“The Warmhearted Saint” ╔══════════════════════════════════════════════════╗ ╚══════════════════════════════════════════════════╝ Basic Information⚔ Full Name: Maiev Zenith ⚔ Age: 31 ⚔ Gender: Female ⚔ Race: Ailor➤ Breizh/Leutz-Vixe⚔ Sexuality: Heterosexual ⚔ Preferred Weapon: Bastard Sword and Shield Skill InformationProficiency Points: ( 36 in total from age and bonus ) ⚔ Combat: 10 | 10 Invested➤ 10 Blades Combat | 10 Invested ⚔ Special Race Proficiency Category: 8 | 8 Invested ➤ 8 Unionist Rettism Skill | 8 Invested Spoiler: Points explanation ➤ 1 - The Character can write/read/speak/understand Sanktist Script, the ritualistic Unionist Language. ➤ 2 - The Character can use Sanktist Script to create ritualistic scriptures, tomes, tattoos and engravings that light up with a golden glow when another Sanktist or Rettist Ritualistic ability is used nearby, or with the snap of a finger from a Ritualist. ➤ 3 - The Character can clap their hands together, causing a quick burst of golden rays of light to emit from their hands, bounce around the emote-distance area, and light everything up brightly for 15 seconds. ➤ 4 - The Character can perform the Holy Sign: Benediction, a gesture involving a rosary necklace held in one hand, raised up over the shoulder, while kneeling and putting the other hand to the ground. This gesture produces a bubble shield around the Rettist Ritualist, which cannot be penetrated or broken by any outside force. ➤ 5 - The Character gains a Holy Soul Ward, meaning that if they are killed by a Mage, they resurrect over the timespan of 24 hours on the Dais of Faith in the Regalian Cathedral, with 48 hours of loss of memory. ➤ 6 - The Character gains a Holy Sun Glyph behind their head (appearing like a sun-disk), giving off a faint ghostly golden glow. They can turn this on and off whenever they like. While this effect is active, their eyes also gain a slight golden glow. ➤ 7 - The Character is able to turn a finger to the sky, causing a fireworks like-projectile to shoot out, reaching above the roofs of the houses and causing a large Unionist Eye to appear, well lit with a golden glow. This is also useful as an emergency flare. ➤ 8 - The Character can (only when outside) summon down a pillar of light to come crashing down on a single person. This requires them to stand still, not be in combat, and make a grabbing motion to the sky and then throwing motion into the ground. This pillar knocks the person forcibly to the ground and holds them there for 3 seconds, after which it dies. This can only be used once per person per day. ⚔ Knowledge Category: 8 | 8 Invested ➤ 8 Sorcery | 8 Invested ➤ 4 Light ➤ Healing Grace➤ 4 Order ➤ Arrange ⚔ Body Proficiency Category: 10 | 10 Invested ➤ 10 Athletic Training | 10 Invested Body Shape: ⚔ Physical Status | ( 10+ (10x2) = 30 ) ⚔ Shape | Ripped ⚔ Fat | Low Body Fat Languages: ⚔ Common 9/10 | Fluent ⚔ Picaron 10/10 | Fluent, learned through her father ⚔ Leutz-Vixe 10/10 | Fluent, learned through her mother «─────────────── «» ───────────────» «─────────────── «» ───────────────» Visual Information⚔ Eye Color: Light Brown ⚔ Hair Color: Platinum Blonde ⚔ Hair Style: Long and mostly kept straight, though tends to tie it back from time to time. ⚔ Skin Color: Fair ⚔ Clothing: Jackets with a white undershirt. ⚔ Height: 5’11” ╔══════════════════════════════╗ ╚══════════════════════════════╝ Personality and Abilities⚔ Choose your Character Alignment ➤ Neutral good, would most accurately sum up Maiev’s thoughts and feelings on how to act. ⚔ Choose your Character Personality Type ➤ Defender sums up Maiev’s personality, always wishing to protect those she deems right and innocent. ⚔ Choose your Character's Religion ➤ Unionism, since birth she’s believed in the Spirit. 9/10. Life Story ⚔ Childhood ➤ Maiev was born to two loving Parents, Belle (Her Leutz mother) and David (Her Breizh father), growing up on a small farm near the city of Morlaz in Brzeg. ➤ Continuing to help with the farm as she grew up she became rather used to manual labor, though she always kept up with her teachings with her mother teaching her Leutz and her father teaching the region’s tongue of Picaron. ➤ By chance the young girl heard of a knightly order within the city of Regalia, who’s members wore capes of crimson, with this new found ambition she begged and begged her parents for the chance at knighthood. Which after sometime, and begging, she was allowed being sent off when of the correct age. ⚔ Teen years and early Adolescence ➤ Once she came of age, Maiev was taken to Regalia upon which she enrolled within the school, having been taught the basics of combat by her father, the man being a former soldier, she managed to make it in, and her new life of knighthood began. ➤ The learning and combat of the school was grueling and hard at the best of times, the young woman finding it hard to keep up with most of her peers. Though due to her upbringing, she didn’t allow herself to give in, pushing herself through all the difficulties, she slowly understood how to wield a blade, even finding a friend in another Bloodcast in training who called himself Zelgius. ⚔ Later Adolescence and Adulthood ➤ Having finished her studies and trials, Maiev was knighted under the school of Bloodcast, adorning her new crimson cape with pride. ➤ Now having no real purpose, Maiev joined with Zelgius and another fellow Bloodcast on a pilgrimage of sorts, intent on doing right by the people. Later talk of recruitment for the first First Elven War, in which she fought as a foot soldier alongside her newfound friends. ➤ Returning from the battle mostly unscathed barring a few scars across his arms and back, though soon after another recruitment call was sent out for the First Songaskian War, within which she proved herself, defending fellow soldiers and receiving honors. Though within said War she came away much worse, having suffered an injury to her left eye she was put out of commission for sometime, leading her to stop her service while she healed, leaving her left eye with only partial vision. With such an injury she changed to include herself with Unionistic values, moreso furthering the ones she held highly already. ➤ She now looks for further purpose within the city, taking up any chance she can to prove herself and defend her homeland.
Shifted some prof points about, wanting to try a tad more Unionist rp! Changed made in this! @Arendan
@MasterMordax I am taking over your re-review for you. After looking it over, I have found nothing wrong with what you have updated. Re-approved.
Here is my review: You must have Sanktism skill confused with Rettism skill. The abilities you've listed are from Rettism. A small correction should fix that. You still have 8 proficiency points to spend. You aren't required to, however. Where is Morlaz? I'm getting hints that it's in Brzeg, or maybe Kintyr. Was her father a former warrior? How did she learn to fight from small farmers? Mark your edits in BLUE and tag me with @AlphaInsomnia when you are ready.
