Review:
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- Being a halfbreed of a Medorr Kathar, Himeldir would be unable to reach Muscular build, even being Ailor-leaning. Please lower the Body Stat to Ripped at highest.
- She'llaq isn't a 'normal' language, and cannot be spoken in any casual setting. It is used only for ritualistic events. Further, since Ritualistic She'llaq isn't spoken as the main language of the Kathar, an extra 6 points will be required to have it. Either remove this, or add the required points and specify the language as 'Ritualistic She'llaq'.
- In Himeldir's Life Story:
- I'd like you to add where Himeldir was born into his Life Story.
- I'd also like you to switch out all mentions of 'Saivalthar' from his Life Story to the relevant Kathar subraces.