Okay, so.
- Your character is an Isldar. Why do they worship Estel? This isn't explained.
- How'd she learn to be a Lightgiver Ritualist?
- You never explain your character's actual origins. Where are her parents from, who are these Isldar with Ailor names?
- Where and how did she learn to be an architect?
- Where'd the full 20 Conning Rogue arise? Dunno if selling flowers justifies it.
- Why... and how were her children suddenly murdered? How did this affect her?
Just backstory stuff. Rest's all solid. Patch these in and I'll approve the app.