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Played Character Rydel Sylphaalor

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Mystiluu

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Mystiluu
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Age
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.ೃ࿐ | Full Name: Rydel Sylphaalor​

༊*·˚ | Nicknames: Ry, Little Man, Selkie​


.ೃ࿐ | Race: Half-Freefolk [Selvath]​

༊*·˚ | Recessive: Half-Fin'ullen
༊*·˚ | Racial Traits: Animal Masters, Forest Masters, Fin'ullen Underwater Breathing, Capitalism Free, and Beast Becoming​


.ೃ࿐ | Age: 21​

༊*·˚ Birthday: February, 7​


.ೃ࿐ | Gender: Male [He/Him]​



.ೃ࿐ | Religion: Evolist​

༊*·˚ | Occult: Healer Mage
༊*·˚ | Magic Schools: Mend, Familiar, Evergrowth, Elemental ​

.ೃ࿐ | Concept: Rydel grew up with several other siblings in Crookback and was often seen in violent scenes. Since then, he has grown as a person, and has gone down a path of peace after a disturbing past event. Though, there are times where the medic snaps and swings a tool at someone if pushed the wrong way.​
༊*·˚ | Religion: Rydel worships Morrlond, but his way of worship is different from others. While some may fight in his name outright, Rydel is on a different battlefield. One that is on a timer and lots of bandages. ​


.ೃ࿐ | Appearance: Rydel has become rather thin over the years, only maintaining a slight toned build from the running around he does. His hair is naturally a dark brown, but has lightened due to being in the sun constantly, along with a little bit of dye. His eyes are a light blue and little scars are scattered around his eyes, a story for another time. Freckles are scattered around his body, along with patches of dark blue scales, and they truly accent his dark-tan skin tone. He is often seen wearing a log of jewelry, mostly ones made of beads, and seashells. Rydel also wears sashes and very loose fabrics with tighter clothing underneath. Mostly the extra fabric is there to hide his bag in case of skittering thieves.​
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'Fates of two. Entwined.'

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Strength: 1
| Steady Body
Wisdom: 6
| Medical Buff
| Medical Bolster
| Medical Barrier
| Medical Canteen
| Medical Resist
| Medical Rescue
Magic: 7
| Racial: Magic Shove & Magic Revive
| Magic Snare
| Magic Resist
| Magic Smog
| Magic Cleanse
| Magic Lifebind
| Mounted Getaway
| Wardrobe Pack​









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.ೃ࿐ | Languages: few​

༊*·˚ | Known: Natl, Altalar, Common
༊*·˚ | Learning: Pannarokh​







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.ೃ࿐ | Stupid Luck: Rydel is the one non-brood in the Sylphaalor family, he does not look nor act like most of his siblings.
.ೃ࿐ | Seen Through Sound: After coming back from a trip in far lands, Rydel came back with no sight. Later on he gained his eyes back, but he still uses the senses he grasped during that time in darkness.
.ೃ࿐ | Pride: For a short time after the vampire crisis, Rydel was a Manathar until it was soon revoked from Aloria.

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@BeaneyBaby Apologies for the delay! Please make the following edits and tag me once complete:
  • You're over the cap on proficiency points by 1 if I counted correctly

I would also encourage you to move a good number of proficiency points into unspent; they feel very over-skilled for a 14-year-old. However, this is only a recommended change and not a required one.
 
Azas said:
@BeaneyBaby Apologies for the delay! Please make the following edits and tag me once complete:
  • You're over the cap on proficiency points by 1 if I counted correctly

I would also encourage you to move a good number of proficiency points into unspent; they feel very over-skilled for a 14-year-old. However, this is only a recommended change and not a required one.
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I just removed cooking and took a few points from baking for unused points. Done and done.
 
@Azas Eyo, I re-did some points, added a lil thing to life story to support that. He is also 18 now.
 
Hey there! Going over your app now, but there's a few points that need to be tweaked before I can give it the greenlight:

Languages
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  • You have 5 spells selected but have only purchased 4 with Point Buy. Please remove one or rework your points accordingly.
Two minor notes would be that Shrewd Insight 1 is misspelled on the abilities section, and your Phys stat is incorrectly calculated. The 2.5 from Circus or Theatre would round up to 3, which isn't a big deal since you're capped but may be relevant if points are ever edited.

Go ahead and tag me once you've made these changes and I'll look over, thanks!
 
Yurs said:
Hey there! Going over your app now, but there's a few points that need to be tweaked before I can give it the greenlight:



  • You have 5 spells selected but have only purchased 4 with Point Buy. Please remove one or rework your points accordingly.
Two minor notes would be that Shrewd Insight 1 is misspelled on the abilities section, and your Phys stat is incorrectly calculated. The 2.5 from Circus or Theatre would round up to 3, which isn't a big deal since you're capped but may be relevant if points are ever edited.

Go ahead and tag me once you've made these changes and I'll look over, thanks!
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I re-did all the stuff for ya! Thank you for claiming.
 
Looks good!

Also as a heads up, the names of the languages have changed with the new update. Modern Altalar is "Altalar", Plains Altalar is "Saan", Kathar Altalar is "Katharic" and Suvial Altalar is "Suvial". You can read more about it on the Linguistics page towards the bottom of the list. I'll go ahead and approve but please make sure to edit these for clarity. Thanks!

APPROVED
 
@Yurs This sheet needs a full re-review. Im new to Manathar things. The boy is PORPLE now.
 
Looks great! I just need one thing clarified and then I'm happy to approve:
  • Go ahead and list which plane their sorcery comes from (I believe Manathar can only use Void). This is important to have documented for the sake of ability interactions.
Once that's added go ahead and tag me and I'll get this greenlit right away! ^^
 
Yurs said:
Looks great! I just need one thing clarified and then I'm happy to approve:
  • Go ahead and list which plane their sorcery comes from (I believe Manathar can only use Void). This is important to have documented for the sake of ability interactions.
Once that's added go ahead and tag me and I'll get this greenlit right away! ^^
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I FIXED IT! Thankk you!
 
Howdy! So sorry for the delay, I got super sick this week.

There's just one thing that needs to be clarified before I can approve, otherwise this app is perfect and the new design is super cute:
  • Please clarify which plane Rydel pulls his sorcery from. (Exist or Void)
Go ahead and tag me once you make that edit, and I'll get this approved ASAP! Thank you ^^
 
Yurs said:
Howdy! So sorry for the delay, I got super sick this week.

There's just one thing that needs to be clarified before I can approve, otherwise this app is perfect and the new design is super cute:
  • Please clarify which plane Rydel pulls his sorcery from. (Exist or Void)
Go ahead and tag me once you make that edit, and I'll get this approved ASAP! Thank you ^^
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Fixed it! I hope you get better soon!
 
Hi! I'm not going to review this just yet because the proficiency update is due to drop in a few hours. Tag me after and I'll pop on over to get this approved
 
Hey there! Quick review.

Mystiluu said:
✧ Race: Half-Maquixtl
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Make sure to specify what his other non-dominant half is here, too. Fin'ullen I think.
Mystiluu said:
[ 3 points left-over ]
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You don't have to spend all your points on Point Buy, but you should allocate them all out to the various Proficiencies. You can always change this later to reflect IC learning, afterall.
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<< Magic: 3 >>
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Also, I would specify what dimension Rydel draws from here. My guess is the Void?
Mystiluu said:
<< Charisma: 2 >>
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It should be noted that while you get the Pet Husbandry Pack for free (which you should put in parentheses for clarity), it does not confer free Charisma Proficiency alongside it. So, you should only have 1 Charisma, not 2. Is just a Pack.

Aside from that, looks good! Mark any changes in blue and @Tag me when you're all set.
 
ezalB said:
Hey there! Quick review.


Make sure to specify what his other non-dominant half is here, too. Fin'ullen I think.

You don't have to spend all your points on Point Buy, but you should allocate them all out to the various Proficiencies. You can always change this later to reflect IC learning, afterall.

Also, I would specify what dimension Rydel draws from here. My guess is the Void?

It should be noted that while you get the Pet Husbandry Pack for free (which you should put in parentheses for clarity), it does not confer free Charisma Proficiency alongside it. So, you should only have 1 Charisma, not 2. Is just a Pack.

Aside from that, looks good! Mark any changes in blue and @Tag me when you're all set.
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ALL FIXED!! :D
I re-did the Maquixtl Racials because they got slapped with the upgrade button!!
 
Mystiluu said:
✧ Artificer: Scrapper Pack
✧ Common Patent
✧ Servo-golem Patent
✧ Biotic Patent
✧ Artificer: Communicator Pack
✧ Appliance Patent
✧ Hacking Patent
✧ Mindslave Patent
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Artificer/Technician packs only grant two specials each, not three! Go ahead and just slash out two specials here. Also make sure to indicate what Artifcer branch Rydel is utilizing! Probably Vivitech.
Mystiluu said:
✧ Scholarly: Soulrend Pack
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You should be sure to include a short description of Rydel's Void-based Soulrend avatar in the Appearance Section.

@Tag me once you've made those two changes!
 
ezalB said:
Artificer/Technician packs only grant two specials each, not three! Go ahead and just slash out two specials here. Also make sure to indicate what Artifcer branch Rydel is utilizing! Probably Vivitech.

You should be sure to include a short description of Rydel's Void-based Soulrend avatar in the Appearance Section.

@Tag me once you've made those two changes!
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I made the changes, for the tech I made it arctech, because that's the closet thing to what he had before the update. o7
 
Mystiluu said:
I made the changes, for the tech I made it arctech, because that's the closet thing to what he had before the update. o7
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Arctech works! Just add a short description of the Soulrend form underneath Appearance or Abilities and I'll approve this.
 

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