Leon Lentenir

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Basic Information:

• Full Name: Leon “Leo” Dedrick Lentenir
  
  
• Age: 21 years
  
  
• Gender: Male
  
  
• Race: Ailor
  • Luetz-Vixe
• Main Ambition: Become renowned with his ability to teach and fight in the Turall Blade style of combat.

Skill Information (Optional)

• School: Turall Military School.
  
  
• Level: Warrior
  
  
• Source: Attended Turall Blade School

Visual Information:

• Eye Color: Blue
  
  
• Hair Color: Strawberry Blonde
  
  
• Hair Style: Well-kept, short.
  
  
• Skin Color: Slightly tan.
  
  
• Clothing: Tight-fitted clothing that is suited to both exercise and business dealings. Made in his family colors.
  
  
• Height: 5’ 11”
  
  
• Body Build: Ripped
  
  
• Weapon of Choice: Dual Arming Swords, or a combination of Arming sword and dagger.

Personality and Abilities:

• Leon takes first impressions very seriously, and can be overly flattering at times. He thrives on others’ opinions of himself. He would most likely be described as outspoken, and perhaps a little egotistical.
  He is very social and will often go out of his way to socialize and meet people. Often when talking to people he can be considered overlyflattering, and sometimes flirtatious. His is quite kind to almost everyone, and enjoys making friends, especially those who fuel his ego.

• Leon is very proud of his appearance, but requires a steady stream of reassurance to keep his opinion of himself high. He works very hard on his appearance and goes to great lengths to make sure others recognize his devotion. He can also be very self-critical at times, and tries incredibly hard to be vastly different from his brothers.
  
  
• Leon is very fond of his brothers Claude and Bellamie, but rather distant from his other two siblings and his parents. Leon is fiercely loyal to both friends and family, and enjoys both family and friendly gatherings to their greatest extent. Leon has had a few lovers, though he struggles to find time for a relationship. When he is around his family his egotism goes through the roof, especially around his parents. This happens because his egotism is fueled by his constant need for approval and wanting to stand out from his siblings. He can often be more loving when around his family, as he cares for them deeply.
  
  
• On a spectrum of alignment, Leon would most likely fall somewhere in the Neutral Good side. Leon enjoys performing acts of good, but does not feel like he should be beholden to a cause. His loyalty to his school and his family are a few exceptions, but overall he has a natural reluctance to obey authority and is opposed to absolute chaos. Above all else he tries to remain good in character, and takes a neutral view on corruption.

Talents:

• Endurance: Leon is devoted to his form and physique, and trains relentlessly. Throughout his time at the Turall School he learned to find enjoyment in keeping himself active and fit, and has formed a habit of doing activities such as running, hiking, and climbing to maintain his figure and build his endurance for combat.
  
  
• Charisma: Leo is most definitely the best orator of the Lentenirs. He finds it to be one of his few natural talents. In the family business he handles a lot of the public affairs, and is almost always present for business dealings for his family. Leo’s personality naturally flows with his charismatic ability, and he adores the back and forth of business and politics.
  
  
• Passion: The second youngest Lentenir puts forth everything he has into the things he does, and he does them to their fullest extent. His combat training is an example of this, as his continued devotion to constant training and practice fills up quite a bit of his daily schedule. He also finds he is passionate about his family, even if he could sometimes be seen as an antagonist.

Weaknesses:

• Poor Eyesight: The only one of his family, Leon has the eyesight of a fifty year old man. This has always posed a major challenge for him, and delayed his training a few months because of his need to practice fighting without having access to one hundred percent of his vision. Until his father was finally able to craft glass that could enhance his vision he would constantly walk into things, and has scars to prove that.
  
  
• Envy - Being the youngest middle child, Leon is completely used to having to live up to unreachable standards. His father always pushed him to be like his eldest siblings, and Leo took this to heart. He is often envious of the success of others, and takes loss more severely than most other people do. What may be considered a small loss to some would have a grave effect on Leon, and has been known to overexert or hurt himself in an attempt to do better.

Relationships:

• Bellamie Lentenir - Brother - @Annju - Leo’s favorite older brother.
  
  
• Claude Lentenir - Brother - @HigherAltidude - Leo’s second favorite.
  
  
• Cecilia Lentenir - Sister - @SpoopMelon The youngest of the Lentenirs, and Leo’s least favorite.
  
  
• Lycette Fillia-Ombre - @Erzly - One of Leo’s favorites, he finds guarding the Crystal Maiden quite enjoyable.
  
  
• Olivia Ombre - Employer - @Posidem Leo’s feels like he owes a lot to Olivia, and has no problem guarding her at all costs.
  
  
• Alfhild Ulfheide - Friend - @SlyChung Frustrates Leo, but he still cares for her as one of his first friends in Regalia.

• Christa van Keus - Coworker - @SpinSpinDizzy Leo's only real coworker. He enjoys being on guard duty with her, and has great respect for her.

Life Story:

• Leon Lentenir was born in Regalia, the first of his siblings to be born in the Holy City. The youngest of his siblings, Leon was raised under constant pressure to be better and do better. His youth consisted mostly of schoolwork, where he strove to get good marks like his elder brothers did. At the age of six he began to work with a private tutor in the Alt-Regalian and common languages, as well as his personal choices of mathematics and oration. Before he could finish his tutoring in D’Ithanie, however, his father had him shipped to Turall to train at the combat school, leading to his fluency in Alt-Regalisch and Common, but being less than fluent in D’Ithanie.

• At the age of thirteen Leon began his training at the Turall school, and became engrossed in the art of combat. On his father's dime (or regal, in this case) he arrived at the Turall school. Happy to be away from his family and privileged to have his father paying for all of his education, Leon thrived on the progress he was making. His steady advancement in the use of a blade fed his desire to feel accomplished. His training continued up until a few months after he turned 19, when his brother passed away. Leon left the school to return to the Lentenir home in Regalia, but missed his brother’s funeral by a week.

• Leon had never been attached to his brother Dmitri, but he was nonetheless concerned for his other siblings as well as his mother. The product of a crazy bridge, Dmitri’s death brought about a request from their mother: “Ensure the safe marriage of your siblings, and help your ‘brother’ run the business.” Leon returned to Regalia feeling invigorated, a new goal set out for him. He regretted having to leave the school, but held hope that he would be able to return to finish his training one day. On his return he has taken up the mantle of managing the family's finances as well as business relations when he has time. His brothers work to manufacture glass like their father did, and Leo manages most of the paperwork. He has also found employment under the Noble House Ombre, and has become deeply devoted to serving them.

 

Thank you for your review. I have highlighted edits I've made, with one exception.

The excerpt from the wiki (found here) specifies thirteen to fifteen, putting him at the very end of his training.

First Personality with Change:
Leon takes first impressions very seriously, and can be overly flattering at times. He thrives on others’ opinions of himself. He would most likely be described as outspoken, and perhaps a little egotistical.
He is very social and will often go out of his way to socialize and meet people. Often when talking to people he can be considered overly flattering, and sometimes flirtatious. His is quite kind to almost everyone, and enjoys making friends, especially those who fuel his ego.

Third Personality with Change:
Leon is very fond of his brothers Claude and Bellamie, but rather distant from his other two siblings and his parents. Leon is fiercely loyal to both friends and family, and enjoys both family and friendly gatherings to their greatest extent. Leon has had a few lovers, though he struggles to find time for a relationship. When he is around his family his egotism goes through the roof, especially around his parents. This happens because his egotism is fueled by his constant need for approval and wanting to stand out from his siblings. He can often be more loving when around his family, as he cares for them deeply.

Life Story Changes:

• At the age of thirteen Leon began his training at the Turall school, and became engrossed in the art of combat. On his father's dime (or regal, in this case) he arrived at the Turall school. Happy to be away from his family and privileged to have his father paying for all of his education, Leon thrived on the progress he was making. His steady advancement in the use of a blade fed his desire to feel accomplished. His training continued up until a few months after he turned 19, when his brother passed away. Leon left the school to return to the Lentenir home in Regalia, but missed his brother’s funeral by a week.
  
  
• Leon had never been attached to his brother Dmitri, but he was nonetheless concerned for his other siblings as well as his mother. The product of a crazy bridge, Dmitri’s death brought about a request from their mother: “Ensure the safe marriage of your siblings, and help your ‘brother’ run the business.” Leon returned to Regalia feeling invigorated, a new goal set out for him. He regretted having to leave the school, but held hope that he would be able to return to finish his training one day. On his return he has taken up the mantle of managing the family's finances as well as business relations when he has time. His brothers work to manufacture glass like their father did, and Leo manages most of the paperwork. He has also found employment under the Noble House Ombre, and has become deeply devoted to serving them.

Thank you for getting to my application so quickly. I apologize if there was any misunderstanding regarding the Turall ages, but I was just going based on what the wiki says.

@Eccetra