“Some see me as a monster, but I know I am not.” [Pinterest] [Theme] Basic Information Full Name (Imperialized): Marvin Mayrhofer Previous Name: Vladimir Mayrhofer Age: 41 Date of Birth: August 6th, 266 AC Gender: Male Race: Alior Lineage: Drahl Culture: Imperial (Originally Vladno) Bloodline: Zikiel Brood Sexuality: Hetrosexual Preferred Weapon: Sorcery or Alchemy Skill Information (41+5=46 points) Science +15 Alchemy Science (+15 Points) +7 Medical Science (+7 Points) Knowledge +4 Magical Knowledge (+4 Points) Sanguinology Info Training +5 Perception Training (+5 Lineage) Art +10 Thread Arts (+10 Hobby Points) Sorcery +12 Nature Sorcery (+12 Points) +8 Lightness Sorcery (+8 Points) Body Shape: 0 Combat Stat = 0 Body Stat Type: Average Fat: Average Body Fat Languages: Common (Free Language) Mirnoye (Parental Language) Sorcery: Lightness Sorcery Healing Grace Burn the Unburned Nature Sorcery Soothe the Beast Brambling Hidden Pathways Alchemy Satchel: Vocadine-Fermanic Acid-Poppy Milk-Intensold Vocadine-Fermanic Acid-Hagaan Blood-Intensold Popfruit-Fireweed Extract-Gardu-Intensold Visual Information Eye Color: Ice Blue w/ Grey Eyes Hair Color: Raven Black Hair Style: Medium & Well Kept Skin Color: Tanish-White Clothing: Red & Black Outfit Height: 6’0” Alignment Chaotic Neutral Personality Type The Thinker (INTP) - INTPs are well known for their brilliant theories and unrelenting logic, which makes sense since they are arguably the most logical minded of all the personality types. They love patterns, have a keen eye for picking up on discrepancies, and a good ability to read people, making it a bad idea to lie to an INTP. People of this personality type aren’t interested in practical, day-to-day activities and maintenance, but when they find an environment where their creative genius and potential can be expressed, there is no limit to the time and energy INTPs will expend in developing an insightful and unbiased solution. Religion Unionism (2/10) Life Story 0-6 Years Old Vladimir Mayrhofer was born to Viktoria Mayrhofer and an unknown Sanguine on August 4th, 266 in the city of Anglia. His father was a mysterious man, even to Vladimir’s mother when they were married. His mother was a worker with many types, working as a sailor for a day and night job. When Vladimir was born, his father mysteriously disappeared in the night with no trace of where he went. When his mother saw his eyes for the first time, she feared that he would be just like his father. The next day, her mother tried to burn Vladimir in the sun in hopes that he would be destroyed and what she saw surprised her forever. Vladimir didn’t burn within the light of the sun, but the boy would be smiling as he’d be in his mother’s arms. 7-13 Years Old When little Vladimir was 7 years old, he decided to go to work with his mother at an alchemy shop within the city so he could learn more about the knowledge in hopes that he could use it for a job in the future. At the age of 10, Vladimir started to teach himself how to make alchemy for it was easier to use compared to a normal sword. 14-20 Years Old At the age of 14, Vladimir decided to leave his small home and start to learn from a Sorcerer to become a protected, as he didn’t want others to be harmed around him. When he first arrived with the tutor, everyone became very suspicious of what he was and why he was at the tutor's teaching grounds in the first place. Vladimir said that they could keep a very close eye on him, but he promised that there was nothing to fear and that he was harmless against the students. When he first arrived, kids tended to pick on him a bit for being different then other Aliors. The good news is that over time with being with the group, people began to trust him and would give him respect. 21-27 Years Old Vladimir continued to train for a long time until he graduated from the tutor's teachings at the age of 26, he decided to go find his mother within his home city. Once he returned to his home, he found his mother was sucked dry from a vampire. No trace of anyone entering the home through force and no means of destruction besides a teacup founded right next to Vladimir’s mother. After an investigation into the killing, Vladimir decided to leave to travel around Anglia to see what it had in store for him. With his knowledge of Sorcery and a hunger for more knowledge, he studied the powers of Sanguines with the hopes of finding more about himself along with his father.. 28-41 Years Old When Vladimir turned to the age of 30, he decided to head to the Holy City of Regalia in hopes of protecting it from the full blooded Vampires in hopes of stopping their evil powers from spreading. He doesn’t want others to have the same horror and fear as he did when he was young. Vladimir had decided that his path held more as an alchemist, in which he had begun to work as a doctor as well, under another tutor that tought him what he needed to know to help with protecting those around him. During his spare time, he decided to start learning how to sew new clothing to the poor, as he understood that they didn’t all had what he had. However, when Vladimir became the age of 40, he went to assist some civilians within the city from becoming Sanguine. In the end, he himself was captured and turned into more a feeding cattle. He was lucky not to be infected then, but they tortured him to where his right foot had become useless. In the end, he had to remove his right foot. Now, after working once again as an alchemist, he has decided to move himself down into the underworld to learn more about the ideals of the Vampires. He has given himself a new name, as he wanted to become a new many during a new time within Regalia. However, can he truly trust the ways of the Vampire to turn him into a better man, or will they corrupt him into darkness? Only time will tell, for the new, Marvin Mayrhofer.
Review: Without any Linguistic Knowledge points, you aren't allowed another language outside of his parent(s) dominant language. You aren't allowed to "double dip" so to speak, as in, you can't have his mother teach him two languages, only her culturally dominant language. In that case, Mirnoye. So remove Anglian from this please, or invest the relevant Linguistic Knowledge to compensate. I'd specify somewhere in his race or other place that he is a Vampire Brood. Listing it as you did here is a bit misleading. For about 5 minutes I thought this was a Vampire application until I saw otherwise. I would simply specify that he is indeed a brood, for clarity's sake. Not entirely that you've done something wrong here, but it'd be helpful for others and future reviewers. Make these changes in RED and tag me when done. @MrNoot1
