Basic Information Static Details Full Name: Hel-Elvhii Versilan Eyllisinddar. Age: 87 years. Born: 2nd November, 220AC. Gender: Male. Race: Teledden Altalar. Preferred Weapon: Melee: Longsword. Horseback: Cavalry lance. Skill Information Proficiencies Total Points: 70 point pool. (Altalar boosted pool.) Combat: +20 Blades Combat. Specialising in longsword combat. +30 Cavalry Combat. Specialising in cavalry lance combat. +5 Shielding Combat. Specialising in heater shield defence. Knowledge: +4 Societal Knowledge. Allorn Culture. +3 Historical Knowledge. Nelfin History. Science: +8 Anima Care Sciences. Specialising in equine care. Arts: +10 Musical Arts. Specialising in singing. *A bolded investment indicates Hobby Point usage rather than normal Proficiency Point usage. Body Shape Shape: Ripped. Physical Stat: 30. Calculation: 20 Blades + 30 Cavalry + 5 Shielding = 55, capped at 30 by race. Body Fat: Low. Languages Birth Tongues: Modern Altalar. Learned: Common. Special Traits Will of the Ages: No points lost. Will of the Arcane: Arcanomancy. Memorymancy. Powermancy. Visual Information Basic Image Eye Color: Forest green. Hair Color: Golden blonde. Hair Style: Swept to the side into a thick braid, with silver thread inlaid. Skin Color: Flushed. Clothing: Loose, flowing clothing, in colours of red, white, and brown. Height: 6’8”, or 203cm. Personality and Abilities The Core List Moral Alignment: Lawful Neutral. Personality Type: The Commander; ENTJ-A. Religious Affiliation: Religion: Faith of Estel. (Altalar Pantheon.) Piety: 10/10. Life Story Birth & Childhood Hel-Elvhii Versilan Eyllisinddar is born on the evening of the 2nd of November, 220AC in Thelassia. His parents possess a modest wealth, though given the nature of Altalar society, he does not go without at any point in his upbringing. Hel-Elvhii, referred to more often as simply Hel-Elvhii, is raised on stories of old Allorn Empire soldiers and tales of their heroics, as well as fairy tales of Estel and Her Pantheon. He is instilled with a deep sense of pride in his people and culture from a young age, as well as a staunch loyalty to his faith. Even as a child, he demonstrates his desire to imitate the warriors of old Allorn, taking up sticks as wooden spears to reenact the stories from his books. While some Est’alorn see this as promise, others attempt to warn him against the barbarism and rage that are inherent in other, lesser races. He rarely listens. Teenage Years & Adolescence Elvhii’s loyalty to his people and faith in his goddess continue to manifest well into his teenage years; he reads as much as he can regarding the feats of ancient heroes and the cautionary tales of gods in their efforts to maintain the world. In this reading, he comes across the stories of Archmages, whom he believes were simply Est’alorn exercising their divinely granted control over Aloria and the other dimensions. In the meantime, he attempts to hone his body and mind towards the pursuit of battle in the name of the Est’alorn. This continues for the rest of his life, up until and including the present day, granting him a not-inconsiderable amount of athleticism. Early Adulthood Elvhii begins his independent life in 250AC, performing a great pilgrimage across the lands of old Allorn, visiting historical structures and the sites of ancient battlefields to pay his respect to the lost Empire of his people. He visits a run-down shrine of the War-God Tal'Sieth and reflects on the brutality He warns against, strengthening Elvhii's resolve to embody only the most noble and fervent of soldiers. He joins up with a small military academy in the Fin'ul Straits for a short time, learning in greater detail of Allorn exploits in battle, and of a number of the lesser-known warrior-heroes of the Elven past. A particular hero, the knight-like Aal-Kolandis, highlights himself as a great horseback warrior who thwarted a Kathar incursion soon after the Cataclysm by leading a massed cavalry charge against the perfidious forces of the Void. He elects to follow in Aal-Kolandis' footsteps, and prove himself as a warrior of equal skill and repute. Later Adulthood As with many Teledden, Elvhii dedicates his life to the total mastery of a single skill; in this case, he takes up the gallantry and poise of the knight-like legends of old Allorn, spending hours practising his skill at arms on foot and on horseback, alongside taking utmost care of his steeds in the hopes of crafting an unbreakable bond between fearless master and unflinching beast. As a dedicated warrior, Elvhii takes up with numerous masters and generals, fighting across the Principalities in border conflicts with Kathar, Varran, and encroaching Ailor loggers and settlers. He defines himself as a warrior of the faith, never entering battle without some form of Estellian declaration or symbol of his religion on his body, and making clear his opposition to the heretical faiths of others, especially so in the case of Dragon cultists or Isldar. 302AC brings around a change in Elvhii’s fate; after the tensions of the Ranger Crisis, he throws himself willingly into the fray of the Elven War, assisting the northern Princes in their efforts against Regalian incursion. Ultimately, however, the war is lost and the Princes are forced to confederate with the Regalian Empire. He remains in the northern states for some time after the war, lingering around his place of birth. Time passes, and by 307AC, Elvhii has decided upon sending himself to the City of Light at the heart of the Ailor Empire; following the disasters of the Bone Horror Crisis, the second Elven War, and the following Kathar War, he wishes to see the centre of the Ailor war machine and understand it in full, despite his own aversions to the lesser races, whom the Regalians hold in high regard. With this, he sets off from L’Elvellen, once Thelassia, intent on finding a foothold in the “Holy” City.
@Scribbe here we go: The only thing I may have an issue with is the Physical stat calculation, in regards to Altalar Martial Skill being factored in. But since the athletics already bring it to the cap of 30, it doesn't really matter since the end result is the same. With that said, approved. I'll let you know if the math changes.
@FireFan96 Requesting re-review; rebalanced proficiencies with the removal of Altalar Martial skill and the Altalar rings, shifting character focus to cavalry combat. Made the necessary edits to the Life Story, particularly around Early Adulthood.
@FireFan96 Requesting re-review; made some alterations: -Pulled 10 points from Athletics Training and re-invested them into Cavalry Training to reach Altalar single Proficiency 30 cap. -Integrated Hobby Points, invested solely into Musical Arts. This has been bolded to indicate Hobby Point investment. -Removed CRP rolls from app, as per the removal of Recommended Combat Rolls from the wiki.
