Basic Information (Required) Full Name: Pua Iniki Heart Age: 34 Gender: Female Race: Pua is Full Altalar: Dressolini Main Ambition: Ever since Pua was born, and heard some stories, about princesses, who were saved by white knights, Pua had always dreamed of finding the perfect match for herself. Every male she had fallen in love with, up until now, had betrayed her. She had the wish growing, and growing, through each, and each, betrayal. Special Permission: N/A Visual Information (Required) Eye Color: Amber Hair Color:Brunette Hair Style: Short/long hair, side bang Skin Color: Peach and pail Clothing: Variety of blue clothes Height: Six Feet Weight: 132 pounds Body Build: lean Weapon of Choice: Six concealed six inch daggers/ Slither magic: Toxic Expansion, Caster Personality Traits Funny: Pua loves to mess around, trying to give people a good laugh or two. She is a very humorous and sarcastic person. Most people find her sarcasm highly annoying but to her it's hilarious. Making a person happy makes her happy because she feels like she helped. She acts like a child when stressed, this also makes her look "funny" but she knows when to stop goofing off and act serious. Loyal: Pua, having many friends that were not loyal to her, decided to take an oath that she would always be loyal to all her friends. If Pua counts you as a friend, that means she's giving you her loyalty. Being a friend to Pua comes with many advantages, it's the friends who don't abuse this that get the most out of her friendship. Even though most people don't give her their loyalty she still is loyal to them. This also makes Pua a very trustworthy and kind friend. This means that her friends can go to her in a time of need, for either help or just to talk about a problem, giving them someone to talk to. Sweet: Pua has her ups and downs but, is almost always sweet to others despite the pain and suffering she's encountered during her life. She realized that being sweet and caring got her where she is today. She never dwells on the past, having a fear she would one day look back at her enemies and lose her sweet personality to hatred and revenge. She struggles to keep her head held high but still tries to help others. Morbid: Pua isn't the most normal person out there, she has a very odd imagination, and can think of things kids would only imagine about in their nightmares. Despite her sweet personality, she does have quite a dark side. This dark side makes her think and images very violent things, like her friends and family dying in front of her, being brutally murdered or maybe even losing a loved one. She keeps this very hidden and never tells people about it because she's scared that people will find her "too odd." Stubborn: Pua can be a very stubborn person at times. For example, if she's in an argument she will not give up easily. Pua wants to get her point across and won't tolerate no for an answer. She won't give up without a fight, her friends usually have to drag her away from an argument before things get out of hand. She finds her words to be a very powerful thing. If people try to get answers from her it won't be easy. Pua is very stubborn when it comes to secrets and giving them away. Anxious: Pua gets very anxious around a lot of people or people who have a higher authority than her. She doesn't like being yelled at. When she is yelled at she will get scared and will at most times do what she is told when yelled at directly. She also doesn't like people yelling around her or loud noises. Loud noises usually make her feel uncomfortable. The reason she doesn't like yelling is because she was yelled at a lot as a kid and she gets the feeling she has done something wrong when yelled at. Strengths Dexterity: Pua is able to dodge attacks rather well, during her time as a Sanguine she thought it would be best to go somewhere away from regalia for a while so she went to this place called Silver-wind. When she got there she met a few people, these people became her best friends and they helped train her in different skills, helping with dodging and combat. She is also a contortionist so she can do a lot of difficult moves that most people might not be able to achieve, giving her a slightly higher advantage agents her attackers. Stamina: Pua has a very high stamina, meaning she can fight for long amounts of time without getting tired or weak. She has been trained most of her childhood. When she was six years old her parents started training her in agility and contortion. At age eight due to family issues she ran away from home and traveled for most of her life, joining a pirate crew and sailing the seas, joining this crew also gave her time to work on these her agility and contortion. Nursing: Pua has had a lot of experience with injured people. She knows how to properly clean and stitch a stab or deep cut. One day her dad Helix ( @AmberAnole ) Stabbed himself in the clinic, luckily Pua was there to save him, she stopped his bleeding,cleaned his stab, and stitched it up like a professional, saving her father's life. Pua has also saved many others lives and hopes to save many more. Weaknesses Focus: Pua has a really hard time focusing after many head injuries. At random times she will zone out and not be responsive to her surroundings or to the things touching her. One of the incidents happened at the tavern. She was helping a little kid from getting kidnaped and a guy called the Ripper grabbed Pua by the neck and slammed her head into the table cracking it open and causing brain damage, this has happened twice. Temper: Pua has a very high temper, she gets annoyed very easily. She is not good with kids, after her first child's death whenever she sees a baby or child she gets angry and upset. Her now dead husband Lance ( @Completely_Evan ) jumped off the roof of the tavern with their child after going insane from being kidnaped and released. He was thought to be dead but survived the fall but sadly the baby died. This made her more frustrated with life and has a really challenging time controlling her anger. Dependent: Pua is a dependent person. She relies on her friends to help her in a time of need, not being strong enough to take down multiple people at once. She is not good at fights involving more than two people. If it gets to the point where she's alone and fighting more than two people she starts to panic and tries to think of more tactical methods to beat them but this slows her speed down dramatically. Life Story (Required) Birth Pua was born into a very poor family of Slither mages. She had a mother named Batya, a father who went by the name Ingrid, and an older brother named Sage. As a baby her mother was very caring to her, but her father was not. Wile Puas mother cared for her, Puas dad cared more for Sage. Her brother had to watch her for long periods of time, while her mom and dad went out to train for their magic. When they were gone Sage abused Pua. Sage would yell at her, and sometimes even physically hurt her. Her brother was evil like her dad, Sage would sometimes get a dagger and slide it across Puas legs and arms, making designs and sometimes even just plain out slitting her skin for his own pleasure. This lasted for about four years. Child At age five Puas dad corrupted her mother by poisoning her, this her made her go insane, and changed her feelings for Pua. Batya's passionate love for Pua soon turned to hatred! Her parents would abuse her and make her work hard, if she didn't do what they asked, they would push her harder.Her brother was the only one she could go to for help, even though he was also abusive, he still cared for her and she still cared for him. It was when Pua turned eight, her brother ran away from home, only leaving behind a small dagger. Pua cherished this dagger because she feared that it would be the last thing left to remind her of her brother. She thought really hard on a safe spot to put it and winded up sticking it in her boot pocket. After he left it was just Pua, Ingrid and Batya. Puas dad desisted that It would be a good idea to bring her to one of their magic training, little did she and know it was all a setup. Once they got there out of nowhere, her dad quickly pulled out a blade and slit her moms through. Pua stood there petrified and didn't know what to do. A few seconds later her dad ran towards her with the blade still in his hand. Without even thinking she quickly took the dagger out of her boot and swung her hand, cutting her dads through, and killing him. She quickly ran up to her mom to see if she was still alive but sadly she was not. She looked farther down her mother's dead body and saw something sticking out of her boot, She took off her mother's boot revealing four six inch daggers. She then put these daggers in a bag and ran! Teen When Pua was thirteen she ran into a little town, this town was unnamed and its destination was unknown. The town was fairly small, only having around thirty houses and a few people. Pua walked into a little shop that was in the town called Denche to get some food and water for her travels when out of nowhere several men attacked her. Pua was then stuffed in a sack and brought onto a ship. The men turned out to be pirates. Once on the boat the men tied her up to a post and gave her two options, to either be a void sacrifice or to learn slither magic for their own benefits. Pua was never told what these benefits were and she didn't want to end her life so soon so she accepted there the second option. Her teacher for slither magic was named Roven the co-caption of the ship. After training with Roven for about three years still being captive on the ship and not knowing what their intentions were, Rove actually felt pity for Pua. Roven had noticed that Pua was a sweet girl and that she might not be good for the job they intended her to do for them. Roven one day went to the caption and told him a lie, he told the caption that Pua was to week to do the job. The captain replied by saying throw her over-bored. Roven then went back to Pua and told her what he did. He didn't want her to drown so he tied her hands to a large piece of drift-wood then throw her over-bored. Pua was left in the middle of the ocean with no sign of land. After a few days of swimming. Another boat spotted Pua and decided to help her. These people were carrying cargo to Regalia. Once she was on the boat the people notice she was in a bad condition being dehydrated. They gave her some water and let her sleep on the lower deck. After a few weeks, the ship docked at Regalia. Pua left the boat and saw a big wall and a ton of people. She was amazed how large Regalia was and didn't know what to think of it. First love Once she got to regalia she tried to blend into the crowd, she stumbled upon the Golden Willow and met a man there who went by the name Anthony. They two talked and got to know each other after the day passed Pua had nowhere to go for the night, so Anthony offered to show her a place that was hidden and quite. Anthony seemed to have a liking to Pua and decided to open up to her. The two became best friends and winded up spending a lot of time with each other. One day Pua went to the Willow and saw people she recognized. She quickly ran to where she was staying and started to cry, being afraid that she would never be safe. Soon Anthony came back and saw her crying, he rushed over to her and talked to her about it. She told him that she had a weird feeling deep inside that she has never felt before, that feeling was love. Anthony could tell what she was feeling and out of nowhere, he kissed her. Pua didn't want to accept this feeling, having a fear that it would crush her later in life, but she accepted it either way. A few weeks passed and she fell deeper in love with Anthony. But she one day saw him with another girl, Anthony introduced this girl as Anna his girlfriend. Puas heart sank and she ran, stumbling upon the sewers. New Family Wile Pua was in the sewers she decided she wanted to live down there, so she needed supplies. Once she got back up realizing her mistake she went back to the Willow to get some food to bring back with her. It was then she meet a man by the name of Helix Heart ( @AmberAnole ) who was a Sanguine. Pua found this interesting and asked the man if he would be ever so kind to turn her. After he turned her the two closely bonded. She found out that he had a wife who went by the nickname Sav. Helix and Pua went on all different kinds of adventures. It was one day when Pua decided to share her life story with him. That day he asked Pua if she would like him to adopt her. Pua felt overwhelmed with happiness and was so happy to accept the offer. Her father got cured after being arrested and he decided it was too dangerous to go back to being a Sanguine. Pua didn't want to be alone or put her dad in any more danger so she also got cured and stayed close to her father's side. At the age of nineteen Her father became a Baron, making Pua a noble. Life now After becoming a noble, Pua meet a Sanguine who went by the name of Lance ( @Completely_Evan ). The two started to have feelings, strong feelings for each other after many months of being together. He decided he wanted to get cured so he could possibly marry Pua. His wish came true and the two soon got married. Soon after Pua got pregnant. While she was pregnant Lance decided to disappear at random times, leaving a no trace of where he went. Pua soon found out that he was cheating on her. After having the kid she hoped this would make him stop and spend more time with his new family. This didn't happen sadly, he winded up cheating again with another girl and Pua was getting frustrated. After him not coming back after a few weeks, she got worried and started to look for him. After looking for a while she went home. Once she got home she saw Lance on the couch, he looked beat up and he was holding the baby. Pua brought the baby back upstairs to be safe while she went to go check on Lance. When she got back downstairs she noticed he had ran. She saw him running down the street and followed him. After stopping him she tried to talk to him, but it didn't help at all. He ran back to the house and grabbed the baby. He then ran to an abandoned building in the poor-district and jumped off the top. This killed the kid but Lance survived. Some of Puas friends hunted him down for many months, then one day Pua received a letter. The letter told her to meet this person at the park, behind the waterfall. Once she got there the man soon emerged from the shadows, it was Lance. The two talked for a bit and the talk ended with him knocking Pua out. He was about to bring her back with him to the sewers when all of a sudden, a few guards showed up. These guards killed Lance by putting a spear throw his heart. A few moths later Pua met this man named Jeffery Ailemer ( @galyushi ) who is a Baron. Pua had a secret crush on Jeffery Ailemer for a while but never said a word about it. Him and her soon found out they had a lot in common. They keep their relationship secret for a while, then people started to find out. Pua knows she has a lot ahead of her in life but is willing to give all of her effort to live it.
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Peer Review~ No salt intended First thing I notice is some spelling and grammatical errors Why and how was Pua able to join a pirate crew? Pirates taught Pua how to be an assassin? Why did Roven offer to teach her slither magic? How come the crew of pirates just left Pua? Why would Pua want to be turned to a sanguine? Besides my nit-picky things that I noticed this is a well made character app. Great job!
Let’s get riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight into the review! #ReviewAlert Pua’s main ambition is very Mary-Su. Please replace it with something that benefits her. What culture of Ailor is she half of? This is very important. For reference, there’s Dressolini, Northerne (specify what sub-culture if so), Anglian, Alt-Anglian, Alt-Regalian, Daendroque, and many more. Silver eyes aren’t lore compliant unless she’s blind. How many concealed daggers does she have? This has to be specified. Lots of spelling errors in here. For example, there’s “percentile” when I’m sure you meant personality. Being independent is not a negative trait. Replace either it or one of the other positive ones with a negative trait. Becoming a pirate is a really big thing because it’s considered a capital crime in most places. This means she could even be executed for it. As a result, becoming a pirate should not be something she decided on a whim because of family issues. Please think of a better reason. Having emotions does not count as a weakness and is instead known as a copout weakness because it doesn’t hinder her in any way. Replace this with a different weakness; perhaps a physical one because the other two are mental? Having an incest rape story in the life story is very sketchy especially since this is a family friendly server. Please remove it entirely since it has absolutely no effect on the character anyway. It’s not possible to fall from the top of the tavern and survive. Jeffery who? Make these edits in red and tag me when you’re done.
@Aespair (I played lance) He fell onto a lower platform not completely off the tavern~ And he had light mages on the roof that operated on him there so he didn't die.
Either way, it must be specified. Another thing, if he killed a child when he fell, there's like 50 NPC guards at the tavern. There's a 99% chance of him getting caught through doing that. If it has to stay in the story, change it to a small abandoned building where guards don't patrol (probably the poor district or the old gods district).
The only issues I have now is how the first mate threw her overboard when he had compassion for her and how she managed to not drown during several days in the ocean with no floatation device.
