"Like a leaf in the wind, life changes and warps at unexpected rates."Character Information Full Name: Kara'välÿna Hállëvandëia Nickname: Kara, Valyna, T'sanya Race: Yanar - Yanera-Dul Age: 163 Sex: Agender Gender: Female - She/Her Sexuality: Asexual Eye Color: Malachite Green Core Concept Kara is a strayed Estel Worshipper, having once believed firmly in the faith, but now left questioning it and her god. Instead, she travels without a thought to it, preferring to leave the topic alone. Kara is a doctor, one with a tendency to take things into her own hands and disregard others’ feelings in the pursuit of knowledge or physical healing - though she does still care greatly for people outside of work. She is furthermore a writer, keeping a record of things for her own sake. Proficiency Information 4 Stave Combat 10 Medical Training 2 Body Art (Hobby) 3 Writing Art (Hobby) 5 Husbandry Art (Hobby) 15 Sorcery 3 Arcanology 9 Linguistics 6 Alchemy 3 Unused Spoiler: Secret "Skill" -5 Eggcracking Skill Ability Information Common Yanar Kit (7 Abilities) Yanera-Dul Kit (2 Abilities) Alchemy Pack one: Common Alchemy Pack two: Healing Alchemy Sorcery - Exist Sorcerer Spirit Familiar I | Sorcery Skill 1 | Racial Passive Flux Shift 7 Element Control 3 Home Enchant 4 Light Mend 2 Light Mend 3 Arcanology Curing Knowledge Languages Common (Free) Saan (Parent) Altalar (Linguistics) Wa'an (Linguistics) Zasta (Linguistics) Appearance Information Despite her ever-changing colors and appearance, Kara has always retained a slight abnormality with her eyes. One of them is a lighter shade and hue than the other. Kara’s overall appearance varies, as she tends to “change with the seasons”, though her current height is 5’2”, with an athletic body shape, and tied-up purple hair. "If something burns your soul with purpose and desire, It's your duty to be reduced to ashes by it." Life Story ⚘ Kara was born in the Plains to a Yanar known as Zaan Haaven (Or Azëlloa Hállëvandëia) - her early days were rather peaceful. ⚘ She was given many paths to choose from early on - yet she ended up becoming a picture-perfect image of her parent in the ways of medicine. ⚘ Being sent out into the world to accomplish her dreams, Kara ended up attending various schools and courses on medicine, anatomy, alchemy, and anything involving them - wanting to learn as much as she possibly could, hoping to return to her village a proper doctor. ⚘ In her later years, Kara decided to take on a motherly and elderly role for the less fortunate. She often took in orphans, or children with parents unfit to care for them - as well as even ‘adopting’ and caring for adults who required aid. Overall, she sought to be a mother to all, even those who may have lost their own. ⚘ As Yanar frequently do, her family required change. Their leader decided their next destination would be Regalia, and Kara happily followed suit. Rather content with a change of scenery. Progression Information Support Level 2 (Forced) Sage Level 1
@TheVigilantWolf Tagging for a re-review! I switched five points from light bow to medical sciences, since I'll likely be using that more.
No problem just update your body stat number and you're good to go. I'll approve though. Approved. @AWildResi
@TheVigilantWolf Mostly aged her up for proficiency points. But also added some things to life story, changed some things in personality abilities, and also changed some things in visuals.
Oh oop, didn't seem to get the notification for this! I'll be rereviewing it now, just give me a few... @AWildResi
All I got for you is to make sure you update your "Total Points" listed, otherwise, everything checks out! @AWildResi
@TheVigilantWolf Added a bit onto life story, added a chapter boost onto proficiency points, aannndd also changed visual information to include the two 'forms/templates' that I'll switch between the most. If the visual information isn't okay just let me know! It's mostly just my attempt at attempting to keep up with the constant Yanar switching forms.
@TheVigilantWolf Aged up fifteen years, half because of a new child addition and half because I didn't feel she fit the age she was at. Also added to life story, added new proficiency points, adjusted physical stat, and removed the chapter bonus because It's become a bit too confusing to add to the app.
@TheVigilantWolf Updated to fit with the new proficiency system, as well as changed the visual information yet again due to, y'know, Yanar. Added the inventory information too but that's an optional thing so no need to worry about it!
Hey there! I'd like you to either add that Kara is a devout Estel follower or please remove Lightgiver from the application!
@Katiesc Tbh I.. Entirely forgot that that part of the personality and abilities existed. Edited accordingly!
@Katiesc I just changed around four points, so I don't believe that requires a re-review! If it does feel free to ping me or something though.
@Katiesc Not sure if this requires a re-review since I only shifted around three points, but! It was into a parlor magic spell, and pretty much every section aside from basic information was also edited in some way, so. Re-review please!
@Katiesc Don't,, thiiiiiink this needs a re-review. Correct me if I'm wrong, but, just removed Vampirism and that's it cause she got cured.
@Katiesc Aged up one year, given sorcery spells, almost all proficiencies reworked, revised personality and abilities section, and added a little bit in the life story.
@Katiesc Hi hello! I removed one lightness sorcery spell and added three new nature ones in addition to removing the previous to nature ones. That's about it for what I need a re-review for, I also bumped one singular sentence up more in the life story due to a character being aged up but that ain't really re-review worthy.
My Review Skill Information Prof. Points: I see that you've got the point list for sorcery split into two (nature and light) to explain where the points are! To keep up with this, please readjust the points to accurately reflect the magic spells.
@Katiesc Ok! Hobby points added, option two of personality and abilities added, unarmed combat removed in favor of another language, aannd tidbit in life story to go along with the new language.
@Katiesc Updated with the proficiency change! Also added some bits to the life story, bumped down faith as an ic change, changed sorcery due to prof update, and a few other things I may be forgetting that were marked in this color. (Also sorry the bullet points are borked as usual) alsoaddedmoreaesthetics
@Katiesc Properly updated the life story in tandem with the Yanar update, (as well as the race) archived the questions list of the personality and abilities for the sake of finding out stuff in character. But I mostly need a re-review for the added aesthetic nature spell due to Yanar's new racials! (might've forgotten a few things, but, whatever's colored is what's been updated as usual)