Efraín Serrano Flores De La Paradis

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    Basic Information

    Full name: Efrain Serrano Flores de la Paradis; Efi Flores to most
    Age: 27 years old, born in the Spring of 281 AC
    Gender: Male
    Race: Ailor (Daendroque)
    Sexuality: Heterosexual
    Preferred weapon: A sharp dagger with a heart-shaped pommel

    Skill Information

    Total points: 32 (27 + 5) from age, and 10 hobby points
    • Combat Proficiency
      • 15 Fast Blade Combat Skill
      • 10 Unarmed Combat Skill
    • Criminal Proficiency
      • 5 Conning Rogue Skill
      • 2 Dextrous Rogue Skill
    • Arts Proficiency
      • 10 Musical Arts, hobby points
    Body shape:
    • 25 Physical Stat (15 x 1 + 10 x 1)
    • Muscular Body Shape
    • Low Body Fat
    Languages:
    • Daendroquin (native, from parents) -- A stark contrast to his common, Efraín's Daendroquin is particularly well-spoken, and if not for his habitual cussing would border on posh. His parents placed a heavy emphasis on outward appearances and were frequently in contact with the upper-class, and so Efi had a lot of exposure to cleanly-spoken Daendroquin for most of his youth.
    • Common (learned in childhood) -- Picked up mainly from the streets during his youth, Efi's common is fluent but improper; he uses heavy slang and never learned to conceal his thick Daen accent, and so he is noticeably foreign just by his voice.
    Special traits:
    • None
    Visual Information

    Eye colour: Dark brown
    Hair colour: Very dark brown
    Hair style: Long; swept backwards; pushed behind his ears
    Skin colour: Olive
    Clothing: Traditional, warm colours; long, sleeveless coat; heavy boots; multitudes of bangles and earrings
    Height: 6’0”

    Personality and Abilities

    The Core List

    Character alignment: True neutral -- "True neutral characters are concerned with their own well-being and that of the group or organisation which aids them. They may behave in a good manner to those that they consider friends and allies, but will only act maliciously against those who have tried to injure them in some way. For the rest, they do not care."
    Personality type:
    The Entrepreneur -- "Entrepreneurs always have an impact on their immediate surroundings – the best way to spot them at a party is to look for the whirling eddy of people flitting about them as they move from group to group. Laughing and entertaining with a blunt and earthy humour"
    Religion: Unionism (2 out of 10)

    Weaknesses:
    • Defensive, and stubborn -- whilst it may come across as a sign of good-will when Efi defends his friends, in truth he just enjoys the chance to flex his quick tongue and the thrill of the argument. Given the sour company he keeps and his lack of combat training in comparison to them, he often finds himself on the wrong side of a fight; this, combined with an iron-willed stubbornness, means Efi will sooner find himself beaten half to death than backing down.
    • Distrustful -- given his own nature, Efi is acutely aware that others might not be as genuine as they seem. Although he is happy to drink and be merry and share stories with anyone he might meet, it takes a special set of circumstances for someone to find themselves a true friend of Efi; however, once Efi considers someone a true friend, he'll be at their side forevermore.
    • Often impulsive -- even though Efi is usually rather charming, or at the very least tactful, he's easily bored and will cause trouble for himself in efforts to be entertained. If there's an opportunity around for a cheeky quip to be made, he'll take it; this is especially true if his friends are around.

    Relations:
    To be completed.

    Life Story

    Childhood
    • [0] - Efraín Flores was born in the Spring of 281 AC in La Portée du Paradis (Havenreach), to a family of middle-class classical artists. His family traded in art and music, and the children were largely allowed to focus on where their aptitudes naturally lay. With life being so simple in the port town, it allowed for the family to invest most of their money in improving outward appearances, and so they largely appeared more wealthy than they actually were; they lived on simple meals and in simple beds, but wore fanciful clothes and jewellery.
    • [1-3] - Efi was raised to learn Daendroquin as his first language, with sprinklings of common heard around town. During this time his parents had two more children, a brother named Felipe and a sister after him, Magdalena.
    • [4-9] - Little Flores was less talented than his father had hoped; in a youth of study Efraín garnered only a subpar skill in music, and so as his brother and sister grew older his parents' focus was primarily upon them, leaving Efi to pursue interests of his own.
    Adolescence
    • [10-12] - Even by twelve Efraín already developed the attitude that would stick with him for life. He was playful and full of confidence; and he started to develop a natural ability to get away with the misdeeds any young man would hope to, due to his cheeky grin and an affinity for simple lies.
    • [13-15] - Efi's attitude started to become a problem for him and his parents. His quick tongue led him into frequent trouble, and it was rare he'd go a month without a black eye or cut lip from a fight with the local boys; over the years, he was exposed to a lot of fights and opportunities to hone his tongue.
    • [16] - An arranged marriage was organised for Efi, unbeknownst to him at the time.
    • [17] - A few months after turning seventeen, Efraín's father revealed to him his bride-to-be, and the young daen thought the idea abhorrent. He could imagine nothing more terrible than being stuck for life with someone he barely knew, and so he did everything he could to dissuade his parents, but it was to little avail. Seeing that his parents were unable to be convinced of his right to romance a girl of his choice, he instead opted to dissuade his bride's father, and so he spent much of his time being a nuisance to the family in the hopes the wedding would be called off.
    • [18] - Eventually his idea was bore fruit, and after many months of delays his bride's father cancelled the plans to wed his daughter to Efraín. His father was incredibly disappointed at Efi's constant misbehaviour, and issued him an ultimatum: Efi would buckle up with the family business, start to remove the marks from his reputation, and find himself a wife, or he would be kicked out of his parents' home.
    Adulthood
    • [19-20] - Despite a pitiful few weeks of trying, Efi had a natural distaste for authority and obedience, and so he soon gave up on the ultimatum delivered to him. He continued to brawl and lie to get his way, but by now he returned home with far fewer cut lips; and as he and the town boys got older, fights got more dangerous, and so Efi started to carry with him a simple dagger he'd purchased in secret and kept hidden from his family.
    • [21] - On his twenty-first, his father's ultimatum was finally delivered. Efi was cast from home. His parents weren't cruel, however, and gave him money enough to safely start a life of his own. Efraín decided to take a ship over to the City of Daenshore.
    • [22-26] - Over the next few years Efi travelled with most of his time. He quickly wasted away his money in bars and lost a large amount gambling, and so he was forced to find work sooner than he would have liked. He decided to put his childhood brawling and skill with small blades to use, and began to work as a sell-sword, drifting from town to town alongside parties in need of him.
    • [26] - Marking five years since leaving home, Efi decided he was ready to find a place to settle, at least for a little while. He set his sights upon the city of Regalia, and he spent the following year slowly making his way there.
    • [27] - A short amount of time past his twenty-seventh birthday, Efraín arrived at the city he'd been aiming for with little more than the clothes he wore and a dagger carefully nestled in his boot.
     
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    • Whilst the content is largely the same, life story has been rewritten in a clearer format and with a few details changed to better suit how I've been playing Efi
    • Modified proficiencies to match the updated life story
    • Aesthetic changes
    In need of a re-review,
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