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Played Character Khalil Al-saif

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The puffiest damn pigeon of them all..
Joined
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Age
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Location
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|| CHARACTER INFORMATION ||

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◈ Zahram Name (Currently Used): Khalil al-Saif ibn Idris min Al-Alus
⬩⬦ | Vasar Name: Ka'Urudda (kah-oo-rood-dah) | 𒅗𒉿𒁕
◈ Heritage: Eronidas Half-Skyborn | Founder Ancestry
⬩⬦ | Culture: Founder/Zabar

◈ Age: Thirty-Four | Born June 6th
◈ Religion:
Dogmatic Unionist (Al-Asir Focus)
◈ Gender & Pronouns: Cisgender Male | He/Him
◈ Occult: Mundane

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⬩⬦ | Pixel Art by Me! |
Appearance Information: || A technician in the body of a gladiator.
⬦⬦ General Appearance | A Skyborn supporting hyper muscularity and proportions only one of the more inhuman Eronidas could manage. His design reflects closer to the World of Warcraft design idea of an orc. Khalil holds himself in a respectable but easygoing manner in spite of his brutish stature and the set of broad double-tusks often forcing him to grimace. His beige and maroon Skyweave manifests on the back of his left hand, climbing up the outside of his arm and blossoming into large mandalas on his shoulder and left pectoral.
| Summary
⬩⬦| Eye Color: Beige irises with white sclarae.
⬩⬦| Hair Color & Texture: Black, type 3C, and lots of it.
⬩⬦| Height & Weight: 7'0", 213 cm | ~400lbs, ~181kg
⬩⬦| Body Type: Heavyset with great muscularity.
⬩⬦| Complexion: Warm Dark
⬩⬦| Additional: Rarely seen without a set of disembodied Esratech arms accompanying.
Occupations
Retainer of House von Rolanthe

Engineer & Workshop Co-Owner | Ibtikar Technologies
Society Member | Artisans' Society
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|| SKILL INFORMATION ||
  • ◈ Mixed Heritage: Skyborn + Eronidas
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    ⬩⬦ | Eronidas 1: Strength beyond human measure.
    ⬩⬦ | Skyborn 1, 2, 3, & 4: Technological superiority; a blend a nature and nurture.

    Artisans' Society
    ⬩⬦ | Artisans' Wealth: You have a support network of patrons backing up your work. Once per Eventline, when a problem requires a Wealth Token to solve, you can count as the source of that Wealth Token as long as you declare it on the spot.
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    ◈ Language Context: Khalil was born and raised in Al-Alus, Ard al-Nur, where a high standard of education exists and a wealth of resources were at his fingertips. He took advantage of this in preparation for integration into Eronidas society and archeological research in the name of technological (re)discovery.

    ⬩⬦ | Zahram (Arabic): Natively spoken.
    ⬩⬦ | Common (English): Fluent, but accented.
    ⬩⬦ | Vasar (Sumerian): Fluent, but accented.
    ⬩⬦ | Shalota (Unique): Professional capacity.

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|| PLOTHOOKS & CONCEPT ||
  • ◈ Philosopher Mechanic || A half-Eronidas Skyborn who is loyal to Al-Alus and Al-Asir. A cunning brute with a criminal background he is trying to grow away from, choosing to put himself in front of others. Like most Skyborn, Khalil relies heavily upon his logical skills. As a result, even his well-meaning decisions may feel cold. He's naturally curious about others, tending to speed through small talk in pursuit of deeper discussion with people foreign to his world-view.
  • Generous Follower of Al-Asir
    ⬩⬦ | A Unionist in technicality, who nevertheless has little in common with Regalian Unionists save for his close observance of Al-Asir's virtues. Khalil is good-natured and driven by a desire to improve the lives of others through his work. He will often lend his time and engineering for free, should doing so benefit this benevolent wish.

    Technician of The Artisans' Society
    ⬩⬦ | Khalil has been an active member of the Artisans' Society since 310, pushing his trade as an engineer while connecting himself and others to other tradespeople. He currently co-owns a workshop on Main Street known as Ibtikar Technologies, a legacy establishment which opens its doors to most engineers wanting to utilize the space.
    ⬩ | Purist: Khalil is what most would consider a Pure Chauvanist. This means he puts himself and other mundane professionals above artisans who utilize Magic to do their work, challenging and dismissing them as craftspeople worthy of respect.

    Founder Militant
    ⬩⬦ | The national security of Al-Alus itself and the territorial claims of the Technocracic Cousel were his to protect. As a loyalist, Khalil's station was as a war technician removed from the battlefront. He specializes in the creation and implementation of security measures and Al-Jabha: Skyborn front-line Automata.

    Volunteer of Kur
    ⬩⬦ | Familiar with Hollow-affiliated threats at home, Khalil earned the privilege to volunteer in The Last City of The Living in the Hollow plane itself. There, he lived and fought alongside fellow Eronidas, eternally at war with the Malefica's infinite Demons and Shades.
    ⬩ | Veilpassanger: Khalil spent an Alorian year inside the Hollow plane but has gone mostly unaffected thanks to his mundane status and precautions taken by professionals therein.
  • ⬩⬦◈ Years 281 - 304 AC | Felon's Bodyguard - Ages 0 to 23
    ⬦ | Khalil is raised by a loving mother and step-father in the busy capital of Al-Alus as the elder of two children in a blended family. His childhood is uneventful until his adolescence, where they find themselves in the darker corners of this technocracy among tradespeople in the Sands.
    ⬦ | A criminal element they'd long benefited from one day asks for more in return for their opulence, taking a liking to their imposing son. Coerced with their lives and livelihood, Khalil is molded into a fine bodyguard for important members of their extortionist ring.

    ⬩⬦◈ Years 304 - 313 AC | Rehabilitation & Enlistment - Ages 23 to 32
    ⬦ | Years of adaptation going as far as acceptance pass by, but angst and vanity could not overshadow the stress and guilt. Khalil's predicament could thankfully not continue in perpetuity; the weakening racket is broken up by Al-Alus law enforcement and Khalil is charged. Startling authorities with his young age, this alongside his commitment to rehabilitation are calculated sufficient cause to lighten his sentence. He enlists in his nation's technocrat military in hopes to rise above this chapter in his life and land his family in a better place, adopting the personal title Al-Saif.
    ⬦ | With his warlike roots, Khalil is an effective war-technician with cunning designs, elevating his position quickly by designing and orchestrating the function of Al-Jabha in defense of the Technocratic Council's claims. His service is rewarded with an opportunity to volunteer in Kur and his eventual honorable departure. Through conscious effort, Khalil has disassociated himself from a felonious way of life, but some skills persist.

    ⬦◈ Years 313 - Present | Settling In & Settling Under - Ages 32 to 34
    ⬦ | As an extension of his curiosity toward his ancestry, Khalil is attracted to a Skyborn Academy hovering just above Kezzeret Artamon as a way to explore the Pols outside of a military context without feeling too far away from familiarity. Becoming influenced by the Zabar Eronidas living there, he stops eating poultry among other cultural adoptions as his Vasar improves.
    ⬦ | Sponsored by both his above and below-the-table work, Khalil follows various Eronidas populations. Eventually, he finds himself in the Regalian capital to exploit what it has to offer him as both prized Eronidas mercenary and Skyborn engineer.
  • ⬦ Khalil is the son of an Eronidas belonging to a particularly brutal Ahazu clan; fierce tribalism and a vicious dogma of might-makes-right runs in his veins. In spite of this, he embraces Zabar culture as an urbanite who has a hard time stomaching their oppositional ways. The union of his parents is an enigma.

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⬦◈ | 15/15 Points Used | 1 Persuasion | ◈⬦

POINT ALLOCATION
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⚙ Strength | 02
⬩⬦| Melee: Shrug Off
⬩⬦| Athletic: Breakthrough
⚙ Constitution | 05
⬩⬦| Training: Bulwark
⬩⬦| Shielding: Impact (Free), Cover, Slam, Rumble, Reversal

⚙ Intelligence | 07
⬩⬦| Adapt: Wardrobe, Oceanic, Safeguard
⬩⬦| Tech: Resist, Exhaust, Thruster, Livewire

⚙ Charisma | 01
⬩⬦| Speech: Hazard

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☼ Staff Review! ☼
Hello, my name is Eccetra and I'll be reviewing your app today.​
  • Without any points in Linguistics, Rasztaal can only know 2 languages: their birth language and common. Please remove Faraddi, or relocate 4 points to Linguistics.
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  • While not completely necessary at the moment, the life story is looking a bit beefy. If you ever need to update it or add more, you will need to shorten it. It doesn't have to read like a story; rather it should be a factual list of events with little fluff.
Please mark your changes in another color and tag me when you're finished!
 
@Eccetra

Pulled from the application template regarding language: "If the Slizzar individual had "assimilated" parents, parents who adapted to a single culture, they can learn Zasta and whatever the majority language of that culture is. Additionally, Common as a language always comes for free without costing anything."

I also shortened the life story to hopefully a high enough degree.
 
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@Caelamus Rewritten backstory. Swapped Wa'an for K'alatibiri, figuring that would make better sense considering that backstory. Also, see if you can remove the poll, please. I can't do it myself.
 
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@Caelamus Whale of a change! Race has been retconned to Qadir, but this character is still Slizzar-aligned and snakey. This has affected everything across the board.
 
BUMP MORE RAUGH

Everything looks good, so I'll mark this approved. Once your Custom Kit has the point cost assigned with it, you'll just have to @Tag me to look that over. But, that certainly doesn't mean you should sit here on re-review any longer than you have to!