Character Information Full Name: Elias Mathilda Breyer (von Lausitz) Race: Ailor (Wirtem culture) Age: 21 Sex: Female Eye Color: Muddy green Core Concept Elias is a faithful dogmatic-unionist Ailor with a very light leaning towards the Vierzehn schism. She believes unionism in practice and holds herself strongly to its core tenets, together with the base morals of Wirtem society. She is a young soldier fresh out from the Marshal academy and filled in the head with naïve optimism, nationalism and ambitions. Elias’ likely first challenge is facing reality as she enters service the first time outside the academy’s bounds. Proficiency Information Proficiencies: 15 - Greatsword (15 points) 15 - Brewing Art (10 Hobby points, 5 points) 10 - Perception (5 points, 5 culture boost) 8 - Heavy Ranged (8 points) 5 - Strength training (5 points) 7 - Unspent points (7 points) Physical stat: 30 (28, capped by culture & race to 25, +5 destined body) Ability Information Racial kit (Ailor, choice): Rogue Gift 2 Omniaware 1 Destined Body 1 From Proficiencies: Heavy Shot Knocking Shot Great Force 1 Languages Common (Free) Calem (Upbringing) Original by Seungyoon Lee Appearance Information Elias has no mutations visible or otherwise, neither does she have any major physical traits to note. She is a 5’11’’ woman of pale complexion, red hair and muddy green eyes. Her frame is muscular, and her body fat is average. She tends to wear her hair loose or in a braid, and dresses in flamboyant Calderliga fashion. Life Story Elias was born in Calemberg as the 8th child in a family of wealthy merchants & Bierhalle owners. She was raised to further the family business and learned the ins & outs of her culture, history and the profession of her family. Never content with brewing beer & serving it for a life, the girl always dreamed of adventure and seeing the world in service to the Empire. After finishing her apprenticeship, she left Calemberg to become a brewer’s aide in the Calderligan city of Übeck. The young Elias defied her father’s will and instead travelled to Regalia to join the Imperial Regalian Marshal Academy, driven by its recent opening to women. Through the years in the academy, she pursued her passion for adventure and battles and was nurtured into a competent (though young) soldier and field commander to lead fellow female soldiers. Elias left Regalia after graduation to make amends with her family and apologise to her father, who took the defiance lightly (for the sole reason his daughter ran away to become a soldier), who gave his blessing to her pursuits. She now sails to Regalia with a purse and her passion, seeking to pursue her naïve ambitions of service to nobility, the empire and triumph in battles. Progression Information Warrior - 2 (Archetype: greatsword landsknecht & crossbowman) General - 1 (Archetype: field commander)
@Luxus07 Seems fine to me, there's nothing that immediately jumps out to me and the application is very well done. Approved.