Basic Information Full Name: Reinhardt de Milton Alshultz Age: 45 Gender: Male Race: Leutz-Vixe Ailor (Bolven Lineage) Sexuality: Heterosexual Preferred Weapon: Axes Skill Information Total Points: 45+5 =50 +25 Axe Combat Skill (Bolven Lineage) +10 Unarmed Combat Skill +10 Labour Training +5 Magical Knowledge (Shatterology) +10 Carpentry Arts (Hobby Points) Ailor Lineage: Bolven Hardy Constitution - Reinhardt appears to be in almost peak physical condition. Versatile Instinct - Reinhardt's body shape can change regularly, but maintains a powerful looking physique (mostly for his own aesthetic reasonings). Hidden Stature - While his actual height rests at 7'1, Reinhardt dislikes his towering figure. With this ability, he hides his height at around 6'4 Body Shape 25 Axe Combat Skill + 10 Unarmed Combat Skill +10 Labour Training = 45 Burly Body Shape Built Body Fat Languages Common (Learnt in childhood) New Regalian (Learnt in childhood) Visual Information Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Dark brown, graying Hair Style: Shaved sides, mohawk Skin Color: Ailor Pink Clothing: Heavy plate or Kiltach, White Lion Pelt with taxidermy head on shoulder. Height: 7'1 (Though appears 6'4) Personality and Abilities The Core List Choose your Character Alignment Lawful Good Choose your Character Personality Type The Craftsman Choose your Character's Religion Unionism 5 Life Story Early Years Born to Luthor and Priscilla Alshultz in 265AC Born into a well off family, with enough wealth to own a few orchards. His early years were rather dull, but Reinhardt did have aspirations. He would often play a pretend game of knights with his circle of friends, and dreamed of becoming a fancy knight in polished armor. Teenage Years His dreams came true when at age fourteen he was placed in the Emprizais du Lion Castle to become a Lion Pelt Knight. Going through his training, Reinhardt excelled. He was strong with the Beorl Axe and proved himself a capable warrior. He graduated from the school at the age of 24 and received his Lion Pelt. Adult Years Reinhardt entered the service of many lords follow his graduation. He would always return to the Emprizais du Lion Castle four times a year to pay his fee and share his stories. Reinhardt eventually made it to Regalia, to serve under political officials or any who could afford him. However, days after his arrival the Deathling Occupation began and he was swept out to Kronau Castle with the rest of the resistance. He led the scouting mission to find Dessau Castle and submitted to the Apex Tristan Kade and became a Hellion Beast. He and his pack brothers and sisters raided and murdered all throughout Regalia before being stopped at the Battle of Rothburg. Reinhardt was cured of the Hellion curse and set back to work days later. He remained on the downlow for the next year, taking odd jobs guarding whoever he could. He returned to the spotlight recently with joining the Bellator Order. Over the years since his transformation into a Hellion Werebeast, Reinhardt became more intrigued about the inner workings of the world, his eyes being opened to the existence of the Arken and Werebeasts. He would trek across the known world, gathering information on the subjects now so dear to him, and because of this, learned more about Shatterology than the average man, the soul lines of Werebeasts and much more on the subject. He took part in a diplomatic trip to the Elven Kingdom of Äloï-läy with the Kade Court and received a special gift from the Botanist, Ölvea seeds. The remain unplanted. Reinhardt protected Florance Kade and a large group of aristocrats during the siege of Greygate by the Clickers, and after meeting Tristan Lampero, his Apex again, Reinhardt's mind has eased away from that of Werebeasts and Arken, to a life of servitude to the family who he, in his mind have done so much for him. At this current time, Reinhardt lives a life without value. A lifetime of service to others has put him in a strange position where he has no self worth. Because of this, he seeks service within the Imperial Guard.
Review Personality and Abilities On the First Paragraph, how do people view these reckless decisions? Do they make people less likely to want to be associated with him? Or alternatively, they want him because he will be willing to do more reckless things? What I want to see is how people view and act around his recklessness. Your fourth paragraph is lacking. How has his experiences shaped his morality? Did the marken episode effect his morality and does his current moral code differ from then? Talents Your Common Sense talent seems to go against his nature for reckless decisions. Either replace one, or explain how this doesn't interfere with that as being reckless goes against common sense in many situations. A simple sentence can work for this. Physical Strength is more aligned to his body build more than it is a talent. Replace it with something else, though this is not required for approval. Make the above changes and tag myself once completed @Greenie
@Wumpatron - Removed Recklessness from first paragraph. - Expanded morals. - Didn't remove Physical Strength.
Character sheet updated to display Proficiency Points. Added a short sentence in the life story to give him his Pre-Cataclysm History Perk. Tagging @Mooffins to review. Updates to the life story are in Red.
I am a muffin, this is my review You currently have 10 extra proficiency used. 10 for the Viridian Schooling, then 30 of your main proficiency points, then 5 Pre-Cataclysm and 5 Battle Command for a total of 50. You need to bring it down to 40 or age the character to meet what points you are using. Tag me once completed @Greenie
This character has been rewritten into the Lion Pelt Knights. Changes: Upped age by one year. All proficiencies changed. Culture changed from New Regalian to Leutz-Vixe to better suit the Lion Pelt Knights Personality Traits slightly altered to portray a Lion Pelt Knight instead of a Viridian Life story dramatically altered to portray new version of the character.
