Laria Mogun

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    Full Name: Laria Mogun
    Nicknames: Lars, Clown, Clowny
    Age: Twenty-Five
    Date of Birth: "20th of August"
    Zodiac: Leo-Virgo Cusp
    Gender: Female
    Race: Daendroque/Krainivaya Ailor

    Lineage: Wildland Ailor (Krainivaya)
    Sexuality: Bisexual
    Preference: Women
    Preferred Weapon: She is a living weapon. (Brick also)

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    "Today the circus poster
    is scabbing off the concrete wall
    and the children have forgotten
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    Proficiencies:

    ▻STR: 2
    -Building Scale
    -Bruiser Feint

    ▻CON: 6 (+racial pack)
    -Second Wind
    -Interception
    -Unarmed Expert
    -Ally Throw
    -Steady Body
    -Debuff Endurance
    -Tank Watch

    ▻WIS: 1
    -Amontaar Wisdom

    ▻DEX: 1

    -Dirty Fighter

    ▻Magic: 2
    -Radiant Feather
    -Radiant Relocate

    ▻Charisma: 2
    -Context Linguist Pack (Ailor)
    -Forced Truce
    -Forced Aggro

    ▻Captain Cuddles: 1
    - Destined Familiar

    ▻Vampirism: Pledged to Tarakona
    - Empowerment
    - Body Claws
    -Limb Recovery

    -Instant Leap
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    Eye Color: Dark brown
    Hair Color: An alternating color pattern of two different shades, changing on the season.
    Hair Style: Puffy ponytail, or, a loose shoulder hang.
    Skin Color: Caramel
    Clothing: Bright colors define her.
    Height: 5 ft. - 6in. | 168 cm.

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    "Only the sound remains,
    the distant thump of the good elephants,
    the voice of the ancient lions"

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    Happiness

    Her feelings are displayed on her sleeve with a beaming smile and cheerful voice. Laria isn’t known for faking her emotions, nor for being easy to break down, so happiness is her most commonplace expression.
    Fear
    Something that the performer has had to overcome time and time again, she does her best to turn her fear into energy and adrenaline so as to push her through whatever situation she’s in. You don’t stare down a length of rope hanging over two stories without some fear, after all.
    Stress
    It depends on the stress, obviously. When there isn’t anything threatening Laria, she often can overcome her anxiety pretty easily. Dangerous situations cause her to lean towards panicky and frantic, though.
    Law and Authorities
    Laws themselves are something that she believes in, although the actual enforcers and authority figures usually are viewed with skepticism or aggravation by Laria.
    Race
    Laria has no issue with individuals of other races- everyone is entertained by her the same anyways, right? As long as someone isn’t disrespectful to her, she isn’t disrespectful to them.
    Religion
    She doesn’t follow any particular religion, nor was raised strictly with them, but the idea of worship by others isn’t something she had an issue with.
    Arcane and Magical
    The performer views magic and the arcane highly, even believing that there should be more of it in the world than there already is. It makes for excellent additions to her performances and causes for splendor.
    Family
    She is incredibly close to her family and loves them with all her heart, recalling memories of home with the utmost fondness. Nonetheless, a bird has to leave the nest eventually and so she doesn’t live with them anymore, only sending letters whenever she can.
    Pride
    She is quite proud of her profound physical balance and ability to draw like-minded individuals to her.
    Motivation
    Her motivations are to entertain the public by eventually creating her own big top circus, as well as to provide for her circus family.
    Personal Insecurities
    Laria finds a lot of insecurity from her awful singing voice, having ruined her ability to keep a note after years of forcing herself to yell. Not something she’s particularly happy with.
    Personal Fears
    She finds that her biggest concerns are losing her ability to perform, whether because of old age or injury and simply being alone, as she craves the company of others.
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    Laria Mogun, born to an unknown mother, was found within the crowds following a performance at the circus, still just an infant at her discovery. Taken in by the performers, there was a great search effort made for her parents, although they never returned for one reason or another- and as such, she found herself a new family in the Circus of Gems, a well-rounded and established traveling three-ring. The child grew up amongst the misfits and weirdos that had found themselves together, although their incredible talent for entertainment was something that she learned well, soon following in their footsteps.

    She grew up learning all their tricks and skills, and soon enough, once she was an adult, she wanted to spring up her own circus. She eventually left the Circus of Gems to strike up her own bad of freaks to entertain with. Along the way, she encountered another entertainer of her own type and soon fell in love with her... although the relationship did not last long, if only for a bloody ending that Laria took vengeance on. Nonetheless, she didn't allow this dark path to hold her back, and continued on her mission to do as she wanted.

    Having established herself as capable, at least, the Mogun took to the Crown City with hopes to truly prove herself in the ring of entertainment- for better, of course, although by any means possible.

    Once there, she performed solo for a short while, before deciding to actually start on her dreams, and opened up a business. The Circus of Cards, where she sells toys, games, prank supplies and novelty items. She enchanted every item within the store to move with life of their own, making the shop as whimsical as possible.

    Now, she's doing something she calls, 'The Experiment'. It involved a /lot/ of drugs. Who knows what kind of fresh hell she'll put herself into through this experiment.

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    Progression Talents: Combat 2, Sorcery 1
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    "How the bells trembled for the flying man."
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    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

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    Claimed for aspirant review!

    Before I start my review, I ask you remove the extra spaces between your bullet points so your application is easier to read! @FinishMeOff
     
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    Compacted
     
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    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

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    Sorry for the delay! And thank you SO much for being patient. Here is my review:

    Basic Information
    - No issues here!​
    Skill Information
    - This isn't a big issue since your points add up, however, could you please specify where your talent and hobby points were invested? Remember, Talent points can only be invested into Talent proficiencies, and Hobby points can only be invested in Hobby proficiencies.​
    Visual Information
    - I think you might've mixed up your hair and eye color, unless your character has a mutation that makes her eyes black and has dyed her hair blue.​
    Personality
    - No issues here!​
    Life Story
    - No issues here!​

    If your character has dyed her hair and has a mutation, I ask you mention the mutation in the skills section, if there was just a mix up, then I can confidently mark you down as approved!

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    Ah, I was more or less saying black as in they’re dark brown enough to be practically black in terms of viewing. As for the hair, yes, it’s just dye. I can adjust these both regardless.
     
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    @FinishMeOff Please list your physical stat on your application!
     
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    Lizmun yeah Staff Member Lore2

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    @FinishMeOff You never made my changes I requested, please do
     
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    @Lizmun Tagging for reapp since changes were made to system.
     
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    Tagging for a pair of changes, removing Bola due to complete lack of usage and practice, and adding Element Control 6 as learned IC, allowing Laria to perform even higher flying and death defying stunts. Reallocated spare points dumped into bola, into fist to keep physical stat the same.
    Will be updating again in the future but then it will only be for thread aesthetics/formating and potentially updating backstory to match what I have better fitting in my head/what I've divulged to other players.
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    Still Approved
     
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    Making some changes due to recent Ailor update and ranged combat no longer applying to thrown weapons. Will ping once finished thinking
     
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    ok
     
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    Rearranged Abilities, selected ones more befitting of a bare handed, slippery bastard brawler. Conning alchemy taking the form of smoke bombs for getaways from pranks. Removed Super Self 1 in favor of Power Curse 3, as phys cap is already reached. @Lizmun
     
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    @Lizmun 14 points well spent baby
     
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    @FinishMeOff 0 charisma. typical laria mogun behavior.

    approved
     
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    After thoroughly getting my ass beat and realizing now that you can use packs abilities even if you don't have exact weapon equipped, I've added packs and eliminated ability redundancy through enchant and metal which was being used to make unarmed grappler combat feasible.
     
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    Axes are OUT, turning stuffed animals and rubber mallets into deadly weapons is IN
     

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