Played Character Ollie Ahhutel

[PresentMediator]

ᚠᚱᚬᛘ ᛘᚬᚬᚾᛋ ᛅᚾᛏ ᛋᛏᛅᚱᛋ ᛏᚱᛅᛋᚢᚱᛁ ᚢᛁᛚᛚ ᛒᛁ ᚠᚬᚢᚾᛏ​

Character Information

• Full Name: Ollie Ahhutel
• Race: Ailor-Dwarf (Dwarf Dominant)
• Age: 24
• Gender: Non-Binary
• Eye Color: Sandstone-like

Core Concept

A truly ambiguous individual who prefers the company of hoods and treasures which shine like stars, over that of friends or family. Always sitting on the edge of discovery, Ollie finds themselves addicted to the mysteries of artifacts and magical items. Each discovery brings about more questions than before.

Proficiency Information
0 ATK ROLL / 15 DEF ROLL / 10 PERSUASION ROLL
◙ Strength: 0

◘ Thick Hide (FREE)​

◙ Constitution: +2

◘ Mounted Getaway
◘ Mounted Armory​

◙ Intelligence: +5

✧ Vaulttech​

✧ Servotech​

◘ Tech Assimilate (FREE)
◘ Puretek Reload
◘ Puretek Evade
◘ Safeguard Pack
◘ Tech Charge
◘ Tech Exhaust​

◙ Wisdom: +7

◘ Chem Hyperfocus
◘ Mobile Command
◘ Attack Command
◘ Chase Command
◘ Champion Command
◘ Shield Command
◘ Resist Command​

◙ Dexterity: +0
◙ Faith: +0
◙ Magic: +0

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Languages

✧ Common (Free)
✧ Barrudh (Parent)​

Appearance Information

• Stands at 4'2" with sandstone eyes, white-blond hair styled in a shag ponytail, and ruddy brown skin; they are lathered in robes and hoods to conceal their face. The curtains of these garments appear like pajamas and have stars or other celestial objects stitched into them.

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Plot Hooks

• Child of Peox Ahhutel, a descendant of a second generation to arrive in the Crown Isles. Ollie has a lure to the Fornoss Religion, as they own many heirlooms from their ancestors that allude to it.
• As a mixed family, both the customs of Dwarven culture and Ailor culture are scarce. Ollie is more alike to the general populace of Regalia's denizens, being born in the city themselves.
• First came their love for gemstones, then their love for celestial stars. The two shared a close resemblance, and as such most of Ollie's skills and abilities revolve around their taste for both bodies of earth and the cosmic bodies above.
• Ollie has spent most if not their entire life in Regalia. Any venture outside of the country was for the sake of trade, investments, and nothing else.
• Ollie is a stingey foreman like merchant, who is quick to hire mercenaries for traveling ventures in the countryside. For this reason, they are an excellence hired support or support to mercenaries they in fact hire.
• Nothing restricts this individual from involvement, global affairs, or local fueds, as the majority of events in Aloria can be tied to earning a profit, or protecting an investment.
• Ollie is a coward and easily frightened.
• Enjoys the sport of bartering.

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[Jouster]

I'll be claiming this application for review. Expect it to be posted as soon as possible!

 

[Jouster]

You have a good app going on here. There are no errors here that meets the eye. As the Dwarves lack a large playerbase, I'm glad to let you proceed with an approved application.

 

[PresentMediator]

@Jouster Added an inventory section to store pixelart items I've made for my IC jewelry store that are usually on this character's person. There is only one item as of right now, but I will gradually fill it up with valuable jewelry. The focus of this character is to make them a prime target to be robbed, forcing me to rely on other characters as body guards or for protection!

 

[Jouster]

@PapidaCarrot Understood. Optional sections aren't reviewed standardly, but any egregious rulebreaking will of course be mentioned. In your case, you're 100% in the clear so be free to add optional sections without the need for a re-review. If you do change anything within the mandatory sections, be free to ping me.

 

[PresentMediator]

@Jouster Application was overhalled to the new template due to the removal of genetics and artifactism. The character will keep their fragile and weak build and stay non-combat focused however in regards to proficiency points.

 

[Jouster]

@Jouster Application was overhalled to the new template due to the removal of genetics and artifactism. The character will keep their fragile and weak build and stay non-combat focused however in regards to proficiency points.

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• Proficiency Information
  • The new template organizes Point-Buy purchases differently. Instead of listing every individual purchase there, you just have to put the total of how many points you've spent on the point-buy. For your character Ollie, format it as "+21 Metallurgy." After that, you list each pack you purchased in Ability Information, like this:
    • Metallurgy:
      • Rich Family Metallurgy
      • Iron Family Metallurgy
  • And so on and so forth.
  • Ollie's physical stat should be 11 (Rounded up from 10.5) unless you're choosing to make him weaker out of your own volition.

These are the only edits I have to point out. Once you've corrected them, change the color of the edited text (If any) and tag me in another post. If you have any questions, direct them through a forums conversation or a Discord RP Community Ticket.

 

[PresentMediator]

@Jouster changes made in red, not sure why the bullets are messing up. Tried to fix it several times and it doesn't appear to correct itself.

 

[Jouster]

@Jouster changes made in red, not sure why the bullets are messing up. Tried to fix it several times and it doesn't appear to correct itself.

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Have you tried backspacing the white bullets to the black one? Honestly, I don't know how to solve it myself. It's no big deal anyway; Ollie's approved again, and you can revert the colored text to default.

 

[PresentMediator]

@Jouster Imported a new character image, and accidentally reset the prefix

 

[Yurs]

REAPPROVED

 

[Yurs]

Also: You should have 11 Phys Stat from the 21 Metallurgy investment, and 5 Proficiency Points left unspent. If you'd like feel free to invest those into something and tag for another review!

 

[PresentMediator]

Hello @Yurs or @Staff Roleplay ,

Apologies for the tag. It's been a while since this application was revised. There have been several changes to bring it up to date with the new system.

Thank you,

 

[Caelamus]

Claimed for review.

 

[Caelamus]

Approved.

 

[PresentMediator]

@Caelamus Application was overhalled completely!

 

[Caelamus]

Approved.

 

[PresentMediator]

ᚠᚱᚬᛘ ᛘᚬᚬᚾᛋ ᛅᚾᛏ ᛋᛏᛅᚱᛋ ᛏᚱᛅᛋᚢᚱᛁ ᚢᛁᛚᛚ ᛒᛁ ᚠᚬᚢᚾᛏ​

Character Information

• Full Name: Ollie Ahhutel
• Race: Ailor-Dwarf (Dwarf Dominant)
• Age: 24
• Gender: Non-Binary
• Eye Color: Sandstone-like

Core Concept

A truly ambiguous individual who prefers the company of hoods and treasures which shine like stars, over that of friends or family. Always sitting on the edge of discovery, Ollie finds themselves addicted to the mysteries of artifacts and magical items. Each discovery brings about more questions than before.

Proficiency Information
0 ATK ROLL / 15 DEF ROLL / 10 PERSUASION ROLL
◙ Strength: 0

◘ Thick Hide (FREE)​

◙ Constitution: +2

◘ Mounted Getaway
◘ Mounted Armory​

◙ Intelligence: +5

✧ Vaulttech
✧ Servotech​

◘ Tech Assimilate (FREE)
◘ Puretek Reload
◘ Puretek Evade
◘ Safeguard Pack
◘ Tech Charge
◘ Tech Exhaust​

◙ Wisdom: +7

◘ Chem Hyperfocus
◘ Mobile Command
◘ Attack Command
◘ Chase Command
◘ Champion Command
◘ Shield Command
◘ Resist Command​

◙ Dexterity: +0
◙ Faith: +0
◙ Magic: +0

​

Languages

✧ Common (Free)
✧ Dwarven (Parent)
✧ East Linguist Pack (Linguistics)​

Appearance Information

• Stands at 4'2" with sandstone eyes, white-blond hair styled in a shag ponytail, and ruddy brown skin; they are lathered in robes and hoods to conceal their face. The curtains of these garments appear like pajamas and have stars or other celestial objects stitched into them.

​

Plot Hooks

• Child of Peox Ahhutel, a descendant of a second generation to arrive in the Crown Isles. Ollie has a lure to the Fornoss Religion, as they own many heirlooms from their ancestors that allude to it.
• As a mixed family, both the customs of Dwarven culture and Ailor culture are scarce. Ollie is more alike to the general populace of Regalia's denizens, being born in the city themselves.
• First came their love for gemstones, then their love for celestial stars. The two shared a close resemblance, and as such most of Ollie's skills and abilities revolve around their taste for both bodies of earth and the cosmic bodies above.
• Ollie has spent most if not their entire life in Regalia. Any venture outside of the country was for the sake of trade, investments, and nothing else.
• Ollie is a stingey foreman like merchant, who is quick to hire mercenaries for traveling ventures in the countryside. For this reason, they are an excellence hired support or support to mercenaries they in fact hire.
• Nothing restricts this individual from involvement, global affairs, or local fueds, as the majority of events in Regalia can be tied to earning a profit.

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