Spoiler: ✿ Made by aesthotic Basic Information Full Name: Ophelia Lucia Tyrannian, the Knight of St. Petrova Age: 27 years old Gender: Female Race: Anglian Ailor Sexuality: Celibate Visual Information Eye Color: Dark Blue Hair Color: Raven black Hair Style: Short hair Skin Color: Light tan but mostly pale Clothing: Dark colored dresses or military plate/chainmail Height: 5 foot 9 inches Skill Information Proficiency Points 27 + 10 Anglian Cultural + 15 being Ailor +2 Extra Heavy Blades, proficiency +23 Blades, proficiency +5 Religious Knowledge, Being Ailor +2 Threading, proficiency +10 Heavy Bow, cultural +10 Medical Sciences, being Ailor Body Shape Physical Stat: 25 Body Shape: Ripped Body Fat: Low Body Fat Languages Anglian (Taught from birth) Common (Learned early in life) Personality and Abilities Choose your Character Alignment Lawful Neutral Choose your Character Personality Type ISTJ - Logistician Choose your Character's Religion Unionism [9/10 Devout] Life story Ophelia was born to Cassius and Valeria Tyrannian on February 26, 279 AC in the Tyrannian land of Carroburgen. She was kept closely by her mother and father with the intentions of grooming her into a prime example of an Anglian noble woman. She started to cook at an early age, help out with the animals and be taught common alongside her language. When she was working and practicing archery the fields one day, she met Stanley Carwell who immediately began fast friends with her. She began to tutor to become a physician of sorts, and during that time, they spent most of their time together when she wasn't doing that. When she reached the age of 16, Stanley proposed to her much to her delight, but began to slowly decrease in health. He ultimately ended up struggling for breath for weeks with Ophelia being by his side as much as possible. He told her how he wanted to always become a knight before him passing away. Ophelia was 17 at this point where she wanted to run away from her life in Carroburgen. With her love’s want to be a knight and her brother Gallus who ran away to become a Spymaster for the Bloodcasts came up to her and offering to take her to the bullfighting pit to become a Matrais free of charge, she was taken away instantly. She began to train with swords and study chivalrous actions and learning how to weave like even a proper woman should. She liked the time at the bullfighting pit in Angle Veer because it took her mind off of things and gave her a strong sense will power over things. She was an exception student and caught on rather quickly. This year she finished her training at the bullfighting pit and went back to Carroburgen. Content with the fact he became the patriarch. Ophelia goes with Gallus usually weekly now to the Crown City and enjoys her time there. She began to ponder back on Stanley with seeing the Carwell family in the Crown City. She eventually joined the Hightowers and fought alongside Urijah Jamesson to defend the city. After that, she joined the Inquisition under Rote, learning more about the Holy Spirit in that. About a year and a half after that, the Carwell family almost entirely disappeared from her life and she went into a depression with the amount of the people she called family dying, coupled with the Harholds' closing in the Veer. After the Iron Peace was declared, Ophelia was wedded to Gallus' daughter, Verona, and joined the Crimson Inquisition under Hengest Harhold. She spends her time mostly with her family and living a religious life.
Not a valid ambition because. Well it doesn't make sense and doesn't give the character anything to strive for. Make something more character-intensive that actually can give her more purpose in her roleplay. While technically you've mentioned her confidences, you've more or less just implemented it into her anxieties. I want you to detail more how she feels about herself and her own skills, as a fighter and whatnot. Make changes in purple and tag me when done. @Nitesho
@Mooffins updated to the new format with changes in dark red basically just removed all references to bloodcast and made it Matrias. fixed proficiency stats and inconsistences with Gallus' app.
I have given it the approved tag as I have examined your edits and it seems you followed them and made none after the date he approved it.
My Review Body Build and Weapon of Choice in the Visual Information section is no longer supported by the Character Application Template, please remove them. Please adjust this entire section accordingly once you have corrected the error in Extra Heavy Blades. Tag me once the edits are done in green @Nitesho
@HydraLana Hi Hydra, I tweaked some of my traits, added reasoning for it in the life style, and changed references from the old Tyrannian name change back to it's original one. Made the changes in red.
@HydraLana Hey Hydra, I updated the stats to reflect the recent changes to Ailor. I am not completely sure if my body stats or proficiency points are correct, so could you make sure they are right? Also updated personality to reflect current the sheet format. Updated the life story briefly with what I've done with her in the past year and half. Did some aesthetic changes to so it wasn't so out there. All changes done in red.
