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Played Character Haoyin Dailang Wu

This character is actively played.
Hello, sorry for the delay! Here's my review:

Proficiencies/Abilities
-Please specify which magic dimension for your magic.
-Please specify which demon Haoyin has for his theurgy packs. I see that in the life story you mentioned it being an exist apparition.
-Also to note, I've counted 13 points so you have one point to use whenever or wherever you wish too.

Appearance Information
-Please add a cahal affliction form underneath appearance information along with a dreamform if it's applicable.

Life Story
-Please make mention of where Haoyin was infected with cahalism. Was it during his travels with the caravans or when he got to regalia?
-Also please make mention of where Haoyin learned his artificier skills. Was it back in Dexai or elsewhere?

Please make these changes, and tag me when your done or if you have any questions!
 
@RaggedyGrace greetings, sorry for the large delay. I've been awaiting proficiency changes as well as coming up with backstory and other descriptions. Freshened up the core concept, messed around with the profs, swapped specials, and made the requested changes, all in PURPLE
 

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