Preserved Sheet Fathiyaa Nasir Ramoran

[Surrealizm]

Gg you removed your title Amps

 

[HydraLana]

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Please fix this incorrect statement of Physical Stat, as you didn't update it along with the changes you made to Proficiencies.

 

[Ampers07]

Please fix this incorrect statement of Physical Stat, as you didn't update it along with the changes you made to Proficiencies.

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fml

 

[HydraLana]

Approved.

 

[Ampers07]

jbouanebuoaerbor @HydraLana I added her new art and kicked the tag idfk

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana tis ready for a re-review, updates in green!

 

[HydraLana]

My sole point of review is to ask:

+18 (+13 Age, +5 Points)

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What is this? You don't link it to any Proficiency and the way its points are divided up suggest that it somehow gets points from a source that isn't her age? And yet, that is the only possible factor.

Tag me once this has been fixed.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana I had forgotten to update the points XD they're updated in green up thur.

 

[HydraLana]

Approved.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana Redid some formatting and updated her religion in green.

 

[HydraLana]

Re-Approved.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana Need a re-review, She got married, added a relationship and a bit of update to her history in green

 

[HydraLana]

Re-Approved.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana Updated again with the divorce!

 

[HydraLana]

Re-Approved.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana Wiggled some things around on her points in green!

 

[Caelamus]

Approved @Ampers07

 

[Ampers07]

@Caelamus Heyo! I finally finished the overhall! This needs a full-review now!

 

[Caelamus]

Approved @Ampers07

 

[Ampers07]

@Caelamus Made the updates with the Profs in green!

 

[Caelamus]

Approved.

 

[HydraLana]

Approved.

 

[HydraLana]

Re-Approved.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana The tag came off that's all.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana Updated along with the sorcery update!

 

[HydraLana]

Re-Approved.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana Sort of just did a good or rewrite! Everything needs a look over in green!

 

[HydraLana]

@HydraLana Sort of just did a good or rewrite! Everything needs a look over in green!

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Please remove the Ritualism abilities based on the announcement this morning in the RP Com.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana Fixed

 

[HydraLana]

Re-Approved.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana Sorry, moved some proofs around for some things in green..

 

[HydraLana]

Re-Approved.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana Full Review! Updating her just incase.

 

[HydraLana]

@Ampers07 The sole point of review is that some of your math is off in the Proficiency section, you appear to be over? But your Hobby section also has less points invested than claimed, so I am unsure of where the error is. Please fix this math and tag me once you are done.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana You were right, my points in the hobby section was off. It should be right now in green!

 

[HydraLana]

Re-Approved.

 

[Ampers07]

@HydraLana reworked her points a little bit, they're in green!

 

[Volaie]

Claimed for review!

 

[Volaie]

RE-APPROVED.​