Valentinian
Have a little faith.
- Joined
- Jul 2, 2014
- Messages
- 36
- Reaction score
- 366
- Points
- 453
- Faction
- No.
- Kingdom
- No.
In response to recent changes -
- I would like you to expand on the main ambition as I do not believe it lends much direction, if any at all, to your character.
- Given he is expert in Lecgaen, I don't think it is appropriate to have competency in use of a bow. The entire idea of Lecgaen is that you're spending so much time working on your body and hand-to-hand combat that you wouldn't be able to mix with other weapons.
- The third paragraph should more clearly delineate between friends and family. Right now, it only really speaks on friends and romance.