══════════════════ Basic Information ══════════════════ ‣ Full Name: Leonardo Blum ‣Nickname: Bloom ‣ Age: 33 ‣ Gender: Male ‣ Race: Pure Genevaud Ailor ‣ Sexuality: Heterosexual Height & Weight : 6'2'' - 250lbs Signature Weapon: Two handed Claymore ══════════════════ Skill Information ══════════════════ ‣ Proficiency Points: 33+5=38 +10 Labor Training - Points + 10 Perception Training - +5 Base, +5 Points +5 Extra Heavy Combat Skill - Points +8 Command Tactic Skill - Points +5 Blades Combat Skill - Points +10 Culinary Arts - Hobby ‣Body Shape ‣Burly ‣Built Body Fat ══════════════════ Languages ══════════════════ ‣ Common | Free ‣Genevaud Dialect | Mother Tongue ══════════════════ Visual Information ══════════════════ ‣ Eye Color: Blue ‣ Hair Color: Dirty Blonde ‣ Hair Style: Long and Curly ‣ Skin Color: Pale White ‣ Clothing: Genevaud Fashion ‣ Height: 6'2'' ══════════════════ Personality and Abilities Character Alignment - Lawful Neutral Spoiler A lawful neutral character typically believes strongly in lawful concepts such as honor, order, rules, and tradition, but often follows a personal code in addition to, or even in preference to, one set down by a benevolent authority. Character Personality Type - Commander Spoiler Commanders are natural-born leaders. People with this personality type embody the gifts of charisma and confidence, and project authority in a way that draws crowds together behind a common goal. However, Commanders are also characterized by an often ruthless level of rationality, using their drive, determination and sharp minds to achieve whatever end they’ve set for themselves. Perhaps it is best that they make up only three percent of the population, lest they overwhelm the more timid and sensitive personality types that make up much of the rest of the world – but we have Commanders to thank for many of the businesses and institutions we take for granted every day. Character's Religion - Unionism 8/10 ══════════════════ Life Story ══════════════════ Born in the Genevaud Cantons, Blum was brought up by a middle class family, by no means where they wealthy, nor poor either. The Blum family was known for their small mom and pop bakery and wanted Blum to live on that legacy, though Blum had a different plan laid out, Blum wanted to be a might warrior, the strongest in the land, you see, the story books and folk lore got to little Blum's head and made him into what he would eventually be to this day. Though training and relentless working out, Blum was ready to start his journey, at the age of only sixteen, Blum reached out to the known family of the region, the Kreiburgs to get some work from them, starting as a recruit within their house guard. He was quite the big lad, and had very strong genetics from his father plus his workout routines, Blum looked like he was about 20, being about five foot nine and a small beard so of course he got the position with them. The time he spent with them was sweet and rewarding, his hard work payed off as he not only got payed in coin for his hard work, but got the finest accommodations within the Kreiburg manor. He valued the family and the family valued him, the relationship between them was mutual. Blum spent countless hours improving himself physically and only got bigger, gaining more and more muscle mass. Now at about the age of 20 years old, Blum was proved to be very useful to the Kreiburg family and was set to serve within the Kreiguard Company which was to serve as a sort of Private Military Contractor to the City of Regalia as the Patriarch of the family had big plan for the future there. Years go by protecting and serving the Kreiburg household, his bond with them only tightened, almost like a second family away from home. Now at the age of 30 and still serving the Kreiburgs, the Kreiburg patriarch, Theopold Kreiburg, thought to be a personal friend to Blum, decided to finally move to the Holy City of Regalia to spread their ever growing influence and business, and of course, Blum would follow along close behind.
Please expand upon your life story more than what it currently is. I'm positive that you can flesh out the character's backstory beyond a single paragraph. Make the changes, mark them in red, and tag me when you're ready for a review.
@Arhbi I also spread out my proficiencies with this character too, the changes were done in dark purple!
