Basic Information Full Name: Rosie Marie Carlson Age: 18 Gender: female Race: Ailor Lexxons Colonial Keen Insight Sexuality: Pan Preferred Weapon: Bow Skill Information Total Points: 18+5+10+10= 43 Core list - 8 invested - 5 age points - 3 hobby points Light bow Combat - 8 points Talent list - 19 invested 7 Hobby points Vocal Singing - 9 points - 7 Hobby points Strings instrument - 8 points - 8 talent points Hobby list: 20 invested - 2 talent points 18 age points Drawing art - 9 points - 2 talent points - 8 age points Cooking art - 9 points - 10 age points Body Shape Physical Stat: (8 low bow Combat Arts) *0.5 0-5 - 4 Body shape: Average Body fat: Average Languages Common Visual Information The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list. Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list. Eye Color: blue Hair Color: red Hair Style: swapped to one side with light colored beads Skin Color: white Clothing: blue dress with gold triming Height: 5'2 Option One: The Question List How would your character express Happiness and Contentedness? Hugs. if it was out of happiness then she hug them excitedly. if it was contentedness she would hug them to make them/her happy How would your character respond to experiencing Fear? Hide behind someone/something How would your character respond to experiencing Stress? Take a break and draw How does your character view Law and Authorities? She respects Authorities unless thare unlawful How does your character feel about Races other than their own? She's fine with them How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths? She lest people believe what they want to How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world? She loves it How does your character feel towards their family? Never knew them What is your character the most proud of about themselves? That they made a life for herself What motivates your character to move forward and better their life? Her friends What is your character's biggest insecurity? That her friends will leave her Life Story Rosie never knew her family; she was abandoned at birth for reasons unknown to her. She grew up in an orphanage and practically raised herself. She learned how to cook form one of the nicer caregivers and draw in her spare spartime and a boy at the orphanage teached her how to use a bow. Her Orphanage kicked her out ounce she was 18. So she decided to make a new life in Regalia. And hopes her life gets better
@Timtam3998 Hello! This is my review: Please fix your formatting - I can read it but it's a little difficult. It's mostly all the extra spacing. Basic Information - What lineage / culture is Rosie?Skill Information - Please specify where you're putting core, free talent, and free hobby points, as well as your racial boost - Please specify what Ailor racials you have takenVisual Information - Your visual information section is incomplete! Please remove the template blurb, and add a clothing sectionPersonality - No issues hereLife story - Your life story is very short, please flesh it out a little! Please make your changes in a separate color then tag me!