bow and became very adept at that style of combat. Early Adulthood | Serafim received an education at the Regalian Ecological Academy, preparing him to become a sage. He also learned to ride a horse during this time and began to write documents formally. Regalia | He moved to Regalia to get away from his abusive father and repressive family life under Vladno culture. He would come to find his twin sister also living in Regalia and would become friends with her once again. He now lives in the city as his sister’s, Baroness Dragic’s, advisor and confidant. Warrior Level 2, Sage Level 1
@Jouster Changed from Altalar to Ailor due to the family changing race! I reorganized the proficiencies and all of the changes are in BLUE!
@GriffinCA Here is my response! Skill Information Your physical stat calculates to 29, not 30! (15 Sword Combat + (0.5 x 12 Light Bow Combat) + (0.5 x Sailing Art) = 28.5). That's all. Just fix your physical stat. You'll be kept approved though.
Hey! I decided to redo the character because I wanted to do something else with him. @Jouster Thank you!
Proficiency Information Instead of formatting all of your proficiencies like equations, format them like this: You don't have to list all of the languages you purchased with Point-Buy separately under Proficiency Information. You can simplify it as "+9 Linguistics). After this, list the languages under Ability Information like this: Your physical stat rounds up to 18. Body shape & body fat are no longer written immediately after physical stat. Include this information in the second bullet of Appearance Information. That's all.
According to how I'm interpreting your Proficiency Information, I don't understand how 9 points invested into Linguistics leads to you having 4 languages (Which would cost 12 points without any abilities).
I used Honed Skill 1 to take away 3 points as I've already invested in Linguistics beforehand. So it would technically count as investing in 9 points, I thought.
It's a bit odd with how you format it. The way you edited it makes it spot-on though. This application is approved once more!
