Basic Information Full Name: Narcisa Andrei Vadzenov Age: 92 Appears 26 years old due to Vampirism. Gender:Female Race: Ânia Ailor Sexuality: find out ic Preferred Weapon: Longswords Skill Information Total Points: 60 +5 Theatre Arts ( +5 Hobby Points ) +5 Dance Arts ( +5 Hobby Points ) +15 Blades Combat Skill +10 Athletic Training +4 Stealth Rogue Skill +10 Burgling Rogue Skill +10 Conning Rogue Skill +10 Magical Knowledge Sanguinology Shatterology Body Shape 22 Stat Toned Body Build Average Body Fat Languages Ânnore - Native Common - Free Language Special Traits/Spells/Mutations Alais Vampirism Bloodline - Active Crimson Guiding Crimson Cloaking Crimson Hostage Crimson Silence Visual Information Eye Color: Blue Hair Color: Ginger Hair Style: Long, straight Skin Color: Pale pinkish Clothing: Typically anything that’ll fit her. Height: 5’11 Personality and Abilities Choose your Character Alignment Lawful Evil Narcisa finds a system well for her to blend into for her own good. Usually, for her own selfish reasons, or for her own vampiric amusements of blending in and selecting her meals. Choose your Character Personality Type The Architect - INTJ-T Ever thinking Narcisa is often incredibly analytical, yet also imaginative and private. Despite her more active set of combative skills, she enjoys pursuing knowledge, even if she doesn't retain it for long she will always see to getting books on all subjects. She proud of her skills, and incredibly confident in them. Choose your Character's Religion Unreligious - 8/10 Narcisa doesn't kneel for any religious deities, she acknowledges the existence of deities and religious figures, she doesn't bother with religion. She believes in superstition, and things such as Tarot cards. However, she tries to make sense of superstitions whenever things pop up. Life Story ~Born on October 23rd, 216 A.C in Dracali, Rumvalia ~ {Infancy} Narcisa was born just in the outskirts of the city of Dracali, capital of the region of Rumvalia. Her father was Andrei Vadzenov, and her mother Iona Vadzenov. She had plenty of siblings as well, a younger sister born a year after named, Marcia, an older brother named Radu, and as well as a twin brother named, Boris. The family was a fairly wealthy owning businesses within the city, as well as Andrei being a mercenary. Meanwhile, Iona handled the Inn and Pub in the city. {Teenhood} Narcisa’s teenage years mostly consisted of learning to fight with Longswords by her mercenary father, and rough housing with her siblings. She picked many hobbies in her teen years such as theatre and dance, finding great interest in acting especially. One of her greatest joys in her teen years, if it wasn’t smacking her siblings with mock wooden Longswords then blaming it on another sibling, it was acting in the local theatres for the masses. (Adulthood) Narcisa reaching adulthood would see her becoming a mercenary for hire as her main job, while doing some acting on the side. She continued this for years of her life, until she met a fellow Ânian, a male named Margiu. Margiu offered a gift of power and immortality, and Narcisa agreed to the offering, unknowingly being tricked into becoming an Alais Vampire at twenty six years old. She and Margiu then proceeded to try to turn the entire Vadzenov family. Narcisa fell in love with Margiu, and the two became a couple. As the family became vampires, they simply began to fade out of the public eye. Staying hidden in the public view for decades. As the year 260 A.C came, and the Szabadok began to close near Anian lands, the Vadzenovs came out once more publically. Intermingling with the people with business, and Narcisa joined the Baluars military. Dutifully fighting the Szabadok in the name of Rumvalia and it’s Duke and Duchess. However, tragically, Margiu falls during a battle against the heathen Szabadok hordes. When Szabadok was chased out, she served as a ruthless law enforcer in the city of Dracali. However, when the death of the Baluars finally came, and vampire covens and Werebeast packs began to flood Rumvalia, Narcisa went to join up with one of the local covens hiding out in an old abandoned castle. However, during a conflict in 299 A.C with local Werebeast packs, her twin brother, Boris, her mother, and father were killed in a fight against the Werebeast packs. She left the coven not long after, moving back into Dracali for the rest of her time in Rumvalia until 308 A.C when she moved to Regalia.
Here is my review: You may only have 10 Hobby Points, whereas the math for your current point spread amounts to 11. Please remove a point from Theatre Arts. Your Personality and Abilities section is short - please write two sentences for each entry minimum, but strive to include more. Make these changes in whatever color you'd like, tag me, and I'll be happy to mark you as approved.
