Basic Information Full Name: Psyra Bjørnenn Age: 25 Gender: Female Race: Ailor | Akkadian Lineage Skill Information Core Proficiencies +10 Alchemy Sciences +10 Medical Sciences +5 Light Range +6 Sorcery +3 Arcanology Hobby Proficiencies +5 Pathfinding Art +10 Writing Art [+5 Racial] Talent Proficiencies +5 Perception +5 Body Care Body Shape Physical Stat: 7.5 Body Shape: Average Body Fat: Average Languages Velheim [Native] Common [Second] Special Traits/Spells/Mutations Sorcery True Path 1 Astral Being 1 Arcanology Artifact Knowledge Pagan Touch Visual Information Eye Color: Dark Brown Hair Color: Medium Brown Hair Style: Short - Just above shoulders Skin Color: Lighter tan Clothing: Loose, baggy clothes with a cloak Height: 5’1” Personality How would your character express Happiness and Contentedness? Sharing her hobbies and activities with others. Explaining in full detail the extent of her knowledge. Teaching others the activities and information she knows. How would your character respond to experiencing Fear? Consults the comfort of the spirits around her. How would your character respond to experiencing Stress? Consult her books and others for answers. How does your character view Law and Authorities? A label for a person who also deserves to be given respect where it’s due. How does your character feel about Races other than their own? She doesn’t mind them. How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths? Undefined. How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world? She lives and breathes in it. How does your character feel towards their family? Sorry that they were not able to grow up with her. What is your character the most proud of about themselves? Learning as many items as she did Becoming independent Finding her magic, quite literally What motivates your character to move forward and better their life? To learn the souls of those around her, alive and dead, and be able to learn their stories. What is your character's biggest insecurity? That she is too accepting at times. What is your character's biggest fear? Losing the knowledge she has gained. Life Story Magic is frowned upon. It has been as long as they could remember. A close knit group from Velheim took it upon themselves to travel. They built their own tight knit community and lived on the outskirts. Psyra Bjørnenn was born as one of the later children, when the community finally started to gain their ground. Three months went by after her birth, and Valheim caught wind of their settlement. They didn’t have the time to escape before their village was burnt to the ground. Both her parents were caught in the fire. Before their deaths, they had cast a spell on her. One that would save her. They knew the risk, but the time was then. She was taken into custody by the few who were able to survive. They grew old and frail, and by the age of sixteen, they had all gone. She was left to her cabin in the woods with all the remaining books, as well as the help from other souls around her. The spell cast on her as a child allowed her to see the souls of those living and dead. She could see and understand them. They were her companionship. Her family. Now, she wanders the world of Regalia on her own, living to work with magic on her own free will.
Welcome to the server, and here is my review! You cannot have two Racial boosts. As an Akkadian, you can only choose to gain a boost through one of the three options on the Proficiency Page: https://wiki.massivecraft.com/Proficiency#Racial_Boosts Please fix this issue on the page. To help me understand your point spread, can you please show where you invested your free 10 Hobby points? Finally your Life Story. While I understand that feral children have appeared in our real world, we are against the idea in the server's lore. Additionally, how you've written it has left an enormous number of questions that would likely require you to substantially change the section anyway. I have to ask you to please update the Story to clear away the parts where she was raised by a brown bear. Tag me once you are done @somekidbewack
@HydraLana I took away the racial boost from alchemy science but kept it on writing art. My hobby points are divided 10 for writing, 5 for pathfinding. Also, my backstory has been fully rewritten. Thank you for your help!
Approved for now, but I implore you to work on updating and improving your Life Story over time, or for when next this application needs review.
