Nessien Laelithial

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    ʙᴀsɪᴄ ɪᴅᴇɴᴛɪᴛʏ.

    birthright name. R
    ainrenthirwen Miress Laelithial
    && currently goes by Nessien Laelithial
    age. Seventy-nine.
    gender. Female.
    race. Cielothar-Avanthar, but if you are unable to tell, she will simply claim Avanthar.
    life ambition. To horde attention from a good crowd as an astonishing role - such as an alchemist, a soldier, a mage; anything that would cause people to praise and love her.
    special permission. Expert-tier Slither magic; both sub-types.

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    ʙᴀsɪᴄ ɪᴅᴇɴᴛɪᴛʏ. ( ɪɪ )

    && - Nessien had only recently came to Regalia to escape Estalë’s wrath, seeing as from rumors of how the only place unaffected by those undead would be the City. As much as she did not want to leave her family - she ran away to safety and hopes for a new start here.

    && - Nessien was born to Ainthendirwen Laelithial and Rinfadorion Aeramiel in a Cielothar village in Daendroc. Nessien has two siblings, both are half-sisters; Aedhlynnë and Miretheniel. She has barely heard of them.

    && - Her secondary goal - like the attention-needing person she is; she desires attention and admiral love.
    sᴋɪʟʟsᴇᴛ.

    { school. }
    * Toxic Alteration.
    * Toxic Expansion.
    * Hemocurse.
    { level }
    * Expert-tier - toxic alteration
    * Expert-tier - toxic expansion
    * Caster-tier - Hemocurse.
    { source }
    && Several, trusted mentors - toxic alteration
    &&
    Several, trusted mentors - toxic expansion
    && ** Baudh. - hemocurse
    ( i forgot the name of the baudh. )
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    ᴠɪsᴜᴀʟs.

    eye color.
    Green.
    hair color. Brown.
    hair style. Ruffled, slightly dirty and in a fluffy bob.
    skin color. Daendroque brown.
    attire. A Caped winter-attire in festive colors.
    height. 5❛❛6 - 167.64 cm
    weight. 156 lb
    body build. Inverted Triangle, slightly fat.
    favorable weapon.
    - &&; Expert-tier Slither Magic - toxic expansion.
    - &&; Expert-tier Slither Magic - toxic alteration.

    ↳ { Nessien can only use one subtype a time. }
    There are times when she could use hemocurse, currently at caster-level, however.

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    ᴠɪsᴜᴀʟs. ( ɪɪ )

    -- && A wide face and low cheekbones, a dulled chin and an arched nose and almond eyes, Nessien carries a warm expression with green eyes. Her general facial structure is an oval-shape in general. Her facial expression can change drastically - able to create a rather ‘scary’ face.

    -- && Nessien has the build of a female track-runner, due to her spending much time with Avanthars she had developed some strength in her bones - though she does end up possessing a bit of a low metabolism as it takes more time for her food to really ‘disappear’, making it so she does retain some more fat than muscle. Though most of this isn’t visible on her darkened skin. The right part of her face and right limb is covered, head-to-palm in a green tattoo that doubles as casting runes.

    -- && She usually wears various colors, though as of now she currently wear more darker colors. Though she’s beginning to adapt to the more ‘common’ Ailor fashion now that she had arrived - At the moment, she currently is wearing a dark-colored dress along with a black Saturn hat and ribbon in her hair. She carries around a sachet filled with glass bottles.

    -- && A soft - almost weak voice that emits from her lips at first glance. Though her voice gradually becomes louder to the point of sounding as a demanding princess when frustrated.
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    ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴᴀʟɪᴛʏ. | ᴀʙɪʟɪᴛɪᴇs.

    ( i. ) capricious.
    && Capable of having various up-beats or personal beat-downs, the woman's temper can go up and down, along with her own self-esteem based on what situation and thoughts that run through her mind. For example if a certain bad situation would be to happen; Nessien's confidence would immediately drop down to zero for a while, before going to try and hide that up with an arrogant mask. If a good thing were to happen, she's try and run with it with her ego for as long as possible.

    ( ii. ) facading.
    && Though stated above - the thing people would most likely see would be the bashful and shy side of her when first seen. Stutters and awkward glances as she frighteningly attempts to speak to others. Of course, this is mostly just a phase as to let the other person know that she’s around and isn’t that bad of a person. This would probably count as deception, in some cases.

    ( iii. ) lethargic.
    && She can’t be bothered to apologize, as for the most part she enjoys to laze around and not do anything unless asked to do so. that, she also has a tendency to horribly half-do things, along with that; she may also begin to just completely stop a project she's working on for a day - that descends onto weeks. This also goes for anything active - though she has good stamina she can't seem to find the motivation to continue said activities for more then a while, and may have trouble even starting it.

    ( iiii. ) optimistic.
    && Even though she has just about a horrible, strange attitude - she’s horribly laid-back to the point of simply wanting to laze around and hope that everything just comes to her on a silver platter. Nessy could only hope for the best instead of actually doing anything, and believes in a good ol’ future of eternal personality re-creations.

    ( v. ) narcissist.
    && Nessien believes herself be greater then most people - due to this she is extremely defensive against others - though doesn’t do much things to deserved to be insulted. This is mostly because of how she was mostly in the spotlight in Hadar for thirty years due to not being an Allar, this is also supported by her own skill at Slither magic, and prides herself internally with her achievement. With that, she also becomes very frustrated when such a trait is pointed out - as it is one of the only parts of her personality that doesn’t change.

    ( iv. ) apathetic.
    && Due to the lack of overwhelming problems - she finds no reason why she should relate to other people he had never met. With that -- neither does she particularly care about what others are doing. Often looking over people isn't a problem, and so is ignoring the needy when they're begging. She also doesn't go into problems of others that easily, needing a reason to do so.
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    ( i. ) witch-tier.
    ;; Trained in the ability of Slither magic and a student in Blood magic, she's obviously adept in magic and prides herself on it. This is usually only good for attacks and defending herself. With that, she also fears any anti-mages, though aside from that - she finds herself to be pretty great.

    ( ii. ) running for a long time.
    ;; The Avanthar has the ability to run for long periods of time, along with a lot of energy at her whim. With that there usually isn’t too many things that could honestly - easily hold her down. She often goes jogging throughout the city to keep in shape. But she cannot exactly hit as hard as she could sprint.
    ( iii. ) there’s always a future!
    ;; Regrets can rarely catch up with her - since she’s always on the move for tomorrow, not wanting to waste even a second to wait in the present. With that, she often believes that tomorrow would bring something new - such as a another sign that she should probably do another change.
    ( iiii. ) ex-nurse.
    ;; Rainren has experience in dealing with the needs of others, such as people who need to have their wounds tended to and whatnot. With that, she can also identify what herbs can be used for healing and what is obviously poisonous for others. With that, she’s already very good with bandaging others up.
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    ( i. ) my other hobby is sleeping; all day.
    ;; Though she wants to see things in motion, her biggest challenge is to put herself into motion. Some days she cant even force herself out of her own bed -- how is she supposed to do things, if not that? Though, she rarely focuses on that point in particular since she has given up on that. She often depends on other people to do her things for her, now. Nessien has also gained the ability to half-do things on most days or just completely not start at all. She can also be easily disinterested on a topic right after getting started on it and be easily discouraged by a few obstacles in the way because she sees that she could be doing something else - funner - instead of going through with it.

    ( ii. ) doll-like skin.
    ;; Even with her good stamina, she can't help but cringe at the touch of pain. Nessien is a weak person with no long-lasting fighting skills, relying on her legs and her magic to defend herself. With that, her limbs are pretty darn weak. Even if she's not bruised she'll cringe in pain, wanting to then leave. She's easily discouraged to do anything if she's hurt, unless absolutely forced to do so.
    ( iii. ) princess role.
    ;; Nothing is her fault, and when it is - it's all because of someone else. She will rarely take responsibility for her actions, along with that - she also has a twinge for narcissism. Along with this is a feeling that whatever it is; she should be right on the subject. Though she direly believes his herself - actually panicking silently when she doesn't know a certain answer. Everything should go her way - though she doesn't outwardly express it aside from some joking manners, she thinks that things should go her way.
    ( iiii. ) in-experienced.
    ;; If someone were to review her life-story as a story; it would be a boring and long one. There are not definite or dramatic problems - she had barely ever seen a corpse right in front of her. She has never seen anyone killed in front of her - barely any interactions with those 'relevant' and generally; she doesn't have anything that could really be called 'experienced'. She's been a generally normal person with a slightly boring backstory, due to this she can be exposed to many things not even have an idea on what to do in reply.
    ( v. ) easily burdened.
    ;; Albeit, she's very apathetic. Though when she's obviously being troubled by something - it really gets to her. It doesn't take long for her to get desperate when she's in distress, since when in burden or in any kind of guilt; she'll head to the closest person around to boost her own ego, or cause harm on usually something to lessen and district herself from it. This also goes for those who are plainly annoying, of which are met with a straight-forward words of her thoughts of them. She's also very quick to snap at anyone who tries to push things onto her - whatever their position would be.
    ( iv. ) now that I'm looking back on it.
    ;; Now that she's gotten used to her current occupation - for the past eleven months she has been beginning to wonder about why she went down this road as a criminal instead of living a regular, normal life on the surface. Though looking back on her memories may bring grand nostalgia and easily burdens her as for why she has been doing this. With that, she low-key questions her now slightly adjusted morality. With her study in blood magic and the animals sacrifice to do it, she is a bit more used to gore being around her at every step. She can't tell if that's good or bad. Thinking about it confuses her a lot, but she can't help it. This is basically moral confusion.
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    -- && Nessien’s tone in conversation seems to change, a lot. She also loves to talk about snakes and whatnot.

    -- && Nessien has the ability to ride a horse exceedingly well, due to Avanthar nurture.

    -- && Rainren has the ability to recognize poisons and herbs quite well - whether it’s from her skill as a nurse; or just a natural ability. With that, Nessien could easily help people with their injuries, or with drug identification.

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    • Snakes
    • Travelling
    • Egoism:
    • Occultism
    • Herbs
    • Children
    • Symbolism
    • Learning
    • Al-allar
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    • Vengefulness
    • Screaming
    • Dogs
    • Uncomfortable atmosphere
    • Over dramatic scenarios
    • Business
    • Escapism
    • Woathar
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    && Aedhlynne Baudh | Beloved half-sister | @Rhuyne
    Nessien's half-sister, only had she been reunited with her, she now attempts to look after her, going as far as to join the same ranks as her to do so. Though; she's rather confused about her intentions, and hopes that she understands why her sister puts herself into dangerous situations for - what she could see - no reason.

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    Background.

    && ; i. } Born to Ainthendirwen and Rinfadorion, she was mostly raised by her father who had decided to take her up to raise.

    && ; ii. } Nessien hangs out on the plains, though taking up training as directed by her father. She becomes pretty healthy for a kid as she’s taught to run for a long time.

    && ; iii. } Due to the fact that she’s actually pretty friendly - she then makes some friends. With that, they all happily train together.

    && ; iiii. } With that, Nessy begins to learn to draw, according to tales. Of which usually show what she believes Saivalthar and Woathar look like, and Estalë literally just - beating up Shendar. Creative indeed.

    && ; v. } She also sorta knows how to ride a horse at this age, but not as well as one can do.

    && ; iv. } Nothing much happens aside from training until the age of eleven.
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    && ; iiv. } Tribe Nessien lives in decides to migrate, they all begin to head down to Teled Methen at the age of eleven.

    && ; iiiv. } Casually get lost from father due to a sudden thunderstorm as where said lightning just so happens to strike one of the members of the tribe. She panics and gets as far away as possible, arrives at windmill of a Cielothar village before getting found.

    && ; iiiiv. } Nessien ends up with the Cielothar again, under someone else’s protection. Due to the fact that she ran quite far, it’s a bit hard to really - find her father again. With that, she just stays with a happy Cielothar family.

    && ; x. } With that, she takes a bit to truly gets used to her new surroundings - mostly run around the windmill a lot as for training, along with some stretches.

    && ; ix. } With that and her usual friendly nature, she did easily become popular. Due to her Cielothar looks she did infact, fit in just fine.

    && ; iix. } She was pretty happy with the attention she had, with that - she had also learned about the culture and mostly everything. It was great for a while.

    && ; iiix. } Though, with all the attention she had - and the wild-ish life she had as an Avanthar, she began to feel bored of this everyday life. With that, she makes plans to set out in the world. For now, she often goes on adventures through the forest.
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    && ; iiiix. } Finding things in the forest, often bring them back to brag about how she scavenged it, due to the times that she had gotten herself hurt - she had gotten used to bandaging herself up. Sometimes help bandage others that she sees hurt.

    && ; vx. } At the age of seventeen, she’s completely bored of the pacifist way of Cielothar, with that - decide to leave the plains to go look at whats outside. Having only known the forest-side of Daendroc, she soon goes to travel across.

    && ; ivx. } Of course, this means that she goes alone - she sneaks out to go and travel. Being at such a young age - she goes out with much caution.

    && ; iivx. } Along the way she finds some eggs - and a small snake. With that she nearly kills it - but changes her mind at the last moment. Soon going to bandage it up.

    && ; iiivx. } With that, she goes to try and help the poor snake raise the eggs, and by that I mean take the nest into an abandoned home on the outskirts of Hallonq.

    && ; iiiivx. } Due to some coincidences, meets Aedhlynnë - things happen and the young girl realizes how much of a bad place she’s in. After a few months of scavenging what she could she then goes to leave. She rarely got into any trouble with any gangs due to her isolation from the main town itself.

    && ; xx. } Finds interest in Hadar, and decide to head on a boat there instead of staying in Daendroc.
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    && ; ixx. } Nessien finally arrives and goes to travel around. Amused by all the Allar in the area. She ends up settling by a Al-Allar area.

    && ; iixx. } Nothing much happens besides getting to know people - he has a relatively normal life with a job and a house. Though she never finds a partner, though she does make numerous friends by simply ‘re-inventing’ her personality to please them. She also goes to write letters to her family in an attempt to contact them again.

    && ; iiixx. } Eventually gets gifted with a small white snake for her birthday.

    && ; iiiixx. } After a discussion, Nessien decides to learn magic from her friends. Specifically Slither magic.

    && ; vxx. } With that, she lives a typical life with all her fake personalities. Though grown bored of each facade she puts on - now just finding interest in messing with people. Though nothing too bad.

    && ; ivxx. } While on a trip outside of town, finds a wounded snake. With that, she once again - patches it up and keeps it as a pet.

    && ; iivxx. } As a Cielothar, she gains much attention for being someone that’s not usual in the area - she gets racism but mostly was able to happily ignore those comments. With that, she saw herself in the spotlight most of the time in the area.

    && ; iivxx. } Many years past as at the age of thirty six - she decides to once again venture across. She brings a friend with her to travel across Ithania. Of course, racism ensues but nothing too horrible happens to her directly. She adapts as easily as her friends to the new surroundings.

    && ; iiivxx. } After a few trips back and forth, at the age of fourty she soon heads back to Daendroc, having learned much things and intent on finding her family again and talking about it.

    && ; iiiivxx. } Through maps and guides and wandering around, - hopefully almost there - she decides to settle in a town nearby.

    && ; xxx. } Stayed there working on her notes as she continued to try and become a valuable mage.

    && ; ixxx. } The undead apocalypse strikes and just in time - Nessien leaves on a boat to go to Regalia.

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    Good times in Regalia
    1. Nessien reunites with her half sister Aedhlynn after coming to Regalia.
    2. Nessien
    rents a house on the surface, and then becoming Nynn's roommate.
    3. Nessien applies for the Edelweiss, and is accepted for a while, mostly just to protect her sister from what would be the expiriements the Charter was trying to conduct on Silverts, when their eyes were still golden.
    4. Also gets stabbed on the street for no reason.
    5. She also meets a whole ton of people so thats pretty cool, learns some things about what happened before she arrived.
    6. Nessien leaves as her work there is done, and so goes to apply to the Merrit Apocathery. She also joins the Usque Galenas in interest of keeping an eye out for her sister - and her personal attention-whoring need.

    7. Due to a close encounter with an orc attacking her and slicing her leg, she feels the need to gain more strength to fight back, even when she mostly relies on her Slither magic. Just so she won't be hurt even more badly the next time she no longer has her bottles to fight with
    8. With that in mind, after a torture session, Nessien asks Lawahwan - a Vilitatei Yanar, to teach her bloodmagic, not knowing what it is exactly.
    9. A comrade tells her the magic - and so finds a more avaliable teacher for Blood magic. With that, she is busy for the next eleven months - learning it until a month away from caster with a mentor.
     
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    Expect a peer review within the next 24 hours.
     
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    another bump
     
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    My peer review!
    Keep in mind all points are suggestions, and are yours to either implement or ignore. If you have any questions, comments, or concerns, please don't hesitate to ask!

    tHIS IS LATE IM SORRY I PROCRASTINATE A LOT
    • Being Mage level in both subforms of Slither Magic seems a bit unrealistic, given that she's only fifty six. I'd recommend bumping one subform skill level down to Caster.
    • Nessien should know what she wants in life rather than just wandering around - as your goal seems like sort of a thing to be done in the future, I'd replace/edit it to be something that you can actively seek out in roleplay every time you play the character. Either that, or add a few side goals to make sure Nessien has direction as a character.
    • I have qualms with the 'Flip-flopping personality traits' and 'switching intentions'. While a character can certainly waiver in terms of desires, goals and intentions overtime, I find it unrealistic for Nessien to constantly be changing her attitude and personality to suit her interests, as everyone has definitive personality traits that become apparent one way or another. I'd change this to something relating to her shifting attitude towards other people, perhaps 'Unpredictable' or 'Hard to read' would be better? Perhaps Nessien acts a certain way towards others to fit what she most finds appealing, because of insecurity, or a want to be accepted? There's much more room to expand on this, and to not simply leave it at changing personality traits for the fun of it, which seems just an excuse to play whatever sort of personality best suits you at the time, all through one character.
    • Untrustworthy doesn't really seem like it has to be a personality trait on its own, and could be combined with 'facading'. Spreading secrets isn't really a characteristic of anyone, but rather a part of something else.
    • 'Outgoing' and the weakness 'My other hobby is sleeping all day' contradict each other, and it seems a bit odd for her to continuously flip-flop between "I want to go outside, explore and meet new people" to "I just want to lay in bed all day". So either change up the weakness or replace the personality trait.

    • I find this to be quite unrealistic, as the point mentioned before, everyone has definitive personality traits, which can change overtime but never fully change a person. Replace this with a different weakness.
    • 'Normal life with singular perspective' is a very oddly worded weakness, and its difficult to discern what you really meant by this.
    • It's a little odd to have the weaknesses as full on sentences which could all be described in one word. I suggest you change that to make it more clear what Nessien's weaknesses are for someone who doesn't read the full trait.
    • Overall, that's everything I could pick out. You have a really good start on the app, and I hope Nessien gets approved!

     
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    done, done diggity done! except the last part. I saw it on Anii'ma's character app thought it looked funky. Do I really have to change it? I'm pretty sure people would actually read into what the sentence means if they don't understand it.​
     
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    bumped age to seventy nine
     
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    Things is mispelled in main ambition.

    I need in-game examples of how her lazy weakness will actually be, you know, a weakness. At the moment, it's just that some days she can't get up, but you aren't going to roleplay that out, so. Remove or expand.

    I'd call the changing self esteem a quirk, or a personality trait, not a strict weakness. Remove, replace with another mental weakness.

    Add one more weakness ontop of the above.

    Tag me when you're done
     
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    hello friend i am done, all things changed are tagged in pink
     
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    oh my god i love flower dividers​
     
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    "not my problem" is too similar to her laziness. Remove it and add a physical/combat weakness.
     
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    done -- i think its obvious where the change is
     
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    Update! Review needed.
    Updated magic-tier.
    Added Special Permission.
    Added weakness.

    Edited the spacing.
    Added in expirience in Regalia.
    @PonyoWantHam @LumosJared
     
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    Update!
    Added in expirience in Regalia.
     
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    yeah uh mobile bump
     
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    You're supposed to leave bumping till you go back a couple pages, pretty sure. Not twice a day, but that's just what I've heard x3
     
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    @ContestedSnow I dont really know about the rules of bumping, I just really hope someone reviews this soon tho
     
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    um where is her skill in the cyria shuffle
     
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    its trademarked do you want me to get sued by disney
     
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    Update!
    Added an expirience in Regalia.
    Added new magic due to IC interactions ( And timeskipping )

    Added new weakness to go with it.
    Updated outfit.
    Added the reason why she claims Avanthar.
    Editted her combat pro.
    dont wanna sound impatient but
    @LumosJared
     
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    2nd page bump​
     
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    first time u didn't review my app urself
     
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    I'll be reviewing this sheet.
    1. The new weakness doesn't have any apparent downside, in its current state its basically a side note. Fix this.
    2. There are a few grammatical mistakes, fix these.
    Make these changes in BLUE and tag me when you are done.
     
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    Not home so no editing yet, but do you want me to delete it or put in another weakness, or?
     
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    Walrusaur_ Force of Chaos

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    No need to remove it at all, simply give it a clear negative effect.
     
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    Update!
    Grammar has been fixed!
    Added very clear explanation on new weakness!
    All of which is tagged in pink.
    @Walrusaur_
     
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    yo can u possibly delete the 'updated!' part in the title so i dont have to lose the sticker
    update: nevermind i screwd up can u approve this again
     
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    [​IMG]
    "i dont htink i added enough aesthetics" update​
     
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    Rhuyne had fun once. made a PPT about it.

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    the aesthetics aaa -dies-
     
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    Does this need a complete re-review or was this just an aesthetic update?
     
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    full re-review, i added the skill addition but thats pretty much it
     
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    You did't add any skills they didn't already have? Just organized it into the new section? @Pastellanar
     

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