Otto Von Templinburg

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  1. Martyr_321

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    • Full Name: Otto Kleidemburg

    • Age: 18

    • Gender: Male

    • Race: Ailor; New Regalian Brannon

    • Sexuality: Straight

    • Preferred Weapon: Dory Spear with Specialty hoplon shield, and Kopis sword

    Skill Information (Required)

    Total Points: 23 from age, +10 Hobby. +10 Talent

    • +7 Shield (+7 from points)

    • +7 Spear (+7 from points)

    • +7 Sword (+7 from points)

    • +12 Fortification (+2 from Points, +10 from Hobby)

    • +10 Frontline Command (+10 from Talent)
    Body Shape
    • 21 Body Shape

    • Muscular (From Brannon)

    • Built (From Brannon)
    Languages

    • Common

    • Alt Regalian (Waldmark)
    Visual Information (Required)
    • Eye Color: Blue

    • Hair Color: Dark brown

    • Hair Style: Military short

    • Skin Color: Pale, with tan when on campaign

    • Clothing: Very nice blue jacket with black britches

    • Height: 5’10, 188cm
    Visual Information (Expansion)
    • He has an angular however broken nose, cocked off to the left. His eyes are typical for a New Regalian, a deep sapphire blue. His mouth is slightly wider than normal and usually set in a determined visage. He has a small scar on his chin. His hair is brown but cut down in a military style.

    • He’s not done growing yet, being only eighteen years old, and he has yet to fully develop his full muscle build, but he is already built up a large amount of strength due to his training in the military school. He is the specimen of health and physique.

    • He speaks carefully and quietly. Choosing every word with care and caution. His voice is still in it’s late pubescent stages.
    Option Two: The Core List

    • Choose your Character Alignment
      • Lawful Good
    • Choose your Character Personality Type
      • Protagonist
    • Choose your Character's Religion
      • Unionism 7/10 (Not Purist)
    Life Story (Required)

    Childhood-Present:


    Otto was born to a family of wealthy commoners. His parents were strict and followed the typical New Regalian method. Teaching him how to behave, how to work, and how to train so he when he went into the military academy, he would be ahead of the game for his year. Durring this time however, he developed a love for setting traps. Taking this upon hismelf he strove to improve traps, testing them on his brothers. As his traps improved, he also fell in love with building small stockades and digging in his parents land. Which they both liked and didn't like, as he had developed a love of trenches that were four feet deep whereas the stockade was five feet tall, not allowing people to access the land easily and digging up most of his mother's garden.

    However, with his parents passing when he was eight and already having two brothers and three sisters, all older than him, his parents would leave him just enough behind to send him to the School of Lancyon. The school where his two brothers were sent. He learned the way of the spear he had improved to a head cadet by the age of Sixteen and graduated when he beat his opponent in a thirty second round, one of the shortest that year. His dory spear and hoplon shield never failing to impress people as he fights to return his family to being a standard known name. He continues to strive to improve, retaining a very stoic nature and enjoying his life.
     
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  2. fantuinn

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    Expand this backstory. Maybe elaborate on what his parents were like when he was alive, or how he grew in the School of Lancyon.
     
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