Character Information Full Name: Sami Suavis Salvutaris Race: Half Minoor (Predominant), Half Isldar Age: 25 Gender: Female Eye Color: Blue Core Concept Sami is a Healer and pacifist, who believes that everyone should be healed regardless of circumstances and that inflicting pain unnecessarily onto others is wrong. Proficiencies 14/14 points invested. Strength: 4 Hunter Pack Tactician Pack Brutalist Pack Heavy Pack Constitution: 0 Wisdom: 4 (Jalidtech) Artificer Medical Pack Artificer Barricade Pack Affliction Wisdom Pack Dimenthist Wisdom Pack Dexterity: 0 Magic: 4 (Exist) +1 (Teledden Special) School of Materialism School of Enchanting School of Blessings School of Disruption School of Displacing Charisma: 2 Empire Linguist Pack Pet Husbandry Pack (Calemberger Fox) Abilities Teledden Racials Artificer Pack Specials Medical Patent Common Patent Servo Golem Patent Biotic Patent Spell Pack Specials Surfwalking Dressage Cleanse Sanctum Vessel Health Call Arcane Mastery (Free - Teledden) Life Wall Pocket Scan Fire Element Dream Element Time Element Heat Immune Snow Element Cold Immune Arcane Sight Arcane Wardrobe Lightning Immune Languages Common (Free) Altalar (Native) Empire Linguist Pack (Linguistics) Appearance Information Sami has a no mutation. Sami is a shorter than average Minoor woman who wears a simple Green Robe and a smile on her face. She has her Isldar mothers white hair, with a green Minoor tint from her father to it. Life Story Sami was born in the Calem regions to Genitrix Carissime, an Isldar Bene Vixit who fled her home and couldn't just observe anymore and Talo Eiectio Salvutaris Minos Alas, once a scribe in a palace on some Minoor Island before being exiled for his high magical abilities, whom Genitrix rescued. In her childhood Sami was brought up with select values from both Minoor and Isldar's Life Cult. In her early adulthood Sami attended a Mage academy, she also helped out in her local clinic where she learned alot about medicine. Sami came to Regalia after meeting travelers who needed a Healer on their journey. On the journey she learned of the wide world that needs her healing and decided to start in the capital.
Only clarify which half race for the purpose of what abilities/specials they get derived from racial. The other racial component doesn't need to be clarified or could just be clarified in backstory or under their visual information. This is sort of confusing to read. Just put East Linguist pack and it'd be assumed you gain all the languages that accompany. You can only have one native language though aside from common for free. Magesparks are the definition of someone who is born a mage, for that you'd need to apply for a custom kit. Just say they have a mutation that alters their hair, that's fine. Or just dye it actually since having a mutation to have normal hair is kind of weird. Actually a personal take on aesthetics. I think it would be pretty cool for the Minoor bit to be really clarified here with the character having white hair that's more minoor green towards the edges and they just dye it brown as opposed to having a mutation for it. This goes back to the mutation bit. A person Magespark is someone who is born a mage, that is a custom kit/special permission that you need to apply for. You can just be a mage who learned magic and got mutations from their magic.
@Caelamus Thanks for reviewing. Ah okay, changed. Yeah so i just looked at the Altalar page saw all those languages in the small quick guide and thought that they get all of them. Changed. p.s. since i grew up both Isldar and Altalar would it be okay to both have the Altalar and Isldar native language? Ah okay this confused me a bit and like you suggest i'll just change it to my character dyeing her hair. Changed. Dropped. Thanks for the pointers and hopefully it is acceptable now.
@Caelamus Became Archon so i updated the sheet, let me know if it needs more info. Also here is proof. Changes in Pink Just noticed i spelled the last name wrong but fixed it
@Caelamus Changes some things and updated the sheet to reflect some Archon stuff. Also switched to predominantly Isldar.
@Caelamus Added a pic of Sami and changed some small backstory info. Not sure it needs to be re-reviewed for it.
@Caelamus Sorry for the constant updates, hopefully this one will be the last one for a while. All changes marked in pink
