Rosie Maire Carlson

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  1. Timtam3998

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    Basic Information

    Full Name: Rosie Marie Carlson

    Age: 18

    Gender: female

    Race: Ailor

    Lexxons

    Colonial

    Keen Insight


    Sexuality: Pan

    Preferred Weapon: Bow

    Skill Information

    Total Points: 18+5+10+10= 43

    Core list - 8 invested - 5 age points - 3 hobby points

    Light bow Combat - 8 points

    Talent list - 19 invested 7 Hobby points

    Vocal Singing - 9 points - 7 Hobby points

    Strings instrument - 8 points - 8 talent points

    Hobby list: 20 invested - 2 talent points 18 age points

    Drawing art - 9 points - 2 talent points - 8 age points

    Cooking art - 9 points - 10 age points


    Body Shape

    Physical Stat: (8 low bow Combat Arts) *0.5 0-5 - 4

    Body shape: Average

    Body fat: Average

    Languages

    Common

    Visual Information

    The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list. Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list.

    Eye Color: blue

    Hair Color: red

    Hair Style: swapped to one side with light colored beads

    Skin Color: white

    Clothing: blue dress with gold triming

    Height: 5'2

    Option One: The Question List

    How would your character express Happiness and Contentedness?

    Hugs. if it was out of happiness then she hug them excitedly. if it was contentedness she would hug them to make them/her happy

    How would your character respond to experiencing Fear?

    Hide behind someone/something

    How would your character respond to experiencing Stress?

    Take a break and draw

    How does your character view Law and Authorities?

    She respects Authorities unless thare unlawful

    How does your character feel about Races other than their own?

    She's fine with them

    How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths?

    She lest people believe what they want to

    How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world?

    She loves it

    How does your character feel towards their family?

    Never knew them

    What is your character the most proud of about themselves?

    That they made a life for herself

    What motivates your character to move forward and better their life?

    Her friends

    What is your character's biggest insecurity?

    That her friends will leave her

    Life Story

    Rosie never knew her family; she was abandoned at birth for reasons unknown to her. She grew up in an orphanage and practically raised herself. She learned how to cook form one of the nicer caregivers and draw in her spare spartime and a boy at the orphanage teached her how to use a bow. Her Orphanage kicked her out ounce she was 18. So she decided to make a new life in Regalia. And hopes her life gets better
     
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  2. Lizmun

    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

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    Taken for review, expect one in the next 24 hours!
     
  3. Lizmun

    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

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    @Timtam3998 Hello! This is my review:

    Please fix your formatting - I can read it but it's a little difficult. It's mostly all the extra spacing.

    Basic Information
    - What lineage / culture is Rosie?​
    Skill Information
    - Please specify where you're putting core, free talent, and free hobby points, as well as your racial boost
    - Please specify what Ailor racials you have taken​
    Visual Information
    - Your visual information section is incomplete! Please remove the template blurb, and add a clothing section​
    Personality
    - No issues here​
    Life story
    - Your life story is very short, please flesh it out a little!
    Please make your changes in a separate color then tag me!
     
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