My Brand-new House

Does it look good so far?

  • Yes!

    Votes: 7 58.3%
  • No!

    Votes: 1 8.3%
  • Needs work (specify)

    Votes: 4 33.3%

  • Total voters
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Hello!
being new to building good(ish) looking things, I decided to make a thread about my new house that I'm building in a creative world, which I hope to replicate in Massivecraft when it's done. I'm looking for any feedback at all, and constructive criticism. Here's some screenshots of how it's looking s far (It's not finished):

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Edit:
I replaced the spruce planks with brick, and decided I wanted a mansion instead of a house. So, I've added some walls on the side, and am starting a second floor.

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Another Edit:
I put some walls in back, and made a roof for the front thing. It probably has a cool architectural name, but I don't know :P .
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Could stand to be a bit less symmetrical, as most natural buildings are not.

Also a bit more material variation could look nice :P
 
Defiantly use more material for more 'pzazz.'. It's kinda bland the way it is...
 
I disagree with the idea of variation needing to be used. It really depends on what you're going for here. At the moment it seems like a very strict and stern environment. Perhaps a man who has lived long and been through wars lives here?

The Greyjoy's come to mind. Specifically Balon.
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Keep at what you're currently doing, as it looks great.
(Also I mean no offense in saying it looks like an old man lives there. I mean, come on - The old man is Balon Greyjoy. That's a compliment. xD)