Basic Information Full Name: Fudail Ajmal Bashshar Age: 40, born July 7th 266 AC Gender: Male Race: Pure Qadir Main Ambition: Fudail’s main ambition as of now is to remain successful as a guard. Special Permission: School of Lancyon - Expert Skill Information School: Lancyon Level: Expert Source: Attended Lancyon School Visual Information Eye Color: Brown Hair Color: Black Hair Style: Medium length, messy. He also has a small goatee on his chin, and a little bit of stubble. Skin Color: Darkish brown Clothing: Anything with the color silver or dark orange. Height: 6 feet tall. Body Build: Athletic Weapon of Choice: Halberd, or Longsword. ______________________________ Visual Information Spoiler: Visual Information When it comes to Fudail's face, he doesn't have a very complicated one. His eyes are a simple soft ball shape, his mouth looks like there are two small apple slices on his face, his ears are small but not abnormally small, his forehead is 2 1/2 inches up from his eyebrows but his hair covers most of his forehead. Since Fudail is a very serious man, he doesn't really smile randomly. When he is walking around Regalia he usually has a serious expression to show others that he can be professional. Fudail's hair style is very simple, it's a curly mess. His hair color is a charcoal black with specks of dark grey. Fudail also has a beard that is the same color as his hair and eyebrows. His eyebrows aren't too bushy but they aren't to thin. Now, he has a neck tattoo that goes all the way around and ends near his collar bones. He decided to get this out of random. Fudail's body shape is very "manly", he has a good amount of muscle from teaching himself how to fight with a sword, training within the lancyon school, and by just exercising in general. Fudail isn't too tall but he isn't to short. But he was taller than his older sister by a 1 foot and 3 inches. Fudail's weight is mostly made up of muscle, when it comes to fat he has some on his thighs. He is very skinny but his muscles make up for everything else. Fudail's skin is just a dark brown color, the only place where the color is different is in places where the sun can't get to. Fudail's muscles aren't to visible but they're there. If you get punched or pushed by Fudail you'll definitely feel how strong he is. Fudail doesn't have a lot of fat on his body, the only place he could develop fat would be on his hips. Fudail doesn't have a lot of body hair, he only grows a small beard and that's about it. Fudail's fashion sense is very dull. He doesn't like to wear anything else but pants and a simple shirt. Fudail's preferred colors are silver or orange. When it comes to weapons, Fudail is always carrying his Halberd that his sister gave him when he was 17. Other items Fudail always carries is his Halberd, and keys to his house. Personality and Abilities Fudail is perceived as a gentle brute, most would say. He's very kind, whenever he feels the need to be kind. Occasionally, when Fudail is irritated or angry he'll look rude or intimidating which could ruin his first impression. Otherwise, when first meeting Fudail, most would think he's strange because of his accent or the way he examine someone when meeting them for the first time. But other than that, Fudail can be perceived as a very kind and caring person, unless he has a strong hatred for someone. Fudail feels very confident in himself, and his skills. The only time Fudail doubts his abilities is when he is in a situation that he can't handle, or when It comes to dealing with large bodies of water. Or if there is an 'enemy' that is too much for him to handle. Overall, Fudail is a pretty self-assured person. Times when he isn't a very "self-assured" person, Is when someone brings up his past, his fears of losing someone he loves, or public speaking. When it comes down to it, he gets nervous doing/speaking about those three topics. Fudail is very loving and caring for those he is close to. Whether the person is a lover, a family member, or a friend, Fudail will always be by their side when they need it. Fudail is perceived as the father that most haven't had to his close friends. This is because he is willing to do anything to protect the people he loves. When around a lover, he’s goofy and flirty only in private. But in private he’s very ‘romantic’. Fudail's morality is overall pretty good, just like any other loyal Regalian citizen. He does well and, there isn't really an in-between. The only time Fudail will do anything good out of the ordinary is when he's saving or helping someone in need. Now, if Fudail does something bad, which is unlikely, It will more than likely be because of the same reason. Fudail's relationship with the guards are pretty strong, because he is one. As well as his relationship with the law. Talents Persuasive - Given the right time and the drive, Fudail can convince almost anyone to do anything. From little favor to life changing events, he enjoys changing the courses of people's lives as a game. He doesn't mean to harm them, but if it helps or entertains him, he will. Sometimes this can lead to him being manipulative. Skilled Fighter - Over the years Fudail has had to defend himself with his Halberd. Since he has had his Halberd and trained with it for 30 years he can deal some damage. He has spent many years perfecting his fighting technique, but he only wants to use it if he or his friends/family are in danger. Now, being a guard he also only uses his skill if a criminal is threatening his life and the lives around him. Relationships & Skills/Quirks Spoiler Skills - Cooking (7/10) - Fudail can cook anything from a big meaty steak, to a nice bowl of soup. So far he knows most recipes and makes his own. He’s favorite recipe so far is his Falconet Jewel Jelly. Baking (5/10) - When it comes to baking, Fudail is pretty good. So far he can only bake Pies and small pastries. His favorite Pie to bake is a Dragonet Apple Pie. Quirks - Nervous/embarrassed - Fudail tends to scratch the back of his neck whenever he’s Nervous and/or Embarrassed. He also tends to say ‘Heh.’ at the endings of his sentences as well. Relationships Family - Aisha Bashshar - Sister Friends - Bangsi Ingolfsson - @HigherAltidude Wolfgang Drache - @Nitesho Raina Vauclain/Wodenstaff - @Nesstro Juliette Vauclain/Wodenstaff - @AtticCat Helene du Polignac - @SpinSpinDizzy Gregor Typhonus - @Greenie Raja Ahmad - @Betel_ (If I forgot your character let me know) Lover - N/A Other - Garret Ames - Frenemies - @Varisus Kelbi - Pet dog Life Story Fudail was born on July 7th 257 AC in Regalia, when he was born his parents disappeared after 3 months. This made life hard for his 15 year old sister Aisha. Fudail didn't have an exciting life, all he really did during his childhood was learn and explore. Fudail was a very adventurous child, which lead him to get in trouble a lot. But overall Fudail was very respectful and helpful until his teen years. When Fudail turned 15 he didn't listen to anyone, he would rebel against his sisters rules. Fudail would sneak out during curfews, but he didn't lose his respect for anyone else. Since he got in trouble a lot he would get attacked for stealing, so Aisha gave him a sword. When he was 17 he started training with a sword Aisha gave him when he was 15. When Fudail turned 25 he met his first sweetheart. Milo Clemons was a very beautiful woman, she had long straight blond hair with baby blue eyes. When they first met they instantly fell for each other. They where together for a good 5 months until Milo became very obsessive and jealous. After he left Milo he decided to shut himself off from society to focus on his main goal, which was training himself to wield a sword and learn how to fight with accuracy. Instead, he decided to train within the Lancyon Halberd school. Now he has opened himself up to society and can be seen roaming around regalia normally. But he likes to keep his head low ever since the Qadir took over Regalia. When he heard of the news, he disapproved of it. He always wondered why the Qadir would take over Regalia. Since he grew up in Regalia he was angered by this, and now other Regalians are looking down on him because he's a Qadir. After the Qadir took over Regalia he decided to go hide away in Hyarroc, until he got the news of the war. He's now back in Regalia, training his heart away to defend the Holy City. Within weeks of being back in the City, Fudail became apart of the Regalian guard where he made some friends. Sometime after he arrived back in Regalia, he met a Qadir named Raja Ahmad. Since then they have decided to court. Soon after that, Fudail applied and was accepted into being a guard for House Ravenstad. Later, he quit guarding for that house to join the Wodenstaff house guard to work with his courtship partner, Raja.
Here's my review - Skill Information The School of Leadership's Discipline of Battle Command requires actual attendance at the school in order to learn it. I.E, you can't just learn through tutoring/mentorship. Visual Information Given that body build exists, you'll need to remove the exact weight of the character. Personality and Abilities The second paragraph should elaborate more on his fears and anxieties. Life Story State specifically where he was born. Mark these changes in red and tag me when you're done.
I still take issue with the fact that Fudail went to the School of Lancyon and became Expert then went off to the School of Leadership. There's a clear distinction between fighting schools and the school of leadership, so preferably they shouldn't be mixed. The other changes seem fine, however, so if you fix this I think we can go ahead with approva.
