✦ General info ✦Full Name: Evelyn Ravensong Age: 25 Gender: female Race: Drahl Ailor Sexuality: Bisexual Preferred Weapon: Rapier/ Epees Spirit Familiar: a Crow Named Raven ✦ Skill Information ✦50 Core Points | 10 Hobby Points | 5 Racial Points | 0 points to learn in RP __________________________________________________ Core Group Proficiencies ♦ +20 [Core and racial] Rapier Combat ♦ +10 [Core] Medical Science ♦ +5 [Core] Alchemy ScienceTalent Group Proficiencies ♦ +5 [Core] Perception TrainingHobby Group Proficiencies ♦ +5 [Hobby] Circus Art ♦ +5 [Hobby] Vocal ArtOther Proficiencies ♦ +3 [Core] Paleblood ♦ +3 [Core] Arcanery ♦ +6 [Core] Sorcery ♦ +3 [Core] Natural Sciences School ✦ Body Type ✦♦ Physical Stat: 25 [Drahl Ailor at 30] ♦ x1 = Rapier Combat, ♦ x0,5 = Circus Art, ♦ 20 Rapier Combat, 5 Circus, ♦ 20 + 5 ♦ 25 = 25 Body Shape: Slim Body Shape Body Fat: Low Body Fat ✦ Languages ✦Common Skodje ✦ Special Traits ✦ Racial Traits Spoiler: Battle Sense I [Control Power / Emote Distance] The user may activate this Control Power on anyone in range, attaching to them like a Mobile Channel. While it is maintained, the user may choose one of the target’s Melee Combat Proficiencies and increase it by +5 Proficiency Points that may break the Cap for Proficiency. The user may only move at walking speed, must have the target within viewing distance, and the user may also not be attacked themselves. Knocking over or otherwise removing the focus from the user on the target cancels the effect. Additionally, the user gains the Constant Passive Omniaware 1 while this Ability remains active. While Battle Sense 1 is active, the user may not use other Abilities. Spoiler: Spirit Familiar I [Toggle Passive / Self] The user must choose an animal from the Animals Page (barring Magus or Dragon) species. This choice is permanent, and must be mentioned on the Character Application. Once chosen, the user may choose to manifest and remove smaller visual and aesthetic changes to their body from the animal chosen, but never so thoroughly that it mimics a Werebeast, Allar, or Asha. Secondly, they may summon a magical looking familiar of the animal chosen that may never be larger than a domestic cat regardless of original size of the animal, but may also be smaller depending on the preference of the user. This familiar can carry a single object on them, but may never enter combat, and is disabled for 1 hour if hit by any Ability or Attack. If a Magical aesthetic is not desired, a Mundane creature can also appear to the Character in their childhood and stay with them, with this Ability applying to them, with all other rules. The Mundane creature gains a lifespan as long as the user. Spoiler: Honed Skill III [Constant Passive / Self] Choose Metallurgy, Arcanology, or Linguistics. If at least 3 points are invested in the chosen Proficiency, choose a single 3 Proficiency costing “Pack” for free additionally. This Pack does not contribute to the maximum Packs possible for this Proficiency at max Point investment. If none of these are chosen, nothing is gained. Sorcery Spoiler: Darkness 2 [Magic Spell / Emote Distance] The user can cast this Magic spell at a Target with a projectile that is a guaranteed hit as long as there is line of sight. When hit, the Target becomes affected with Magical Blindness (requiring the player to use /trait add Blindness) for the duration of 30 minutes. Only one Darkness II may be active at any time, and when the effect is broken on the first target, only then does the Ability go on a 2 hour cooldown. If Darkness 2 was cast, another user may not cast Darkness 2 in the same Emote Area as the first for a full hour. Spoiler: Element Brand 1 [Object Enchant/ Self] This Ability allows the user to Enchant their melee weapon with an Ice or Water enchant that makes the weapon watery and dripping or dusting with frost and white. Additionally, anyone struck with this weapon becomes unable to move at a speed greater than walking speed. Parrying does not count as being hit, while being hit on the armor does. The effect lasts for 1 minute, and while being hit multiple times does not stack this effect, it does refresh every time the opponent is hit. The Enchant lasts for 30 minutes and can only be used by the user, if they hand the weapon off or attempt to Enchant anyone else’s weapon, the Ability simply does not work. This Ability has no Cooldown. Arcanology Spoiler: Ward Knowledge Grants the Character the Ability to destroy 1 Ability Ward of any type (Mage, Archblood, Vampire, etc., except if it specifically has a no-counter rule) by using a mundane mixture of Magestone dust, Holy Water, and some other secret ingredients written from ancient books. When having this Ability, the Character is permitted to always carry one pouch with this mixture around which is enough to destroy one ward. The pouch refills 24 hours after use. Spoiler: Curing Knowledge The Character has an in-depth understanding of Vampire and Werebeast curing, able to acquire the materials for the curing and apply it in person. There is a limitation to this pack however. In order to choose this specific Knowledge pack, the Character must have 10 Medical Science Proficiency, otherwise they are not allowed to choose it. Genetics Traits Spoiler: Paleblood Being a Paleblood means that a Character's hair and skin lack pigment or melanin, always appearing very pale. It also causes their eyes to appear reddish-pink (not crimson red like Vampires). Paleblood Characters also have photosensitivity- bright or flashing lights hurt their eyes. However, all Paleblood Characters can see the Soul-Rivers of Aloria, similar to the Isldar. Palebloods have a strong position in any Old Gods culture, being considered touched by the Gods. ✦ Visual Information ✦ Spoiler: Picture of character Eye Color: Reddish-pink Hair Color:White Hair Style:long and Straight Skin:Pale Height:5’8ft ✦ Personality ✦ Alignment: True Neutral Personality Type: Logician Religion: Non Religion ✦ Life Story ✦ She was raised by her uncle who was working in a circus. She was told at an early age that her parents were good people and they may be gone now, but she is here and they would be proud of her. When she was 10 she started her training in the circus (Circus Art, Vocal Art), and she thought this was going to be her life, however, one day the circus went through a very poor village and she saw the sickness and death in front of her eyes. The circus decided to help by giving food to them and showing kindness, yet, they couldn't do anything else. This changed her view of things as she wanted to become a doctor. When she was 14. She saved up to go to school, and in the meantime she were training by her uncle sword fighting and to be observant.(Rapier combat, Sorcery) as the uncle was a warrior before, but retired to live more of a simple life. When she were 17. she finally got enough money to go to school and so went to Regalian Ecological Academy. (Natural Sciences School) While being in school, she taught herself more about medicine and alchemy. She also learnt to be more observant with how the research worked. (Medical Science, Alchemy Science, Perception Training) When she were 20 years old she finished her studies and so started traveling. Even if her hard work has made her distance torwards others, She still has worked her skills to be way better than she were before and helps others in need if needed.
@Noova_Art Here is my review: Basic Information - Your spirit familiar can't be a Dragon.Skill Information - No issues other than your choice of familiarVisual Information - No issuesPersonality - No issuesLife Story - No issues Please make the requested changes then tag me!
oh ok. I realized what Barring means and thought Barring Magnus was an animal xD I will change it right now
