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Played Character Khalil Al-saif

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Joined
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Points
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Age
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Location
Baltimore, MD
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Character Information
⚙ | The Architect of Autonomous Aegis | ⚙

◈ Full Name: Khalil al-Saif ibn Nabeel min Al-Alus
◈ Heritage: Half-Skyborn (Eronidas Recessive) | Founder Ancestry
◈ Age: Thirty | Born June 6th | ♊
◈ Religion:
Dogmatic Unionist (Al-Asir Focus)
◈ Gender & Pronouns: Cisgender Male | He/Him
◈ Occult: Mundane

Occupations
Technician, Blacksteel Armorer

⬦ Workshop Owner | Bazaar of Machina
⬦ Guild Member | The Scribe Order
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⬩⬩ || The Supremacy of Technology || ⬩⬩
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Core Concept: || A hybrid between societies of reason.
⬦⬦ The Philosopher Mechanic | A half-Eronidas Founder Skyborn who is loyal to Al-Alus and Al-Asir, but who does not hesitate to sidestep the law where shortcuts abound. Khalil envisions a kinder future for Aloria's inhabitants, where want and need are satisfied through advancement in technology over reliance on spellcraft and the abstruse ambitions of entities behind it. Naturally curious about others and joyously gregarious, he hopes to have thoughtful conversations with strangers and abhors prattle.

Appearance Information: || A technician in the body of a gladiator.
⬦⬦ General Appearance | A Skyborn supporting hyper muscularity and proportions only one of the more ogreish Eronidas could manage. Khalil holds himself in a respectable but easygoing manner in spite of his size and the set of broad double-tusks often forcing him to grimace. His beige and maroon Skyweave manifests on the back of his left hand, climbing up the outside of his arm and blossoming into large mandalas on his shoulder and left pectoral. Traces of continual spread suggest its path will continue across his chest in the coming decades.

| Summary
⬩⬦| Eye Color: Beige irises with white sclarae.
⬩⬦| Hair Color & Texture: Black, type 3C, and lots of it.
⬩⬦| Height & Weight: 6'2", 188 cm | ~360lbs, ~163kg
⬩⬦| Body Type: Heavyset with great muscularity.
⬩⬦| Complexion: Warm Dark
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Proficiency Information | 14/14 Points Spent
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⬦◈ | 7 Attack (Intelligence) | 4 Defense (Constitution) | 2 Persuasion | ◈⬦
  • Point Allocation
    Details
    ◈ Constitution | 03
    ⬩⬦| Mounted: Trooper (Skyborn)
    ⬩⬦| Training:
    Status Endure, Breather, Iron Will

    ◈ Dexterity | 03
    ⬩⬦| Roguery: Escape Artist, Disguise
    ⬩⬦| Ranger: Stance (Free), Tag

    ◈ Wisdom | 00
    ⬩⬦| Chem: Technique Parry (Skyborn)

    ◈ Intelligence | 06
    ⬩⬦| Tech: Hook Shot
    ⬩⬦| Puretek: Antimagi, Wrath, Blessing
    ⬩⬦| Adapt: Wardrobe, Oceanic

    ◈ Charisma | 02
    ⬩⬦| Speech: Hazard, Undisclosed
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  • Skill Information
    Details
    ◈ Languages | Collector of Technology
    ⬩⬦| Native: Zahram (Arabic)
    ⬩⬦| Fluent: Common (English), Vasar (Sumarian)
    ⬩⬦| Conversational: Shalota (Unique)

    ◈ Hobbies & Talents | The Mechanic
    ⬩⬦| Technology: Clockwork, Esratech, Hoplastc
    ⬩⬦| Athletic: Formally trained as a militant and laborer.

    ◈ Heritage Mechanics | Eronidas/Skyborn Mixed Heritage

    ⬩⬦| Free Packs: Skyborn
    ⬩⬦| Eronidas: 1 | Unmatched Strength
    ⬩⬦| Skyborn: 1, 2, 3 & 4 | Technological Superiority

    ◈ Guild Mechanics | Scribe Order Member

    ◈ Fluid Arrangement | Mutech-Tap

    ⬩⬦| Khalil has a unique interaction with Sinistral Magic.
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Character Plot Hooks/Backstory

⬩⬦◈ || Workshop Owner: Khalil is an accomplished technician who runs a workshop on Main Street called the Bazaar of Machina. Most are welcome to work here, with or without meeting him first.

⬩⬦◈ || Criminal Contact:
Khalil used to be deeply involved with the criminal circuits of Ard al-Nur (Farah'deen). Though he's worked hard to step away from it and will avoid being too invested, he is comfortable in the presence of outlaws and might offer boons in exchange for favors.

⬩⬦◈ || Militant of Al-Alus: Khalil's career as a citizen of Al-Alus was as a war technician maintaining the national security of his homeland. As a Unionist inventor of war machines, he has a strong opinion surrounding the concept of Blightcraft.

⬩⬦◈ || Eronidas Blackcraftsman: Khalil is a professional of large and industrial machinery and represents one of the Eronidas people's prized Blacksteel craftsmen. Though outside his preferred practice, he is a capable armorer albeit not exceptional.

⬩⬦◈ Years 282 - 305 AC | A Reluctant Hitman - Ages 0 to 23
⬦ | Khalil is raised by a loving mother and step-father in the busy capital of Al-Alus as the elder of two children in a blended family. His childhood is uneventful until his adolescence, where they find themselves in the darker corners of this technocracy.
⬦ | A criminal element they'd previously benefited from takes a liking to young Khalil's naturally formidable and martially gifted posture, but acting on this talent even for monetary gain ran against his nature. Holding his family hostage as a gentle final push, they compel him to design and act upon creative ways to intimidate, maim and sometimes kill their enemies.

⬩⬦◈ Years 305 - 310 AC | Rehabilitation & Enlistment - Ages 23 to 28
⬦ | Utterly nauseated by stress and guilt, Khalil's predicament could thankfully not continue in perpetuity; the racket forcing him to act on their behalf is broken up by law enforcement. Though relieved, Khalil is still charged as a conspirator. In the midst of serving a sentence, Khalil proves his non-threat to the nation and commitment to rehabilitation. He enlists in its military in hopes to rise above his past and land his family in a better place, adopting the personal title Al-Saif.
⬦ | Khalil is an effective war-technician with great instinct, elevating his position quickly by designing and orchestrating the function of Al-Jabha in defense of the Technocratic Council's claims. His service is rewarded with an opportunity to volunteer in Kur and his eventual honorable departure. Through conscious effort, Khalil has disassociated himself from a lawless way of life, but skills and some connections persist.

⬦◈ Years 310 - Present | Settling In & Settling Under - Ages 28 to 30
⬦ | As part of his curiosity toward the other half of his ancestry, Khalil is attracted to a Skyborn Academy hovering just above Kezzeret Artamon as a way to explore the Pols outside of a military context without feeling too far away from familiarity. Becoming influenced by the Zabar culture, he stops eating poultry among other things.
⬦ | Sponsored by both his above and below-the-table work, he follows various Eronidas populations to eventually find himself in the Regalian capital to exploit what it has to offer while trying to keep a clean nose in front of officials.
 
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☼ Staff Review! ☼
Hello, my name is Eccetra and I'll be reviewing your app today.​
  • Without any points in Linguistics, Rasztaal can only know 2 languages: their birth language and common. Please remove Faraddi, or relocate 4 points to Linguistics.
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  • While not completely necessary at the moment, the life story is looking a bit beefy. If you ever need to update it or add more, you will need to shorten it. It doesn't have to read like a story; rather it should be a factual list of events with little fluff.
Please mark your changes in another color and tag me when you're finished!
 
@Eccetra

Pulled from the application template regarding language: "If the Slizzar individual had "assimilated" parents, parents who adapted to a single culture, they can learn Zasta and whatever the majority language of that culture is. Additionally, Common as a language always comes for free without costing anything."

I also shortened the life story to hopefully a high enough degree.
 
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@Caelamus Rewritten backstory. Swapped Wa'an for K'alatibiri, figuring that would make better sense considering that backstory. Also, see if you can remove the poll, please. I can't do it myself.
 
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@Caelamus Whale of a change! Race has been retconned to Qadir, but this character is still Slizzar-aligned and snakey. This has affected everything across the board.
 
BUMP MORE RAUGH

Everything looks good, so I'll mark this approved. Once your Custom Kit has the point cost assigned with it, you'll just have to @Tag me to look that over. But, that certainly doesn't mean you should sit here on re-review any longer than you have to!