Spoiler: Relationships (Number indicates strength of feeling, not its polarity.) Alaire Arnyn 90 "You taught me how to stand." Lilianne Arnyn 90 "..And you taught me how to fall." Aubrianne Arnyn 80 "I dread to think of where I would be without your teasing, and your kindness." Adhémair Arnyn 80 "The golden child- and for good reason, I think. Though you'll never hear me say it." Cilian 90 "I wish I was a little more like you." Eira Eldevik 100 "Always." Valkari Lothgard 67 "One day we'll meet, and figure out where it all went wrong. ..Or we won't. Perhaps that's alright, too. Chengis 80 "Your sacrifice was not for nothing. I swear it." Marisa Solisti 80 "I've wished you nothing but happiness, from the first moment." Sabarielle Caeosei 35 "A good friend. Though with how Regalia has become, perhaps it is better you vanished from the city." Julius Peirgarten 55 "For the man I remember you as. And the man you will be again, some day." Cyprien Bongrante 45 "You had good intentions, I am sure." Vulmar 50 "A good man, beneath it all. ..Bloody funny, too." Lucille de Monette 80 "Somehow, you're always there when I need you." Merith 20 "Unexplained mercies. Perhaps I will learn why, one day." Julian Keymorne 25 "Odd fellow. Fun to drink with." Caedric Westryn 20 "How my father would weep, if he saw the kind of Viridian you were." Fen'nan Solaveira 70 "Don't turn into a problem that I have to solve. Please." OLD: "One of us should be happy. That seems only fair." OLD: "Different paths." William Howlester 45 "Efficient. Stalwart. Corrupt. But I suppose we are all that last one, in some way." Cal 50 "I hope you found your peace, in the end. For your sister's sake." Leufred du Triege 55 "Perhaps some things can be forgotten. Or at the very least, forgiven." OLD: "I haven't forgotten the blackmailing. Or the Thorn Company." Cieli Le'vilja 65 "..Mm. Seems we're good friends, after all." OLD: "I think we would be good friends, if I were.. less Ailor." Vivana Avalorn 83 "I suspect it is our shared fate to dwell beneath fading trees, bound by past and duty until the world's ending." Bel-Gyarbrin Tibaerthus 70 "Loyalty, until the end. If there were a list of those I wished found peace, you would be high amongst them." Tirioc Mionther 45 "You did far more than heal my spine, I can promise you that." Avaineiral Rilynnlues 40 "At least we understand each other, now." Sae'viir 60 "I'd have stabbed me, too. My cowardice led to what you are today." Lorelei Morgan 40 "Good whiskey. Better company." Palina de Pierre 70 "Another apology. I wish I could do better." OLD: "I miss our talks, and the friendship you provided after everything." Erwin Braunschweiger 50 "I don't envy you, having that sword in your head." OLD: "You're halfway there." Lynmar Lomstedt 50 "Hah. And cracked on, you certainly have." OLD: "You know what you did wrong. You know what you must do. ..So crack on with it." Cordenia Zylmoira 80 "Ah. You could do better than me." OLD: "Maybe. Hopefully." OLD: "You remarked once on the likeness of our souls. I will try to prove you right, for as long as I can." Valarosta Ino-Femunn 50 "Living proof that anyone can change." Anathema 75 "Dying's a little easier, if you're the first face I see when I wake." OLD: "It's not fair that I have to choose. Praying I get away with not having to." OLD: "Monsters are rare. Often it is just the broken, and those who wish to mend them. I know now that you are the latter." OLD: "I can't say I trust you, fully. But I trust the cause you claim to serve." Nerissa 45 "Funny to think I used to chase you down, as a bounty hunter. How things change." Abigail Tucker 40 "..Sometimes I almost forget that you nearly killed me, once." Xilthruum 80 "Maybe you should've read more books." OLD: "Your life may not be mine to take. But I will be there to help bring you to justice." Lyonel Deceres 50 "How would you see me, if you knew?" Elaena Solisti 60 "I'm sorry." Leuthien 60 "There is goodness in you. I know it." Eponia Eledhwen 55 "Certainly my favourite Lion Pelt, so far." OLD: "Yeah. You're alright." Bellaire Raphellia 65 "Don't change." OLD: "Flowers. Books. Pens. Harrowing reminders." Marie-Paule Delmotte 35 "I wish I'd been there to stop what happened. Poor kid." Howland von Schwarzkrau 65 "I know you're trying your best. Just wish it wasn't in a way that was so damned annoying, sometimes." OLD: "Don't throw your life away. That's my job." OLD: "The knight I realised I couldn't be." Rowena 60 "Mean. Sarcastic. Entirely untrustworthy. I'm sure we'll be fine." Lhoris 50 "I can't help you, in loneliness. Any more than I can help myself. Maybe I shouldn't try." Therese Braunschweiger 70 "I'm almost thankful it was the ocean that took her, instead of a vampire. Maybe I would have become like you." OLD: "I wish you could see." Cadwyn 70 "Your turn for the hero act." OLD: "Sorry for letting the side down." Carmen 60 "Good pasta. Weird paintings." Maiyusa 70 "I'm your friend. Please remember that." OLD: "Always needed a wingman." Noor 75 "Don't want you to leave. But you will." Argo Drresal 55 "World needs more soldiers like you." Haqet 55 "There's nothing I can do to you that will be worse than the guilt you will feel. I'm sorry." Kelemvor 40 "No, no. Just plain old murderous." OLD: "Misunderstood, or murderous? Or both?" Sempronia 25 "I've seen worse hats. But you'll never hear me say it." Necratos 35 "Lunatic." Astrid 25 "Nice eyes." Imogen 55 "We could use your kind touch, when you return to duty." Signe 65 "Thank the Gods there's another person from Nordskag in this city." Rhain 65 "Steadfast. Reliable. I couldn't ask for anything more." Lisbeth 65 "You've got stuff, kid. As Cillian would say." Kaija Ragnvor 50 "It's nice to meet someone who might've had a similar, mundane time with Aelrrigan training." Gabrielle von Caldrin 70 "Why can't every person from Calemburg be like you?" Katriane Faulkner 65 "You're the one good thing that came out of proximity to the Howlesters, for so long." Zenya 40 "One of these days, we'll have dinner." Gyrivenn 55 "There's a good man, beneath the burden placed upon you." Necalli 50 "True aim, true heart. I wish I had an Archon friend like you when I was in training." Ailred 60 "Keep away from the whispers of Caius. Please." Auriane Belrose 65 "You're my favourite Ithanian." Reyna 45 "I haven't forgotten who you were. Even if you have." Markus Delmotte 45 "I can't tell if you actually like me, or if you need me for one of your schemes. Suppose we'll find out." Rayne 65 "Live by the sword.." Rosalleia 70 "I couldn't have come back without you." Cedromar 75 "Don't lead me astray." Nym'vrae Helvath 90 "We had forever to go."
Here's my review. Please put the expansions into spoilers. It makes it pretty difficult to review when there's a lot of padding around the sheet, but I commend you on filling out all of the expansions. Unfortunately you cannot be born into nobility unless you are a part of a registered, played noble family. Make the edits in red and tag me when you're done.
@Winterless Hi, sunshine! You have one too many languages - Common is no longer a free language and, at ten years per language, the character would only have access to two languages. Make this lil' change and tag me when you're done!
@Athelois Needs re-review I changed some of the personality bits and changed the culture of my character, as well as some of the proficiency.
Hello Winterless, here is my review for your character: Body Shape: Racial boosted proficiency points do not contribute to body stat, either alter the body shape or change the stat allocation accordingly. Once you've made the necessary edits, please tag me and I'll take another look.
@Arendan Redid my proficiency stuff and changed some of the dates on my life story to account for recent changes to School of Knights tuition length.
@Arendan added some nicknames that he's acquired that I forgot about on the sheet, changed my proficiencies to reflect Violet Order membership, and put a number on his agnosticism to take advantage of Allfaiths bonus.
@Arendan Fixed up the proficiencies in accordance with the new Ailor boost, and changed up some info that was out of date on the sheet, as well as adding a Breizh name in parallel with his Common name.
@Arendan Increased his height to 6'6 and dropped his body shape to Ripped, more in-line with the "tall and wiry" aesthetic I want for him, and because the elves were making me feel emasculated and that's not good :( Oh yeah also redid his profs since Violet Order boosts are being removed soon so might as well get it done tbh