Nefer

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  1. Ocularum

    Ocularum Scott Staff Member PR3

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    Character Information

    • Full Name: Nefer child of Mafuane, Nefer of Clan Morathes
    • Titles: Countirh-Elector of Khemraqot, Minister of Equality
    • Age: 29
    • Gender: Genderfluid.
    • Race: Feka Asha.
    • Sexuality: Grey-A.
    • Eye Color: Brown bordering on yellow.
    Core Concept
    • Nefer is a wavering adherent to the Faces of Baskarr, favoring pragmatism over Baskarr's major philosophies. They most closely align themselves with Heron Itjawetekh and the Order of Ger.
    • A halfling that aspires to nothing more than obscurity struggling to deal with being trapped between multiple layers of society and peoples who would not have them. They wish to do their best, but their best fluctuates between unrepentant scheming and sincere efforts to reform themselves in an ideal image.

    Proficiencies

    Strength: 7
    Constitution: 4
    • Wood Craft Pack​
    Wisdom: 0
    • Engineered Biotics Pack (Feka Gifted)​
    Dexterity: 3
    Magic: 0
    Charisma: 0​

    Languages
    • Common (Free)
    • Ibeth (Parent)

    Appearance Information

    • Nefer is unmutated.
    • Nefer is a 6’5” (195 cm) lean, and moderately slouching, Feka-Asha with a veritable mane of black hair. Their skin, while usually hidden by bright swaths of peltastan, is a medley of fur and winding tattoos. They have a significant number of piercings on their face and ears, and are prone to wearing makeup.

    Life Story
    • Nefer was born to Mafuane of Clan Morathes (then matriarch of the clan) and Srialejaan Thenapëlaar (a minor diplomat hailing from Avela Astradhani) in 281 AC. They were raised on the fringes of Bestaal.
    • Nefer spent their adolescence "preparing" to take the mantle of clan head from their mother, and was introduced to some of their more estranged family members.
    • Realizing they had the time and very few expectations as a halfling, they embarked on a journey through several areas they found interesting, and tagged along with a group whose boorishness they found endearing. Their adulthood was thus spent shirking mounting responsibility as their clan began a rise to prominence in the Archipelago.
    • Their arrival to Regalia was happenstance rather than a desire to stick their nose into politics, but their succession as Clan head and general happenings necessitated that they stay.

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    | TRIVIA
    • Nefer's original character concept was a Crimson Witch.
    • The Egyptian hieroglyph for beautiful is the same as the one for zero, which is where Nefer actually gets their name.
    • Their relationship with Sunny started going downhill after she gifted them a scarf, giving credence to the sweater curse.
     
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    #1 Ocularum, Jul 8, 2020
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  2. fantuinn

    fantuinn most honest biped in athens Staff Member Lore2

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    Claimed for review.​
     
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    fantuinn most honest biped in athens Staff Member Lore2

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  5. Ocularum

    Ocularum Scott Staff Member PR3

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    @Katiesc Added sorcery and ritualism.
     
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    Taking over this application for Aspirant Review, as the previous reviewer is no longer staff.
    • Clarify how each of the languages were learned (i.e. which ones are native, which are from Linguistics investment, etc.)
    • Specify the subrace of their Altalar parent.
    • Remember that you have an additional 5 points to spend on top of your Age points (i.e. 35 age points to spend if they are 30 years old), as I presume the 'Boost' next to Linguistics means the invested Racial Boost.
    Make these changes in Green and tag me once finished.
     
  7. Ocularum

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    Changes made in green.
     
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    Approved.
     
  9. Ocularum

    Ocularum Scott Staff Member PR3

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    @KrakenLord01 Updated due to lore changes. Please let me know if anything is incorrect or needs to be fixed.

    • Removed Ritualism, as the reason I had it is now covered by racial abilities.
    • Removed Sorcery to be in line with Asha's inability to use Sorcery and Magic.
    • Moved proficiency points into: Woodwind Instrument (Talent), Linguistic Science (no longer afforded a point boost), Baking Art, and Bodycare Training.
    • Switched religion from Cult of Evolution to Faces of Baskarr.
    • Updated the terms used in the backstory and elsewhere, but still need to fix specific details to be lore compliant and make sense.
     
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    @Ocularum Reapproved. I will be taking this application for review going forward, please tag me with updates whenever they're made.
     
  13. microwavemmm

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    Claiming for review!
     
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    Cool character, approved. :)
     
  15. Ocularum

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    @microwavemmm Updated to new application format. Proficiency points have been swapped around and talents added.
     
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  17. Ocularum

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    Accepted. I don't need the points. I just want Nefer's app.
     

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