Basic Information (Required) Full Name: Peter Roswellian Age: 18 Gender: Male Race: Ailor, (Güneyliler) Sexuality: Straight Preferred Weapon: Kite Shield, and Longsword Skill Information (Required) 18+5 Age Points | +10 Hobby Points +5 Swords Combat Skill (+5 from Points) +3 Shields Combat Skill (+3 from Points) +15 Metallurgy Sciences (+15 from Points) +5 Musical Arts (+5 from Hobby Points) +5 Carpentry (+5 from Hobby Points) Body Shape +22 Ripped Low Body Fat Languages De Ithanian (Father tongue) Güneyce (Mother Tongue) Common (Taught by Father) Visual Information (Required) The following is required when filling out your character application. Please use a Bullet Point list. Try to keep the information here as simple and confined as possible, it's supposed to be a short list. Eye Color: Brown Hair Color: Brown Hair Style: A tiny bit long swept to the side. Skin Color: Tanned Clothing: Black Blacksmith’s jacket with grey undershirt and grey trousers Height: 5’11” Option One: The Question List How would your character express Happiness and Contentedness? He would chuckle and couldn’t wipe a smile off his face if he were to have a good time. His shoulders would be lifted rather than slouched when content or happy. How would your character respond to experiencing Fear? He would tremble but eventually realize for the betterment of himself and those around him, to choose to do the most helpful thing in his ability. How would your character respond to experiencing Stress? He would play his Mandolin to relieve the stress. He would also run from his issues rather than stress about them. How does your character view Law and Authorities? He feels that he needs to stay out of sight of authorities in fear that he too may have to run from them just as his father did in the past. He fears the law a lot more than most people. How does your character feel about Races other than their own? He hasn’t seen many races throughout his life and only recently traveled to Regalia. He is more interested and curious about the races rather than afraid. How does your character feel about Religion for themselves, and other faiths? He was never brought up with religion and therefore doesn’t care what people believe in regarding religion. No opinion. How does your character feel about the Arcane and Magical in the world? He is aware it exists, but unsure how it works. He is very puzzled how such a thing could be harnessed. How does your character feel towards their family? He loves them very much and misses them. After their deaths, Peter traveled to Regalia where his father would tell him stories of the place. What is your character the most proud of about themselves? He is proud that he finally took a step forward to go to Regalia and officially start his life learning how to blacksmith as his father once was. What motivates your character to move forward and better their life? His parents' deaths motivated him to be a better person. He wants to learn and become a blacksmith and see where life will take him. What is your character's biggest insecurity? His biggest insecurity would be that he won’t be successful at what he ventures out into financially. What is your character's biggest fear? His fear that he will never live up to be the man his father once was. Life Story (Required) [Ages 1-10] Peter Roswellian was born in the Güneyliler Empire outskirts to his mother, Else Fattori (Guneyliler), and his father, Payn Roswellian (Ithanian). His mother and father were merchants in the Guneyliler Empire and didn’t make a lot of money. He was well looked after by his father and mother and cared for very much. There were never any big issues with him and his parents. From the age of 5 and on, his fascination started with Regalia and his father’s work. His father would tell him stories from his time in Regalia being a blacksmith and learning from his apprenticeships. His father would teach him combat with a kite shield and long sword as play and self defense if he were ever to use it spending 3 hours a week from the age of 5. At 7, Peter saw the Guneyliler Empire’s military go out of the gates and towards the woods to see adventure. He always was curious about the woods but never was told that they were dangerous. Peter would then meet his neighboring farmers and sneak into the pens to play with the animals. At 9, Peter’s mother, Else, would finally buy him his first Mandolin and teach him. He became proficient with the mandolin by age ten and could play a few songs. [Ages 11-Present] At age 11, Peter learned more about his father and he had to leave Regalia, his father mentioned some type of law trouble he had gotten into while making weapons for a client. Peter didn’t understand or questioned what it meant at the time but it stuck with him. Through ages 12-16 Peter learned more about swords play and combat. He also began to make more music and write songs himself with the Mandolin. One day struck on his 18th birthday. An attack on the Guneyliler Empire failed but the lower class on the outskirts suffered the most from the failed attack. During this attack, Peter’s father and mother were killed while Peter was out playing his mandolin with the pigs by the nearby farm. He came home and found his father dying on the floor of the home. He gave him his final wishes to go and become something of himself. In his final dying moments, Payn gave his son his long sword and shield to take on an adventure to Regalia. Peter would grab items and a bag to stuff them in, including his Mandolin his mother gave to him. He would carry the shield on the back of his bag, and his sword in his leather frayed sheath. The Guyenliler Empire was adventurous, and had many trips to the outer world. In hopes of finding Regalia, he went on the trip. There was talk of a farther land with prosperous life. He was enamored by the idea of following his father’s footsteps and learning what makes a good weapon. Soon enough, the trip had concluded and he arrived in Regalia with nothing but his mind, his sword, shield, mandolin, and any personal belongings he could fit in his bag.
Here's my review: Why's his middle name Crash? Expand on this answer. Expand on this answer. Expand on this. You say he fears the law more than most people. Talk about what this fear looks like exactly. Expand on this answer. Expand on this answer. Instead of saying an attack on the Guneyliler Empire, you could cite the clicking creatures which attacked this year. I will also point out that Peter doesn't seem too fazed by his parents dying in the mix of it. Maybe include one other event in his life that would make him view or think differently--something impactful that would stick with him to the present. Make your edits in red then tag me when you're done. @CrashAtRoswell
You have seven days to complete the edits in any capacity, mark them in a different color, and tag me in a reply. @CrashAtRoswell
